2The Free Response Question The FRQ is an essay that must be written in 35 minutesYou must write two on the College Board ExamOn the College Board Exam you will have two groups of three essay prompts.You must choose one essay from each group of three.The two FRQs constitute 27.5% of your score on the College Board Exam.13.75% eachThe essay is scored out of nine.Ordinarily a 6 out of 9 would be awful, but in Euro a 6 on an essay puts you right on pace for a 5 on the exam.
3The Rubric Strong Essays earn a 8-9 THESIS: Clear, well-developed, answers the prompt and guides the essay throughoutUNDERSTANDING: Demonstrates thorough understanding of complexity of topicEVIDENCE: Supports thesis with frequent, specific, and relevantevidence/examples/proofANALYSIS: Effectively analyzes, interprets, makes inferences ofERRORS: May contain insignificant and infrequent errors that do not hinder arguments OR no errors entirelyORGANIZATION: Essay is well-organized (contains introduction, topic sentences, unity of paragraphs, conclusion)
4The Rubric Good Essays earn a 5-7 THESIS: Has a thesis (perhaps superficial/simplistic) which addresses promptUNDERSTANDING: Demonstrates general understanding of the topicEVIDENCE: Supports thesis with evidence/examples/proof, sometimes general or narrative in descriptionANALYSIS: Analyzes, interprets, makes inferences of evidence/examples/proof, often general or narrativeERRORS: May contain minor errors that do not interfere with comprehensionORGANIZATION: Essay contains most elements of organization
5The Rubric Poor Essays earn a 2-4 THESIS: Limited, confused, or poorly developed thesis which may simply restate the prompt or is weakly organizedUNDERSTANDING: Demonstrates simplistic understanding of the topicEVIDENCE: Contains limited evidence/examples/proof which is usually general or narrative in descriptionANALYSIS: Contains limited or simple analysis, interpretation, inferences of evidence/examples/proofERRORS: May contain major historical errorsORGANIZATION: Essay contains limited elements of organization
6The Rubric Awful Essays earn a 0-1 THESIS: No thesis or a thesis that does not address the topicUNDERSTANDING: Demonstrates little or no understanding of the topicEVIDENCE: Contains inappropriate/inaccurate or no evidence/examples/proofANALYSIS: Contains no analysis of evidence/examples/proof, or is inappropriate/inaccurateERRORS: May contain numerous errors; both major and minorORGANIZATION: Essay contains no organization nor structure
7Structure of the EssayThe essay consists of an introduction paragraph, body paragraphs, and preferably a concluding paragraph.The intro establishes your viewpoint and outlines what your body paragraphs will be about in a thesis statement.The body paragraphs back up your viewpoint and thesis.The conclusion wraps up the essay, and answers the question “so what?”
8Step #1Read the question multiple times until you understand what you need to do.Discuss how Renaissance ideas are expressed in the Italian art of the period, referring to specific works and artistsFor our 1st FRQ we will develop a thesis for this prompt and work our way through the sections of the essay
9Directives of the Question The second step in writing an essay is to see what action the essay prompt is telling you to do.Failure to pay attention to these directives will result in a lower score.Analyze: Break a subject down into parts, assess the connections between facts, answer how and why"Analyze the major social and technological changes that took place in European warfare between 1789 and 1871.“Assess/Evaluate: Determine the validity of a statement, analyze positives and negatives, form an opinion“`Luther was both a revolutionary and a conservative.' Evaluate this statement with respect to Luther's responses to the political and social questions of his day.““Assess the extent to which the Protestant Reformation promoted new expectations about social roles in the sixteenth century. Refer to at least two social groups in your response.”
10DirectivesCompare: Analyze two or more things in order to show similarities and differences“Compare and contrast the attitudes of Martin Luther and John Calvin toward political authority and social order.”Contrast: Examine two or more things in order to show differences“Contrast European diplomacy in the periods 1890 to 1914 and 1918 to 1939, respectively. Include in analysis goals, practices, and results.”Structure of compare/contrast essaysIt is important to have your body paragraphs centered on topicsYou do not want to separate the two things being compared and write separate paragraphs for each.In the above example your three paragraph topics are already laid out in the prompt: goals, practices, and results
11The Layers of a Question In order to properly answer the essay question you must break the prompt down and see all of its layers.Sometimes these things seem obvious, but when students are rushed to write an essay they will often forget about part of the question and lose points.Take the time to underline key phrases and determine what needs to be included into your essay.“Discuss how Renaissance ideas are expressed in the Italian art of the period, referring to specific works and artists.”This question asks you to discuss (the same as analyze)Time period: Renaissance, anything straying from this time period will not be scoredLocation: ItalyThe writer must identify “Renaissance ideas” and must show how these ideas influenced “Italian art” using specific art pieces and artists
12The Layers of a Question “Compare and contrast political liberalism with political conservatism in the first half of the nineteenth century in Europe”What is the directive?Compare and contrastWhat is the location?All of EuropeWhen?The first half of the nineteenth centuryWhat must you do?Find similarities and differences between political liberalism and political conservatism
13BrainstormAfter reading and re-reading the question, identifying the directive, and analyzing all the layers of the question, you must brainstorm.Think of everything that is related to the topic given.Try to decide what information is relevant to the question.Try to think of three subtopics.Put the relevant information into the subtopics.Keep your brainstorm organized by creating a T-chart.
