1. Definition Essay: Essay with Specific Examples

2. Title? Does the essay have a title? Does the title only name the defined concept? (It can, but could the author do better?)

3. Attention Grabber Is there an attention grabber at the beginning of the intro? Does it work? (Source?)

4. Thesis Does the intro provide the defined concept, and does the thesis state three discrete sub-divisions of it? (Parallelism?) (Italicized word?)

5. To Be? Put a box around any form of the verb TO BE that you find.

6. Three Topic Sentences Look at the three topic sentences. Are they directly related to the three descriptors named in the thesis?

7. Body Paragraph One Does it only include details that relate to what was advertised in the topic sentence? Are the details in the paragraph specific examples and not vague references?

8. Body Paragraph Two Does it only include details that relate to what was advertised in the topic sentence? Are the details in the paragraph specific examples and not vague references?

9. Body Paragraph Three Does it only include details that relate to what was advertised in the topic sentence? Are the details in the paragraph specific examples and not vague references?

10. Concluding Sentence Does the writer have a concluding sentence at the end of each body paragraph?

11. Conclusion Paragraph Is there a (meaningful) conclusion? Does it make a bigger point? Does it suggest how knowing and understanding a personal definition of the concept may be useful to others or into the future?

12. Did you notice…? Any passive voice Any two part verbs like “I am smiling

13. Transitions Did the writer use appropriate transitions words and sentences at the beginning of each body paragraph and when starting the second example in each BP?

14. Did you notice…? Any form of GET Any you, your, or you’re after the attention grabber

15. Did you notice…? At least one Smiley-face trick Any weak or immature word choice

16. Did you notice…? Any comma suggestions Any places where parallelism would work better

17. Follows Directions Did the author include Name Teacher Course MLA date in the upper left corner

18. Other MLA considerations 12 point font Double spaced 1 inch margin all around