2. 期中写作复习

3. 平时要求： 1. 格式 2. 人称 3. 要点 4. 时态 5. 字数 6. 语法 7. 书写 词汇, 句型 （高级）和语法多样 化（较复杂） 1. 覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全 文结构紧凑 4. 语言得体 要点全要点全 连接词连接词 如何算是一篇好文章？ 语言地道， 规范

4. 一 改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头， 接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语 置于句首，或用分词做状语等。 The boy is very hungry and he hurried home. Hungry, the boy hurried home. The boy, hungry, hurried home. 二. Transformation of sentences in writing ( 写作中的句型转换 ) 1. 把其中一句改为分词短语 He had finished supper. He went out to have a walk then. Having finished supper, he went out to have a walk. A. 合并为简单句

5. 2. 把其中一句改为介词短语 He was brought in. His hands were tied behind his back. He was brought in with his hands tied behind his back. B. 合并为复合句 1.The Chinese artists were to perform here that night. The news cheered everyone of us. The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered everyone of us. 2 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast. All these make people’s lives convenient, pleasant and colorful. In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, which makes people’s lives convenient, pleasant…

6. With the development of Beijing, people’s lives are becoming more and more convenient, pleasant and colorful. Nowadays, Beijing is developing so fast that people’s lives are getting more convenient, pleasant and colorful. C. 把复合句改为简单句 She was anxious to find a job after she finished her studies. Having finished her studies, she was anxious to find a job. 1. 把从句改为分词短语 2. 把从句改为介词短语 I insisted that he should go. I insisted on him going.

7. 三. 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用 诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等. Though he is wealthy, he works hard. Wealthy as he is, he works hard. In spite of /Despite his wealth, he works hard. He didn’t get up until 7 o’clock. It was not until 7 o’clock that he got up. Not until 7 o’clock did he get up. As soon as we arrived at the village, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers. On arriving at the village ， we were warmly…. The moment we arrived at the village, we were…

8. We were warmly welcomed by the villagers immediately we arrived at the village. No sooner had we arrived at the village than we … Hardly had we arrived at the village when we…. 四.using “ complicated / advanced words” 注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单 词，以增加文采。 Don’t worry about your expenses for university education, and we will try to help you. …… and we will make the greatest effort /do our best / try every meansto help you. At that time the taxi driver had to ask the tourist for help. At that time the taxi driver had no choice but to turn to the tourist.

9. I came up with a good idea. I had a good idea. A good idea occurred to / struck / came to me. 五. 有效使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构 紧凑。 逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇 时间顺序 first, second, then, finally/at last, soon, suddenly, meanwhile, to begin with, in the end 空间顺序 here, there, on one side … on the other side, in front of, at the back of, next to 例举顺序 for example, for instance, take … for example, that is, as follows, in other words, such as

10. 对称顺序 for one thing, for the other thing, on one hand,on the other hand 转折顺序 but, however, while, though, otherwise 因果顺序 because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of) 条件顺序 as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless 让步顺序 though, as, even if/though, whether, who (what,when, where)ever 递进顺序 what ’ s more, besides, to make the matter worse 过渡性插入语 I think, I ’ m afraid, you know, As we all know

11. Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! ① This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② It has changed a lot since 1978 ③. People here ④ are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. ① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1978 ③ and has been developing very fast. People here ④ live a much better life than before. 书面表达： Now it is taking on a new look.

12. In the past, the school here was very small ⑤. ⑥ Now it has been rebuilt. ⑦ The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys ⑧. It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ They enjoy free education in it. ⑩ Thank you. In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥ But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and ⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ What’s more, they enjoy free education. ⑩ May you enjoy your stay here the newly built teaching building / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you.

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