1. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions 画里话外 Comic & Composition 由纲要

2. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions W hat do you see in this comic? W hat does the comic reflect? W hat is your opinion about the social phenomenon?

3. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions kid SOS com Know ignore desire Surfer obey stress commitment of murder

4. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Describe the content of the comic Explain the social phenomenon causes and effects Personal opinions How to organize the passage of this kind

5. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions You can use the following patterns 1. As is shown in the comic, … 2. This is a common phenomenon. Nowadays, … First,… Second… 3. In my opinion, …should ….Besides, …

6. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Describe the comic by using the following structure: As is shown in the comic,As is shown in the comic, … We can see in this comicWe can see in this comic that … that … This comic shows us such a fact/phenomenon that …This comic shows us such a fact/phenomenon that …

7. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Para 1: description of the comic: In this comic, we can see the long-desired summer holiday is coming. But what wait for kids is not a happy and worry-free holiday, but mountains of homework as well as various extra courses, which come from both schools and all kinds of training organizations outside. We can expect kids will not enjoy their summer holiday but suffer too much from these extra burden.

8. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Explain this social phenomenon by using the following structures: This is a common phenomenon. phenomenon. Nowadays, …. Nowadays, …. First, … Second … First, … Second … what ’ s worse, … what ’ s worse, …

9. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Para 2. Explanation to this social phenomenon: Our kids are suffering too much because of the high expectation of their parents and severe competition from today's society. What ’ s worse, some schools and training organizations take advantages of this situation to make money by providing all kinds of training courses.

10. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Express your own attitude : In my opinion/ As far as I ’ m concerned/ Speaking for myself, … should ….Besides/In addition, …

11. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Para 3. your opinion on this matter As far as I am concerned, it is high time for us to free kids from the terrible burden and create a colorful childhood for them. Otherwise, it will surely have a negative effect on children ’ s development. Only in this way, can we expect a bright future of our kids, and our country.

12. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions 根据下面图画中所示的现象和所示给提示，用英语写一 篇 120 词左右的短文，以便刊登在某杂志上。短文的开头 已给出，不计入总词数。 Home work revision

13. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions 提示： 1 ．小病不去医院，到附近药店买药。 2 ．重病才去医院。 3 ．药价太高；服务态度不好。 4 ．政府正在采取措施。 A headache for Patients Now there are hospitals of various sizes in all corners of the country. ________________________________

14. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Let’s enjoy the excellent sentences from your assignment:( 佳句欣赏 ) Nowadays many people are afraid to go to hospitals if they fall ill. The first thing they think is to go to drugstores to buy medicines. They don’t want to go to hospitals only if the illness is very serious. ( 黄瑞初 ) Nowadays, when many people have small illnesses, they prefer to go to the chemist’s shop rather than go to the hospital. ( 郭玮玮 )

15. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Let’s enjoy the excellent sentences from your assignment:( 佳句欣赏 ) Vividly, the picture reflects a serious phenomenon in present society that more and more doctors become fond of money rather than the health of the patients. ( 史薇薇 ) People don’t like to go to hospitals because of not only the high price of medicines but also the bad medical service. ( 姚笛 )

16. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Let’s enjoy the excellent sentences from your assignment:( 佳句欣赏 ) As is shown in the cartoon, money is more important than patients to hospitals…. High price of the drugs and the bad service of the hospital are the reasons why people don’t like to go the hospital. ( 李凯虹 ) This is a common phenomenon that the hospital put profit in first place. ( 李菁菁 )

17. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Let’s enjoy the excellent sentences from your assignment:( 佳句欣赏 ) In my opinion, an effective solution for the problem is to transform the way of medical treatment and our government should improve the public service. ( 梁乔斐 ) Fortunately, the government is adopting some steps to improve the situation. ( 王蕾 )

18. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Let’s enjoy the excellent sentences from your assignment:( 佳句欣赏 ) Now there are hospitals of various sizes in all corners of the country, but in common people’s mind, seeing a doctor is still inconvenient and uncomfortable. ( 乌也茜 ) It is a result of the high price of medicine and the poor medical service. ( 邱晶晶 )

19. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Let’s enjoy the excellent sentences from your assignment:( 佳句欣赏 ) ….but most of hospitals are putting profit above conscience just like what the above cartoon reflects : a hospital’s treating a person just depends on the person’s money. ( 朱华妲 ) Only when we have a serious illness will we go to the hospital. ( 毛欣怡 )

20. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Let’s correct the errors appearing in your essays: ( 你错我改 ) As is shown in the comic, which the patient lying on the bed asked…. Another reason why people don’t want to go to hospitals is the price of medicine is too high. It will make bad influence on our society. ﹨ ∧ that have a

21. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Let’s correct the errors appearing in your essays: ( 你错我改 ) The service to patients is not so well. The old woman asked the doctor that “Doctor, may I leave the hospital?” They will go to the hospital only when have a serious illness. good ﹨ having

22. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Let’s correct the errors appearing in your essays: ( 你错我改 ) … but the doctor asked the woman how much money did she have. They will go to the hospital unless they get serious illnesses. The comic displays that the people who don’t like to go to hospitals because of the high price of medicine and the bad medical service. ﹨ had ∧ not ﹨ ﹨

23. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Let’s correct the errors appearing in your essays: ( 你错我改 ) In my opinion, with the problem solving, people can enjoy a convenient and cheap medical service. Many people when they have got a small disease they would rather go to drugstores than go to the hospital. The hospital’s aim is help the patients. solved ﹨ ∧ to

24. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Let’s correct the errors appearing in your essays: ( 你错我改 ) I think what the government have to do is declining the price of the medicine. Only is these ways, the patients like the grandma in the cartoon will be glad. People have no choice to go to the hospital when they are seriously ill. to decline ∧ ∧ but

25. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Learn to improve your expression 普通表达方式高级表达方式 In my opinion As far as I ’ m concerned, We should …. we are supposed to, First, … Second … for one thing … for another … In factin reality If …, we will … Only if … will we … I ’ m sure … I ’ m fully convinced that,, in my view, Speaking for myself it’s necessary / essential that practically as a matter of fact actually I strongly believe that as for myself on one hand…, on the other hand…

26. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Six principles of making sentences 1. advanced words ( 高级词汇原则 ) 2. adverbial advanced ( 状语提前原则 ) 3. phrases preferred ( 短语优先原则 ) 4. compound sentence, composite sentence and sentence of special kind ( 并列句、复合句和特殊句式原则 ) 5. long and short sentences alternately ( 长短句交替原则 ) 6. passages in paragraphs( 短文分段分层原则 )

27. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Five characteristics of outstanding writing: 1. sense of order ( 条理性 : 段落完整，层次分明） 2. accuracy ( 准确性 : 语法准确，用词精当） 3. fluency ( 流畅性 : 层次清晰，行文连贯） 4. conciseness & variety ( 简洁、多样性） 5. ideological content ( 思想性 : 文章立意高，表 达个人观点内容积极向上）

28. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions Home work

29. 高三英语写作指导 ( 看图写作篇 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions The end Thanks for your attention