2. Do Now: Working with your partner, identify if the following are run-on sentences: 1.The wolves were howling all night, it was a full moon. 2.The bull's horns were formidable; we were frightened. 3.The TV show was stupid, so I stopped watching. 4.The incense rose into the air it smelled wonderful.

3. Aim: How do you recognize and revise run-on sentences?

4. Aim: How do you recognize and revise run-on sentences? 1.Recognizing Run-On Sentences – Fused sentences – Comma Splices 2.Revising Run-On Sentences

5. Aim: How do you recognize and revise run-on sentences? Independent Clause Gestures are a means of communicating for everyone Independent Clause they are essential for the hearing impaired. Semi-colon Comma + FANBOYS

6. Aim: How do you recognize and revise run-on sentences? Gestures are a means of communication for everyone they are essential for the hearing impaired. – Fused Sentence Gestures are a means of communication for everyone, they are essential for the hearing impaired. – Comma Splice

7. Aim: How do you recognize and revise run-on sentences?

8. The Imaginary Period Tip If a sentence contains two separate ideas, put an imaginary period between them. Now ask: Can BOTH parts now stand alone as a complete sentence? If so, then the sentence might be a run on. I have a test on Thursday it should not be difficult I have a test on Thursday it should not be difficult. The student government election is this week, I have no idea who is running.

9. Aim: How do you recognize and revise run-on sentences? 1.The wolves were howling all night, it was a full moon. 2.The bull's horns were formidable; we were frightened. 3.The TV show was stupid, so I stopped watching. 4.The incense rose into the air it smelled wonderful.

10. Aim: How do you recognize and revise run-on sentences? There are three situations in which run-on sentences are apt to happen: 1. When a pronoun in the second clause refers to a noun in the first clause: The President’s popularity has plummeted, she apparently underestimated the opposition. 2. When a suggestion or directive occurs in the second clause: You will be responsible for this material on the final exam, study it thoroughly now. 3. When two clauses are connected by a transitional expression: Many people think protectionism can halt rising prices, however, the opposite is actually true.

11. Aim: How do you recognize and revise run-on sentences? 1.Recognizing Run-On Sentences 2.Revising Run-On Sentences 1.Comma + FANBOYS 2.Semi-colon 3.Separate sentences 4.Subordinate one of the clauses

12. Aim: How do you recognize and revise run-on sentences? 1.Gestures are a means of communication for everyone, but they are essential for the hearing impaired. (Comma +FANBOYS) 2.Gestures are a means of communication for everyone; they are essential for the hearing impaired. (Semicolon) 3.Gestures are a means of communication for everyone. They are essential for the hearing impaired. (Separate sentences) 4.Although gestures are a means of communication for everyone, they are essential for the hearing impaired. (Subordinate one clause)

13. Aim: How do you recognize and revise run-on sentences? The city had one public swimming pool it stayed packed with children all summer long. The city had one public swimming pool it stayed packed with children all summer long. 1.Comma + FANBOYS 2.Semi-colon 3.Separate sentences 4.Subordinate one of the clauses

14. Aim: How do you recognize and revise run-on sentences? 1.Anamaria opened the boxes crammed with toys, our sprang griffins, dragons, and phoenixes. 2.In the Middle Ages, the streets of London were dangerous places, it was safer to travel by boat along the Thames. 3.Subatomic physics is filled with strange and marvelous particles, tiny bodies of matter that shiver, wobble, pulse, and flatten to no thickness at all. 4.Aidan viewed Sofia Coppola’s Lost in Translation and then wrote a paper describing the film as the work of a mysterious painter.

15. Aim: How do you recognize and revise run-on sentences? Insert an imaginary period between the two sentences. If both ideas can stand alone as complete sentences, the original sentence might be a run on. Check to see whether the two ideas are correctly separated. A semicolon or a comma plus a coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS) should come between the ideas. Join two independent clauses with a semi-colon or with a comma + FANBOYS conjunction in the spot where you placed the imaginary period. Or, turn the imaginary period into a real one, making each idea into a separate sentence.

16. Aim: How do you recognize and revise run-on sentences? The Bottom Line See if your sentence has two independent clauses, and make sure they are separated with a period, a semicolon, or a comma + FANBOYS conjunction. See if your sentence has two independent clauses, and make sure they are separated with a period, a semicolon, or a comma + FANBOYS conjunction.

17. Aim: How do you recognize and revise run-on sentences? Fragments: Missing Independent Clause By paying too much attention to polls can make a political leader unwilling to propose innovative policies. Run On: Run On: Independent Clauses joined improperly I didn't know which job I wanted I was too confused to decide. I didn't know which job I wanted I was too confused to decide.