1. 写作提升 — 书面表达训练

2. 常见错误 （ 1 ）主谓不一致。 ① Father and I am going to visit her. ② My uncle often go to the cinema. （ 2 ）时态、语态混用。 ① The meal is so nice that we all enjoyed it very much. ② The old man knocked down by the car and injured badly.

3. （ 3 ）句子成分残缺。 ① But the car which painted red didn’t stop. ② The young man running in the street fast. ③ He wouldn’t able to work out the problem. ④ We all against all forms of terrorist activities.

4. （ 4 ）习惯搭配乱用； ① I very like the novel. ② Then we set off digging, planting and watering. （ 5 ）汉式英语 ； a) The car is yellow colour. b)He cost five yuan to buy a new dictionary.

5. c) Recently our village has taken place great changes. d) The factory broke out a big fire last Sunday. e) Chinese population is many. （ 6 ）名词单、复数不分。 ① He will give us a talk on American film. ② He is one of the best player in our school.

6. （ 7 ）赘词现象严重。 ① At last, the lost boy returned back. ② On one day, he went to the cinema. （ 8 ）用词不当。 I hope you to help the girl with her homework. （ 9 ）拼写和词形变化错误。 ① The car hitted the old man and drived away. ② On his way to school, he sew a little girl.

7. 10 ）前后人称不一致。 ① Swimming and football are his favourite sports, he likes it all his life. ② The little girl usually goes to school at 7 in the morning, but today he was late for school. 11 ）结构错误 : a)Having heard the news, her heart beat faster and faster.

8. b) He wrote about 300 stories, some of them had been translated into Chinese. c)We should teach children don’t play and ride bikes on the road. d)There were hundreds of students couldn’t go to school because they were poor.

9. 12) 词义不清楚 : a)He managed to swim across the river, but failed. b)I was very difficult to refuse and had to receive her invitation.

10. 二. 高考英语书面表达新的评分标准 要求考生使用高级词汇、复杂句 式、过渡性词语和不同的表达方 式，从而增加文章的可读性和表 现力。 1) 改变句子的语序，通过倒装某成分、 倒装句、强调句、感叹句等手段 实现句子形式的多样化，使句子 跌宕起伏，文章生动活泼 。

11. a.He got up very early to catch the bus. → To catch the bus ， he got up very early. b.The girl, hungry and thirsty, went back home. → The girl went back home,hungry and thirsty. c.Tom knew his mistakes only then. → Only then did Tom know his mistakes.

12. d.The news that our football team had won came soon. → The news came soon that our football team had won. e.It began to rain just at ten o’clock. → It was at ten o’clock that it began to rain.

13. 2) 用复合句（定从、状从、名词性从句、 并列句等）来代替简单句，使语言由松散变 凝练，增强句子的连贯性和句意的表现力， 使行文更富文采。 a ） I was walking along Park Road towards the east. At that time, an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. → I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.

14. I heard that Beijing won the bid for the 2008 Olympic Games.I was excited. → I was excited to hear that Beijing won the bid for the 2008 Olympic Games b ) The flat is in a building on Fangcao street. It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. → The flat,which is in a building on Fangcao street., is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.

15. c ) This is the place. I worked with the farmers in the past. → This is the place where I worked with the farmers in the past. d) Mary stood in front of the window. From that place she could see her classmates playing football. → Mary stood in front of the window from where she could see her classmates playing football.

16. 4) 多使用短语结构来简化从句或合并短句： 常见的短语结构有分词短语、介词短语、 名词短语、同位语结构和独立主格结构。 It was fine. We went out. →It being fine, we went out. When you are crossing the street, you must be very careful. → When crossing the street, you must be very careful.

17. If the trees were given more water, they would have grown better. → Given more water, they would have grown better. The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news. → Hearing the bad news ， the young man couldn’t help crying.

18. It’s a small flat. It’s 25 square meters. It has a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. → It’s a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.

19. 三. 精确词汇及高级词汇： 1. He will be arriving soon. →He will be arriving pretty soon. 2. They poured the waste water into the river. → They poured the waste water directly into the river. 3. He got angry. →He got a little bit angry.

20. 4. I don’t understand. →I don’t quite understand. 5. If you have any problems, you can shout out. → If you have any problems, just yell. 6. They planted trees around the school. → They planted trees throughout the campus.

21. 7. The police treated the whites better than the blacks. → The police favored the white over the black. 8. “What are they doing ?” he thought. →“What are they doing ?” he figured.

22. 三. 怎样使用较高级的词汇和 “ 固式结构 ”: 1.Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. → T → The weather being good,our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. → →We all consider him to be a great man. 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. → → Suddenly a good idea occurred to me.

23. 使用排比 1. Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. 2.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. 长短句交替使用，体现表达节奏美

24. 使用连接词，将单句与其前后合并，形成 主次关系，就把一个比较复杂的内容和 关系表达得层次清楚、结构严谨。 It is a widely accepted fact __that__ there is a major concern around the world where___ the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future, ___which___ it is considered to be true.

25. 过渡词的应用 : 合理使用过渡词，将单句前 后合并，形成主次关系，就能 把一个比较复杂的内容和关系 表达得层次清楚、意义连贯、 结构严谨。

26. 1.John is clever, diligent and polite, _____________, he is a good student. 2.Lucy is 12 and Lily is 11,_______, Lucy is one year older than Lily. 3.He is a good master ________ he treats his servants well. 4.You must work harder, ___ you will be put into another class. 5.He is poor, ___ he is contented. 6.Some people waste food_____ others don’t have enough. in other words that is because or but while

27. Radio and television can be seen everywhere. ____ the TV set is more useful than the radio ________ on TV you can see and hear what is happening in the world. ________, radio is not disappearing. It is still with us. _____ the number of listeners is becoming larger. _____ the transistor( 晶体管 ) has been invented, a transistor radio is sometimes ___ small ____it is easy to carry. But because However And After sothat

28. You can put it in your pocket and listen to it on the bus or on your bike when you go to work. _______, radio broadcasts are better for blind people. _____ many old people don’t have good eyesight. They can’t watch TV, ____ they can listen to music or news over the radio. _____________, radio is much cheaper than a TV set. Besides And but What’s more