Commentary There is clear evidence of ‘Apply a design process to produce a solution’, required for all grade areas, in this submission of work. The mock-up also shows good integration with the development of the concepts. There is a selection of modes, media and presentation skills, required for explanatory note 10. The presentation skills do not quite meet the criteria of ‘high quality’, required for Excellence. These could be improved with a high quality rendered presentation, or high quality rendered freehand sketch/drawing using a greater range of media such as markers to show colour, materials and / or texture. This submission sits at the high end of the Merit grade area.