2. L ESSON 5 A – E DIT Essential Question How can I edit my descriptive writing to make it better? Learning Outcomes - Students will: Preview – Grammar!!!! Oh No!!!! Watch a brainpop on run-on sentences Using our tips, lets try to fix run-on sentences Success Criteria I can find and fix my run-on sentences

3. P REVIEW Who thinks they are better than Messi at soccer? Do you think he was always the best player in the world? What is he good at? (Shooting? Dribbling? Passing?) How did he get good at these things? Did he practice all of the them at once? Who is good at grammar? What areas of grammar do you need to work on? Who said, “EVERTHING!” What can we learn from this example for grammar?

4. There will be a short quiz after the video. There will be a short quiz after the video. T OOLS N T IPS 4. E DIT T OOLS N T IPS BRAINPOP: Run-on Sentences 1.What are run-on sentences? 2.What tips can you think of to fix these run- on sentences? We will add tips later to help answer the essential question Editin g Tips!!

5. 1.Which sentences are CORRECT? 2.Which sentences are RUN-ON? How could you fix them? 1.Which sentences are CORRECT? 2.Which sentences are RUN-ON? How could you fix them? Editin g Tips!!

6. W HAT TO DO ? Edit your work looking specifically for run-on sentences Set a goal for you to improve Is there another area of grammar you could work on? Commas Capitalization Other punctuation? Once you have chosen, go to taylormccarey.com => 8 English => Grammar Using one of the grammar books, complete 1 page (at least 5 questions on a page) in the area you are having difficulty with Check your work for that grammar mistake Ex. If you worked on commas, check your comma mistakes in your draft Editin g Tips!! This is our only grammar class!!!! Anything you do not finish in class, make sure you complete at home This is our only grammar class!!!! Anything you do not finish in class, make sure you complete at home Final Due Date: Wednesday, November 4

7. F IX THESE SENTENCES Success Criteria I can find and fix punctuation mistakes

8. N OTE - TAKING C HECK ! What I will check? 1. Vocab definition? 2. Did you take notes for today? 3. How can I edit my writing to make it better? If we do not answer the essential question in class, your HW is to add 1~2 sentences after each class Editin g Tips!!

9. L ESSON 5 B – E DIT Essential Question How can I edit my writing to make it better? Learning Outcomes - Students will: Preview – Grammar!!!! Oh No!!!! Watch a brainpop on punctuation Success Criteria I can proofread another student’s editing mistakes

10. R EVIEW - P UNCTUATION Explain to your partner the different type of punctuation marks we looked at last class

11. T ASK – M AKE M ISTAKES ? Write 5 sentences in your notebook. Hint: Write a strong sentence using any one of our vocab words Try to make 3~5 punctuation mistakes in each sentence My sister: Tiffany said “I hate you?” My response was, “Notwithstanding what mom says. I will eliminate you.” Later, you will give your book to your partner and they will try to find the punctuation mistakes Use a different colour pen to find make the corrections Next Tuesday, you will correct your grammar mistakes in your draft

12. N EXT T UESDAY – W RITING A SSESSMENT Next Tuesday, you will correct your grammar mistakes in your draft