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1.E (Change find to past tense.) 2.C (sentence 3) 3.B. (Rewrite the paragraph in active voice.) 4.A. (Briefly explain the concept of electroplating.)

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4 1.E (Change find to past tense.) 2.C (sentence 3) 3.B. (Rewrite the paragraph in active voice.) 4.A. (Briefly explain the concept of electroplating.) 5.C. (Place paragraph 9 to follow paragraph 4.) Lesson 3Improving Paragraphs

5 Lesson #1 Improving Paragraphs & Identifying Sentence Errors

6 1 st Period7:25 – 8:25 2 nd Period8:30 – 9:35 3 rd Period9:40 – 10:40 Lunch A 10:40 – 11:10 Period 4A 11:15 – 12:10 Period 512:15 – 1:15 Period 61:20 – 2:20

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8 Honor Code “I have neither given nor received any unauthorized aid, nor do I have knowledge of anyone else doing so.” Signature

9 Word Count 1. Count the number of words on five random full lines of text (words must be 3 letters to count) 2. Average those five numbers e.g. 9+8+11+10+9 =47 Then: 47 ÷ 5= 9.4 1. Take the average of that and multiplying by the number of lines written. 9.4 x 30= 282 Scoring: 1-44 = 145-88=1.5 89-133=2134-178 = 2.5 179-223 = 3224-268=3.5 269-313 = 4314-351 =4.5 352+ =5 Target

10 Teacher Area Door Turn in Area Desk Honor Desk Cabinets Teacher Desk Door SSR Book Shelf Filing cabinet & shelf Desk Doc Camera Area 3 3 Cabinets Erik Breanna Max Alex Angela Bryce Francesco Danielle Brandon Nate Rose Jaden Dylan Michael Jacob Vanessa Vona Owen Liz Arabella Kristine 4 4 10 6 6 5 5 7 7 9 9 2 2 1 1 8 8 11 12 13 14 15 18 19 20 21 23 25 24 26 27 31 29 30 Deegan 28 16 17 Diana 22

11 Teacher Area Door Turn in Area Sadie Desk Katelynn Honor Desk Cabinets Teacher Desk Door SSR Book Shelf Filing cabinet & shelf Desk Doc Camera Area 3 3 Cabinets Haili Lauren Isaac Nonnie Tayva Malia Jordan Ashley Keith Megan Alli Kassie Ben Julian Zackery Richard Dawson Griffin Katie Annaliza Bella Abby Kahleb Jon 4 4 10 6 6 5 5 7 7 9 9 2 2 1 1 8 8 11 12 13 14 15 18 19 20 21 23 25 24 26 27 31 29 30 Jakob Brittany 28 16 17 Evan 22 Alexis Macy

12 Teacher Area Door Turn in Area Jordan Desk Zara Cabinets Teacher Desk Door SSR Book Shelf Filing cabinet & shelf Desk Doc Camera Area 3 3 Cabinets Jarom Connor Michael Ceara Mercer Ian Ashley Tyler August Gabriela Dawson Colby Jason Maggie Tanner Brady 4 4 10 6 6 5 5 7 7 9 9 2 2 1 1 8 8 11 12 13 14 15 18 19 20 21 23 25 24 26 27 31 29 30 Nathan 28 16 17 Sarah 22

13 Teacher Area Door Turn in Area Corbin Desk Kalie Cabinets Teacher Desk Door SSR Book Shelf Filing cabinet & shelf Desk Doc Camera Area 3 3 Cabinets Cheyenne Samantha Jeffrey Loren Whisper Kristin Chanson Tanner Elijah Maddie H Jacob Kayla Mimi Blake Gabe Jasmine Riely Maddie A 4 4 10 6 6 5 5 7 7 9 9 2 2 1 1 8 8 11 12 13 14 15 18 19 20 21 23 25 24 26 27 31 29 30 Maria Eugene 28 16 17 22

14 Teacher Area Door Turn in Area Desk Cabinets Teacher Desk Door SSR Book Shelf Filing cabinet & shelf Desk Doc Camera Area 3 3 Cabinets Jordyn Daesha Amanda Austin Zack Isabella Emma Ellie Sadie Kilian Peter Jerryn Bryce Beth 4 4 10 6 6 5 5 7 7 9 9 2 2 1 1 8 8 11 12 13 14 15 18 19 20 21 23 25 24 26 27 31 29 30 Garrett 28 16 17 22

15 Teacher Area Door Turn in Area Alana Desk Cade Cabinets Teacher Desk Door SSR Book Shelf Filing cabinet & shelf Desk Doc Camera Area 3 3 Cabinets Dash Samantha Anna Julie Janelle Natasia Isabella Russell Rachel Dylan Angie Grace Benjamin Brandon McKenna Isabella Camron Jay Savannah Andrew Sadie Jacob Connor 4 4 10 6 6 5 5 7 7 9 9 2 2 1 1 8 8 1 12 1313 1414 15 18 19 20 21 23 25 24 26 27 31 29 30 Alex Carter 28 16 17 Emma 22


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