1. DOL Mr. Hilding English 8

2. 8/26/14 1. we have drank all of the fruit punch eric but mother will buy some more for we kids (8+ errors) 2. they arrived late they missed the beginning of the movie raiders of the lost ark (8+ errors)

3. 8/27/14 3. will you read the novel time warp or will you read the magazine article scientific mysteries over the weekend (9+ errors) 4. i will lay down for a while go watch the movie gandhi (5+ errors)

4. 8/29/14 5. marti and me have ate our lunches therefore well carry the boxes to the room (7+ corrections) 6. unless you lay down for a while youll collaspe from overwork (6+ corrections)

5. 9/2/14 7. inside of the room you could see how good he had sat the dineing room table (6+corrections) 8. vicky is the better of the four athletes but she cant be at all the games (6+corrections)

6. 9/3/14 9. i and my brother seen the movie young frankenstein at the majestic theater (10+) 10. their are two girls who are reading the short story called the indian swing theyll share it in class (10+)

7. 9/10/14 11. betty exclaimed donot touch That hot pan (8+) 12. i should of wore them gloves but i returned them back to my Sister? (8+)

8. 9/11/14 13. to be specific the chicago tribune is different from the chicago sun-times because the former contains more sections (10+) 14. he telled we students to re take the test as a result of hour bad grades (6+)

9. 9/12/14 15. to enjoy a shakespearean play like hamlet a person should read it before seeing it i believe (8+) 16. Since donnas poem entitled springtime won first prize. mr harris our teacher read it to us (12+)

10. 9/15/14 21. the japanese company has began to develop to new computers and they plan to market there producks next year (7+) 22. roy read carls popular mechanics magazine since carl has already wrote his report (10+)

11. 9/16/14 23. cindy she don’t borrow her bicycle to many people however she will leave a friend use it (8+) 24. holy cross church must of purchased the twenty nine trees for it’s landscaping project (7+)

12. 9/17/14 5. if you had shook the malt good you could of drank it easy (7+) 6. please do the following things mail that package type the lists straightening the books and phoning mrs smith (10+)

13. 9/18/14 25. this here quote appeared on the poster be not the first by whom the new is tried (7+) 26. the sun will of rose over the catskill mountains by 610 AM tomorrow (7+)

14. 9/19/14 7. ive never had no desire to have him learn me how to drive because hes to critical (7+) 8. i would of froze that corn but I couldnt get it off of the cob (7+)

15. 9/22/14 27. that woman who is buying a ticket must like to travel alot because she has went to europe every summer for the past ten years (7+) 28. i ran further then the other forty nine people i believe (7+)

16. 9/23/14 29. has sarah took my book again asked george angrily (8+) 30. this rose colored dish was gave to my my mother and i by my Aunt who lives in savannah (9+)