1. the northshore baptist church sponsored a bazaar mother bought some french pastries there The Northshore Baptist Church sponsored a bazaar at which Mother bought some French pastries. (Or “Mother bought…”

2. the ex president was greeted by anti american demonstrators at heathrow airport when he left the Plane The ex-president was greeted by anti- American demonstrators at Heathrow Airport when he left the plane.

3. wally was the eagerer of the three to prove that his dog king is different then the other hunting dogs Wally was the most eager of the three to prove that his dog King is different from the other hunting dogs.

4. ms ashley our friend who is from the north wants me to learn her how to knit helen said “Ms. Ashley, our friend from the North, wants me to teach her how to knit,” Helen said.

5. westminister abbey is one of the most famous monuments in london it had thousands of visitors each year Because (Since) Westminister Abbey is one of the most famous monuments in London, it has thousands of visitors each year.

6. of the two paths descending down to crystal lake we choosed the one with the fewest rocks Of the two paths descending to Crystal Lake, we chose the one with the fewer rocks.

7. having read the article the vicious cycle in the book everyday economics the idea of inflation was clearly understood by me Having read the article “The Vicious Cycle” in the book Everyday Economics, I clearly understood the idea of inflation.

8. miss sneed has ran more than one half mile today irregardless of dr mintons advice Miss Sneed has run more than one-half mile today regardless of Dr. Minton’s advice.