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Active Sentence The writer sent the letter through the mail.
Sentence: Subject, verb, complete thought Subject—writer Actor in sentence Performs action of verb
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Passive Sentence The letter was sent by the writer through the mail.
Sentence: Subject, verb, complete thought Subject—Letter Acted upon in the sentence Receives the action of the verb
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Which is clearer and more concise, active or passive voice?
Fewer words Places right information in subject position for emphasis
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Exceptions Ken Park decided that we should go on strike.
A decision was made to go on strike. Farmers grew this corn in Illinois. This corn was grown in Illinois.
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Appendix A:9 Using Numbers Correctly
Use words for zero to nine. Use words or numerals for numbers that can be expressed in one or two words (45 or forty-five). Use numerals for numbers that would require more than two words (127 instead of one hundred twenty-seven).
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Never begin a sentence with a numeral (spell out the number or move it in the sentence).
For very large numbers, combine numerals and words (100 million). Combine numbers and words to prevent misreading (three 6-inch bolts instead of 3 6 inch bolts). Be consistent in how you use numbers.
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Use numerals for all statistical data.
Ages and addresses Dates and times Exact amounts of money Fractions and decimals Identification numbers Measurements Page numbers Percentages, ratios, proportions Scores
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