1. SCIENTIFIC WRITING

2. The Good and the Bad News Good news The world is not magically divided into good writers and bad writers; anyone can write well if they are prepared to spend the time and effort Bad news The world is not magically divided into good writers and bad writers; anyone can write well if they are prepared to spend the time and effort

3. A panda walks into a café. He orders a sandwich, eats it, then draws a gun and fires two shots into the air. “Why?” asks the confused waiter, as the panda makes towards the exit. The panda produces a badly punctuated wildlife manual and tosses it over his shoulder. “I’m a panda,” he says, at the door. “Look it up.” The waiter turns to the relevant entry and, sure enough, finds an explanation. “Panda. Large black-and-white bear-like mammal, native to China. Eats, shoots and leaves.” So, punctuation really does matter, even if it is only occasionally a matter of life and death. Truss, L. 2003. Eats, shoots & leaves. The zero tolerance approach to punctuation. Profile Books Ltd. Pandas & Punctuation

4. Panda’s eat mainly bamboo leaves, stems and shoots A panda's daily diet consists almost entirely of the leaves, stems and shoots of various bamboo species. Bamboo contains very little nutritional value so pandas must eat 12-38kg every day to meet their energy nee

5. Why it’s worth writing well It is part of a scientist’s job to communicate their work to other scientists, and the public Making the effort to write well forces you to think about what you are writing Higher marks!

6. Outline of Workshop 1. What is good writing? 2. Structure 3. Presentation 4. Exam essays

7. What is good writing? Good writing is good because it does its job more efficiently The function of a piece of writing is to communicate It is your job as a writer to keep the reader reading It is your job as a writer to make the reader understand

8. Questions to ask yourself What am I trying to say? What words will express it? What image or phrase will make it clearer? Is this image fresh enough to have an effect? Could I have put it more succinctly? Have I said anything that is avoidably ugly?

9. Some Ideas Decide on a structure before you start writing Be prepared to go through two drafts Leave some time between drafts Do not write anything you do not understand Think about reading your work aloud Do not include irrelevant material; be concise Do not make the reader do your work for you

10. Types of Structure Introduction Theory A Theory B Conclusions References Introduction what are we talking about? why is it important? definitions and background information outline of structure Theory A Theory B Conclusions References

11. Type of Structure Introduction Theory A description evidence examples problems Theory B Conclusions References Introduction Theory A Theory B description evidence examples problems Conclusions References

12. Type of Structure Introduction Theory A Theory B Conclusions synthesis of x and y implications/future developments References

13. Presentation – general advice When using a computer, use a clear, legible font at a reasonable size (VERDANA or ARIAL, FONT 10 or 11) Double or 1.5 spacing, and leave margins for comments Make sure your name (and the name of the person setting the essay) are on the front Number pages and include a word count Use figures, tables and quotes (when appropriate) Punctuation! Spelling! Grammar! Cite references correctly Species names should be in italics or underlined Do not plagiarise!

14. Exam Essays Answer all the questions (one essay in the exam for SEF031), even if it means leaving some unfinished Be concise Take a few minutes to think about structure at the start. Stick to it, unless you realise you have missed out something absolutely vital When revising, look at previous exam papers and try to plan (not write) essays for the questions

15. Conclusion The function of a piece of writing is to communicate Ask yourself what you are trying to say and how you can best say it. If there is anything you can do to say it more clearly – do it!

16. SEF031 Essay 1 Title Discuss the differences and similarities of the lysogenic and lytic cycle of bacteriophages.

17. SEF031 Essay 1 Title Discuss the differences and similarities of the lysogenic and lytic cycle of bacteriophages.

18. Type of Structure Short Introduction Basic Information from the LIFE book - several paragraphs Text looks better with a free line between paragraphs Additional paragraphs. What is new or novel about this topic from 2008 – 2014? Conclusion synthesis of x and y implications/future developments Reference(s)

19. Information on Recent Developments webofknowledge.com Web of knowledge PubMed

20. Information on Recent Developments

21. Recent Developments - some shortcuts www.sciencedaily.com

22. Recent Developments - some shortcuts http://physorg.com/

23. Type of Structure Short Introduction Basic Information from the LIFE book - several paragraphs Additional paragraphs. What is new or novel about this topic from 2008 – 2014?? Conclusion synthesis of x and y implications/future developments Reference(s)

24. REFERENCING You need to read/consult approximately 3-6 references The first or main reference will be the LIFE book The LIFE book must be cited in the text of the essay and then listed at the end in a section entitled REFERENCE YOU ONLY HAVE TO CITE THE LIFE BOOK IN THE ESSAY WHICH YOU WILL WRITE IN THE WORKSHOP IN WEEK 4.

25. REFERENCING Referencing the LIFE textbook For example.... One of the most important differences between viruses and bacteria is.................... (Sadava et al. 2009). The "et al." is used when a reference is written by more than two authors. If the book was written by just two authors it would be given as, for example (Sadava and Heller 2009). However (Sadava and Heller 2009) is not correct because your main text book has FOUR different authors. References Sadava, D., Hillis, D.M., Heller, H.C. and Berenbaum, M. R. 2009. Life: The Science of Biology. 9th Edition. Sinauer Associates, Inc. Sunderland.

26. REFERENCING – some general rules References do not have to be given at the end of every sentence. If for example you write a paragraph and all information is taken from one source, then you only need to cite the source once at the end of the paragraph. If a paragraph contains information from two different sources, then you need to give both references at the appropriate locations within the paragraph. And so on, if you use more references.

27. REFERENCES Do NOT reference Wikipedia or other sources of information that are not reliable. Best to avoid using “random” biology websites. Use main textbooks, book chapters, or published papers. Do not use A-level biology textbooks

28. Type of Structure Do NOT begin the essay with “In this essay I will.....”. Write directly and succinctly!

29. Writing It is VERY important to write neatly in order for the work to be read and corrected. If your writing cannot be read, then you cannot gain marks for it! Please write your name using CLEAR BLOCK CAPITALS.

30. Marking Criteria See Handout on module website from Week 00 SEFP Marking Criteria

31. Week 4 Essay under exam conditions 50 minutes allowed

32. The Best Essays Excellent standard of written English Excellent understanding of the science, with examples from book & new/novel examples Clearly show how to cite a reference in the text, and list reference at the end of the essay

33. Marking Scheme