1. Asking for Assistance conveying a tone in your writing conveying a tone in your writing

2. 1. It would be highly appreciated if you let me know that you talked to your colleague about the job or not? And what action you propose to take. 1. I was wondering if you were able to speak with your colleague about the job. If so, would it be possible for me to get your opinion on the next steps I should take? Thanks for your time.

3. 2. I applied for one position that I found on a website but I didn’t received a called. Do you have other position for me? I need your help. 2. I am researching and applying for jobs but I was wondering if you have any further suggestions as to where I might be able to look for postings. As I value your expertise, I would appreciate any suggestions.

4. 3. How are you? I hope you are fine. Here is my elevator speech. Please check it. 3. Hi X. I hope you are well. Here is my elevator speech as requested. Thanks so much for taking the time to look it over. I look forward to your feedback.

5. 4. Please find attached a copy of a sample cover leter. I would highly appreciate your comments to be sent by email, and if your time permits we could discuss them in class. 4. As per your request, I have attached a copy of my cover letter for your review. I’d be happy to discuss it in person, over the phone, or in class if that is easier for you. Thanks for your support.

6. 5. I tried to reach you yesterday but your phone was occupied all the time. Seems that everyone called you except me. The attached is kind of elevator speech I am not so happy with it, but I have no ideas how to improve it. 5. Hi X. I tried to call you yesterday but was unable to get through. It seems that you are in high demand. Attached is my initial attempt at a cover letter. I feel it falls short of the sample you showed me and I am struggling to improve it. If you have any suggestions, I’d be happy to hear them.