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1 英语书面表达 English Composition Writing

2 What makes a good essay? a good essay? The essay

3 A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph. Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3 Supporting Paragraph 3 Concluding paragraph

4 To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful. general statement topic statement Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement General statement Topic statement Topic statement

5 Supporting Paragraphs Supporting Paragraphs (Body) Paragraphs TSSSSSSSSS Firstly,... Secondly,... Moreover,... Finally,... However,... In addition, … Furthermore,...

6 ConclusionPersonally,… in conclusion, in brief, From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that... In summary, it is wiser... we may draw the conclusion that... In summary, it is wiser...

7 The paragraph What makes a good paragraph?

8 A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences. There are different kinds of bee. Some live in large groups like the honey bee, and make their nests in trees or holes in the rocks. Other species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all… topic sentence

9 Wherever you go in our school, you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers. Dotted among these trees and flowers are many buildings of different styles. A stream runs through our school and you always see everything reflected in the water. Topic sentence:________________ just like a garden. Our school is just like a garden. Our school is just like a garden. Our school is

10 A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words. I believe English is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons. First of all, English is spoken by a large number of people, and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a great many countries. Secondly, English is the most widely used language on the internet. It has become an on-line language. Thirdly, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful. Lastly, …

11 正确使用有关连接词 时间先后: first, then, later, in the end, eventually, since then, after a while 转折关系: but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless 因果关系: because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as a result of, for the reason that 让步关系: though, although, even if, even though, in spite of the fact that 递进关系: what’s more, in addition, furthermore on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系: if, unless, as long as, on condition that … 表 列 举: for example / instance, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words, as follows 表 总 结: in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been stated

12 A good paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns.

13 丰富的句式: ( 常用到的句型结构) 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思, 能增加文章的文采。 e.g. What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was ! 感叹句 强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.

14 e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man. e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary. e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand. 倒装句 省略句 with 短语

15 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library. 定语从句 e.g. That’s what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present. 各种名词性从句

16 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, we’ll catch up sooner or later. 各种状语从句

17 1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词 性从句) 2. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. ( 使用倒装句 ) 3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.( 使用强调句型 ) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.( 用虚拟语气) What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇 Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldn’t have passed the physics exam but for your help.

18 5. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. ( 使用过去分词 ) 6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用 V-ing 形式 ) 7.I won’t believe what he says. ( no matter what 状语从句) 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. (祈使句 +and… ) Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. Singing and laughing, they went back to school. No matter what he says, I won’t believe. Study hard and you’ll make rapid progress.

19 9 . He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. ( 使用倒装句 ) 10.We all think he is a great man. (think highly of) 11.As a result the plan was a failure. (turn out) 12. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the more…the more) No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. We all think highly of him. The plan turned out to be a failure. The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.

20 Summary: A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph. A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences. A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words. A good paragraph is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.

21 1.A good beginning makes a good ending. 1.A good beginning makes a good ending. 2.Your composition should be divided 2.Your composition should be divided into paragraphs. into paragraphs. 3.You’d better use some linking words. 3.You’d better use some linking words. 4.Handwriting is of great importance. 4.Handwriting is of great importance. Suggestions:

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33 考点梳理 议论文是高考英语试卷中最常考查的文体之一。一般选 取考生所熟悉的社会上的热点、焦点问题,通过剖析事物来 论述事理、发表意见或提出主张。在具体的写作中要求通过 摆事实、讲道理、辨是非,确定其观点的正确或错误,树立 或否定某种观点或主张。近几年的高考书面表达中,议论文 的命题形式是以文字提纲、图画和表格的方式来呈现写作材 料的。

34 高分策略 1.使用三段式作文法 所谓三段式作文法,就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模 式布局谋篇,即开头、正文、结尾。三段式写作模式思路清 晰,结构分明,是考生提高自己的作文档次的最佳选择。 ( 1 )第一段开门见山直奔主题,提出要解决的问题或观 点,或者交代清时间、地点、人物、干什么。

35 ( 2 )第二段摆出事实或提出论据,或者把事情发展的经 过详细写出来。该部分条理要清楚,过渡要自然,也就是评 分细则里所要求的: “ 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全 文结构紧凑,完全达到预期的写作目的 ” 。为了迅速把握句与 句、段与段的连接方式,很有必要熟记表示各种逻辑意义的 过渡词语。

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