14Brainstorm To categorize information think of PERSIA Political EconomicReligiousSocialIntellectualArtisticSometimes (but not always) these can be used as subtopics.
15BrainstormDiscuss how Renaissance ideas are expressed in the Italian art of the period, referring to specific works and artists
16TimingThe reading and re-reading of the question, analysis of the directive, finding the layers of the question, and brainstorm should take the first five minutes of your essay writing time.5/35 total minutesWriting the essay should take the remaining thirty minutes
17The Introduction Paragraph Discuss how Renaissance ideas are expressed in the Italian art of the period, referring to specific works and artistsThe introduction paragraph establishes your viewpoint and contains a well-developed thesis.The first sentence establishes what your essay will be about.Do not hint at a thesis statement in this sentence,DO NOT restate the question.A good first sentence:The Italian Renaissance created new ideas that most visibly manifested themselves in the arts.
18The Thesis The thesis statement follows the first sentence Discuss how Renaissance ideas are expressed in the Italian art of the period, referring to specific works and artistsThe thesis statement follows the first sentenceIt is one or two sentences long.It fully answers the question and establishes your subtopics (body paragraph topics).WITHOUT A STRONG THESIS IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO EARN A GOOD SCOREAnswer the essay prompt that is given to you. Do not bend the prompt to be what you want it to be.The thesis must fully answer the questionBecause there are generally three body paragraphs the thesis should include three topics.The thesis should answer how and why.The thesis is general, DO NOT INCLUDE SPECIFIC EXAMPLESAn example of a strong thesis:Renaissance humanism led to the creation of art that reflected the art of antiquity, and the Renaissance emphasis on the individual led to the rise of art that more accurately portrayed individuals. Furthermore, the Renaissance secular spirit which emphasized life on Earth as opposed to the afterlife led to a greater attempt by artists to realistically portray the world.
19A Bad Example“Discuss how Renaissance ideas are expressed in the Italian art of the period, referring to specific works and artists.” Renaissance ideas are expressed in the Italian art of the period. These ideas were shown in the art of the day, such as the art of daVinci, Michelangelo, and Raphael.Why is this a bad example?The first sentence simply restates the question.The thesis does not identify Renaissance ideas.The subtopics named are specific artists, which the question asks to be included somewhere in the essay. However, no correlation is made between the effect of Renaissance ideas on these artists pieces.
20A good example Good example: “Discuss how Renaissance ideas are expressed in the Italian art of the period, referring to specific works and artists.”Good example:The Italian Renaissance created new ideas which manifested themselves in the arts. Renaissance humanism led to the creation of art that inspired by antiquity, and the Renaissance interest in the power of the individual led to a new emphasis of portrait painting. Furthermore, the secular spirit of the Renaissance, which emphasized life on Earth as opposed to the afterlife led to a greater attempt by artists to realistically portray their world.
21The Body ParagraphsThe body paragraphs include all of the information that proves your thesis.Each body paragraph relates to one of the subtopics.By proving each subtopic, you will prove the thesis.The first body paragraph relates to the first subtopic, the second body paragraph to the second subtopic and so on and so forth. Keep things in order.Body paragraphs consist of a topic sentence, sentences with evidence and analysis, and a concluding sentence.
22General Tips Do NOT use the first person (I, me) Do NOT use the words “in my opinion” or “I believe”Instead, simply state your points and prove them
23The Topic SentenceTopic sentences (for each body paragraph) are an introduction for each subtopic statement.Do not simply rewrite the subtopic. Reword it instead.It is one idea and one sentence. Do not make it sentence too complicated.Must completely support the thesis.Subtopic from intro: Renaissance humanism led to the creation of art that reflected the art of antiquityTopic Sentence: Renaissance humanists admired the culture of ancient Greece and Rome, therefore Renaissance artists revived the artistic styles of antiquity.
24Evidence and AnalysisThe body paragraph will include evidence and analysis.First introduce the information and define it.Next analyze it to show that it supports the thesis.Sometimes info and analysis can happen in the same sentence.
