1. Editing parragraphs Improve coherence 0

2. To improve the coherence and flow of ideas in the paragraph, which of these would be the best way to revise sentence 1 Sentence: (1) the discovery channel is a good channel. (2) I saw a program on the coasts of Australia. (3) It showed the beaches in Australia. (4) It also showed the wild sea life. (5) I liked the different resorts. (6) After the program I would like to visit Australia. Answer choices: A.The discovery channel, is a good channel. B.a good channel to watch is Discovery Channel. C.I like watching the Discovery Channel D.Many people watch discovery channel. 1

3. To improve the coherence and flow of ideas in the paragraph, which of these would be the best way to revise sentence 1 Sentence: (1) The Amazon jungle is an interesting place. (2) I saw a monkey up high on the trees. (3) I also saw some tarantulas as big as my hand. (4) There was a huge waterfall and an amazing river. (5) It rains there a lot, but it’s never cold. (6)It is a tropical place where many creatures live. Answer choices: A.I would like to visit the Amazon Jungle. B.Last summer I went to the Amazon jungle. C.My mom went to the Amazon jungle last year. D.Have you ever been in the Amazon Jungle? 2

4. To improve the coherence and flow of ideas in the paragraph, which of these would be the best way to revise sentence 1 Sentence: (1) Surfers are cool people. (2) At the beach they might find sharks. (3) They also could encounter strong waves. (4) Some surfers have drawn because of strong currents. (5) Surfing in the middle of the ocean can be very dangerous. Answer choices: A.Surfing is a good sport B.Surfing is fun and also very dangerous C.Surfers are daring people D.Would you like surfing? 3

5. To improve the coherence and flow of ideas in the paragraph, which of these would be the best way to revise sentence 1 Sentence: (1) Plasma TVs are expensive. (2) They make radioactive rays. (3) The light they make is dangerous for our eyes. (4) Plasma TVs have proven to cause cancer. (5) Besides people waste their lives in front of them. (6) Plasma TVs prevent people form doing exercise. (7) People with plasma TVs usually become obese with time. (8)Plasma TVs are unhealthy. Answer choices: A.Plasma TVs are awesome devices B.Plasma TVs are harmful to the environment C.Plasma TVs have awesome definition D.Plasma TVs show wonderful things 4

6. To improve the coherence and flow of ideas in the paragraph, which of these would be the best way to revise sentence 1 Sentence: (1) Plasma TVs are expensive. (2) They make time pass fast. (3) The pictures they bring are almost real. (4) Because of higher resolution we can see discoveries more clear. (5) Having a plasma TV is like taking a trip around the world. (6) You could also do exercise in front of your plasma TV. (7) People with plasma TVs usually become knowledgeable with time. (8)Plasma TVs are awesome devices. Answer choices: A.Plasma TVs are expensive devices B.Plasma TVs are good for doing exercise. C.Plasma TVs have awesome definition D.Plasma TVs show wonderful things 5