1. November 5 and 6, 2013 I can Revise a text in order to create cohesive meaning. (Bell Ringer) I can identify and create active and passive voice. (Grammar) I can analyze a speech for effective persuasive techniques: ethos, pathos, logos, thesis, claim, counter claim, active/passive voice. (Speech Analysis)

2. ACT Bell Ringer Read the questions and all the answer options. Read the passage carefully. Answer questions 70-71 on your bell ringer sheet AND explain why you chose that answer. Place this under the bell ringer section in your binder.

3. Number 70 He linked and combined theory and practice by saying that interpretation of an observed phenomenon must always be made in light of its purpose. F. No Change G. combining H. to combine J. OMIT

4. Answer J) The original is needlessly wordy. ◦ Link and combine both have the meaning “to join”, so we do not need both words.

5. Number 71 He linked and combined theory and practice by saying that interpretation of an observed phenomenon must always be made in light of its purpose. A. No Change B. Always keeping its purpose in mind C. Without ever forgetting what its purpose is D. Given an understanding of what its purpose is

6. Answer A) The original is correct. The other choices are needlessly wordy and awkward.

7. Grammar: Active/Passive Voice Voice is a verb form that indicates if the sentence's subject performs or receives an action. 2 Types of Voice: ACTIVE: If the sentence's subject performs the action, the sentence is written in the active voice. ◦ Example:"The pilot landed the plane" is written in the active voice since the subject (pilot) performed the action (landed the plane). PASSIVE: If the sentence's subject receives the action, the sentence is written in the passive voice. ◦ Example: "The plane was landed by the pilot" is written in the passive voice since the subject (plane) received the pilot's action (landed the plane).

8. Active/Passive Activity A few students at a time will have a sentence strip and we, as a class, will have to place the students in the correct order.

9. Active/Passive Practice Complete the handout on your own paper. This should title Active/Passive Voice and complete under your notes of active/passive voice. Write the subject and then identify if the sentence is active or passive.

10. Check your answers Remember- you are creating your study guide for your grammar test. Go ahead and change any you might have missed. Put this in your binder, so you have the study guide.

11. Active/Passive Voice 1. Sprinter Evelyn Ashford took home two gold medals from the 1984 Olympics. Active 2. The cucumbers and the tomatoes will be planted by next week. Passive 3. The artwork of painter Pop Chalee reflects the traditions of the Pueblo people. Active 4. The roof of Aunt Vicki’s house has been badly damaged by high winds. Passive 5. The children’s sculptures have been displayed in a cast at the public library. Passive 6. Many bird book from the early 1900s are graced by the illustrations of Louis Fuentes. Passive 7. In the attic Dad found an old letter from his great uncle. Active 8. Kaya and Sabina have been working on their science project for three weeks. Active 9. Large donations were sent by several anonymous individuals. Passive 10. Snapping turtles defend themselves with their strong, sharp jaws. Active

12. Quick Write/Flashback Think back over the last couple of class meetings. Think about the persuasive techniques we have discussed. You may even look back at your notes. You might even include info from today. Complete a quick write in which you list or write sentences about all the different persuasive techniques. Include why you think each technique may be effective. You will have 3 minutes to complete your quick write. You must write for the entire 3 minutes.

13. Group Activity Directions 1. You will be placed into groups. 2. Once in your group, you will receive a text. Each group will receive a different text. 3. You will collaborate (work) with the people at your table, and fill out the graphic organizer. 4. You will be analyzing your text (fill out graphic organizer and highlight your text) for the following persuasive techniques: 1.Effective Introduction 2.Thesis 3.Effective Claims 4.Counter Claims- where the author will address opposing argument 5.Ethos 6.Pathos 7.Logos 8.Style 9.Active/Passive Voice 10. Effective Conclusion 5. You will turn in your highlighted text and graphic organizer!!