25BrainstormDiscuss how Renaissance ideas are expressed in the Italian art of the period, referring to specific works and artistsEmph on individ. portray great indiv. in artPower of humanity/individ.Rise of Portraiture – Mona Lisa, Ginevra de BenciPatrons of art put into artBusts,charactersMichelangelo – DavidRaphael – School of AthensSecular spirit realistic port. of the worldMassacio – dev. Of perspective, Tribute MoneyDaVinci – Vitruvian Man, cadaversChiaroscuro, sfumatoHumanism Art reflecting antiquityHumanism – increased study of ancient Greek and Roman civilization, rejection of Middle Age thoughtBrunelleschi and Donatello visit Rome, inspiredBrunelleschi’s domeDonatello – DavidBotticelli – mythology, Primavera, Birth of VenusUse abbreviations to shorten the time taken on the brainstorm, this example does not use enough abbreviations because I wanted the viewer to understand my notes.
26Body Paragraph #1Renaissance humanists admired the culture of ancient Greece and Rome, therefore Renaissance artists revived the artistic styles of antiquity. Renaissance intellectuals began to study the works from antiquity as opposed to the works to Middle Age philosophers. This emphasis on the works of ancient Greeks and Romans became known as humanism. Many Renaissance artists studied the art of ancient civilization and rejected the artistic styles of the Middle Ages. Brunelleschi and Donatello, two artists of the early Italian Renaissance, travelled to the remains of ancient Rome and Greece in order to study the art of these ancient civilizations. After returning to Florence, Brunelleschi designed the famous Dome for the Florence Cathedral. The Dome’s circular structure and massive size was inspired by the rounded Roman architecture that Brunelleschi had studied. After being inspired by the sculptures of antiquity Donatello went on to create his most famous work, “David”. Donatello’s “David” was the first life-size, freestanding nude sculpture since antiquity. “David” also showed the figure in a contrapposto stance-the weight concentrated on one leg-which had been used by Classical artists. Due to the humanist spirit of the Renaissance, Italian artists, such as Botticelli, took new interest in Greek and Roman mythology. Botticelli’s “Birth of Venus” portrays the moment that the goddess Venus is born. Zephyrs blow her to the shore as she rides on a shell. Venus covers herself in a manner that is reminiscent of ancient sculptures of her. His use of nudes and figures from ancient mythology show the strong influence humanism had on his art. The works of Brunelleschi, Donatello, and Botticelli illustrate the connection between humanism and the arts during the Italian Renaissance.
27Body Paragraph #2Renaissance thinkers began to appreciate the individual and all of man’s potential, thus human beings became the center of attention in most Italian Renaissance art. This new emphasis on individuality was epitomized by the rise of portraiture during the Renaissance. Leonardo da Vinci gained fame for his ability to accurately depict a person’s character in his work. His “Mona Lisa” is a portrait of a woman with an enigmatic smile and eyes that seem to maintain eye contact with the viewer. The “Mona Lisa” successfully captures the mystery and character of the woman being painted. In “The Last Supper” da Vinci illustrates the moment that Jesus revealed to his Apostles that he would be betrayed by one of his followers. The fresco depicts each Apostle’s actions at this moment in order to show all of their distinct personalities. Raphael-another artist of the High Renaissance-gained fame from his frescoes done in the Vatican including “The School of Athens”. This fresco depicts a fictitious gathering of ancient and contemporary philosophers and artists. Each philosopher’s character is accurately depicted. Michelangelo, who was known for his melancholy, is shown sulking in the foreground. Well-respected citizens were also portrayed in Renaissance art showing that artists sought to honor the great figures of their time. Patrons of art, including the Medici’s, would often appear as minor figures in works of art. Likewise, monumental sculptures were built in honor of those with political power. Michelangelo-the third major artist of the High Renaissance-became known for his portrayal of human power. His colossal statue, “David”, and his “Creation of Adam” affirm the beauty and strength of the human body. Thus, the works of the three High Renaissance artists-Leonardo, Raphael, and Michelangelo-epitomized the Renaissance idea of individuality by portraying emotion and human strength.
28Body Paragraph #3Renaissance intellectuals valued life on Earth and did not put off all of their happiness for the afterlife. Because of this secularism artists attempted to more accurately portray the world. New artistic technical advances allowed for a more realistic portrayal of the world. The use of perspective gave paintings an illusion of depth by using vanishing points and reducing the size of objects in the distance. In Masaccio's “The Tribute Money” the vanishing point exists behind the head of Jesus, giving the entire scene a more realistic look. Uccello's scenes of battle including his paintings of the “Battle of San Romano” exhibit his obsession with perspective as a way to accurately portray reality. Leonardo da Vinci and Michelangelo developed chiaroscuro, the technique of contrasting light and dark, to give objects roundness and depth. Sfumato, the technique layering of thin glazes of paint, also allowed artists to more precisely illustrate nature. Both chiaroscuro and sfumato are exhibited in da Vinci’s “Mona Lisa”. Artists would also dissect corpses in order to gain a better understanding of the human anatomy. The precise anatomy of the body of Christ in Michelangelo’s “Pieta” was achieved in part through Michelangelo’s dissection of corpses. Leonardo da Vinci’s “Vitruvian Man” also shows the precise observation that artists devoted to the human body. The uses of perspective, shading, and the study of human anatomy allowed for different methods of illustrating reality.
29ConclusionDiscuss how Renaissance ideas are expressed in the Italian art of the period, referring to specific works and artistsFor the conclusion include a setting sentence, then a sentence for each subtopic, then a concluding sentence.The new ideas of the Renaissance led to a flowering of a new Renaissance artistic style in Italy. Philosophers of the Renaissance created a renewed interest in ancient Greece and Rome known as humanism, so Renaissance artists attempted to emulate the style of these ancient civilizations. Renaissance Italians also believed strongly in individuality and in human strength, therefore artists attempted to accurately portray individuals’ personalities and strengths. The secular spirit of the Renaissance led to an increased emphasis on life on Earth, so artists strove to imitate nature in their art. Thus, the changing European ideas fostered by the Renaissance had a profound effect on the artistic styles of Italy.
30Thesis PracticeRead and re-read the question, look at the directive, break down the layers then read the thesis and decide if it fully answers the question.Analyze the aims, methods, and degree of success of the Catholic Reformation (Counter-Reformation) in the sixteenth century.The Counter-Reformation in Europe was implemented to halt the Protestant Reformation and build back the power of the Catholic Church through education, clergy reforms, and missionary practice. The Counter-Reformation was successful in saving the integrity of the Roman Catholic Church, but it did not end Protestantism. Protestants had exploited the faults of the Roman Catholic Church, and that was the first thing the counter-reformation dealt with.Good thesis, okay thesis, or bad thesis?Good thesis: This thesis was part of an essay that earned a nine. According to the college board this is a “clear and analytical thesis that establishes aims (respond to the Protestant Reformation) methods (clarify doctrine, reform abuses) and outcomes (failure to stop Protestantism or unite Europe)”
31Thesis PracticeAnalyze the aims, methods, and degree of success of the Catholic Reformation (Counter-Reformation) in the sixteenth century.In response to the growing Protestant Reformation the Catholic Church used methods such as religious orders to greatly salvage and further the image of the Church.Good thesis, okay thesis, bad thesis?Bad thesis: This essay went on to receive a two. “The thesis is weak”. Aims stated=to greatly salvage and further the image of the church. This is an incoherent statement. Methods=the church used methods such as religious orders. Degree of success=not mentioned.
32Thesis PracticeEvaluate the changes and continuities in women’s public roles during the Renaissance.During the Renaissance the role of women in society changed from a domestic one to a somewhat influential one. Many of the changes came about due to the change of society at that time. Women became avid supporters of the arts, they also became educated under the humanist movement and some even became influential on a grand scale such as Catherine de Medici.Good thesis, okay thesis, or bad thesis?Okay thesis: This essay went on to receive a five. The thesis focuses on the changes public roles of women. However, it misses half the question because it does not evaluate continuities in women’s public roles.
33Thesis PracticeAnalyze how Galileo, Descartes, and Newton altered traditional interpretations of nature and challenged traditional sources of knowledge.The Scientific Revolution brought about new ways of viewing the natural world. Three men who challenged traditional interpretations of nature and knowledge were Galileo, Descartes, and Newton. These three men did so through observations and innovations.Good thesis, okay thesis, bad thesis?Bad thesis: This essay went on to get a three. The thesis is awful. The author simply repeats the question and does not add his own thoughts except for his vague comment on “observations and innovations”
34Thesis PracticeUsing examples from at least two different states, analyze the key features of the “new monarchies” and the factors responsible for their rise in the period 1450 to 1550.Key features of the development of new monarchies from included pacification of the nobility, control of the church, increase in trade and economic prosperity, as seen in the 15th and 16th century English and Spanish monarchies.Good thesis, okay thesis, bad thesis?Good thesis: this essay went on to receive a nine. The thesis fully answers the question by identifying features of the monarchies that led to their rise (pacification of the nobility, control of the church, increase in trade and economic prosperity) and by naming two different states (England and Spain).