1. Day 1
Articles written about the economy at that time leave no doubt but that unemployment soared, credit evaporated, and bankruptcies multiplied.
After the Wall Street crash of October 1929 the economy needed help bad.
Correct use of comma after introductory prepositional phrases
Use of adverb to modify a verb
Elimination of unnecessary but after doubt

2. Elimination of unnecessary but after doubt
Day 1
Articles written about the economy at that time leave no doubt that unemployment soared, credit evaporated, and bankruptcies multiplied.
Elimination of unnecessary but after doubt
After the Wall Street crash of October 1929, the economy needed help badly.
Correct use of comma after introductory prepositional phrases
Use of adverb to modify a verb

3. Elimination of but at the beginning of a sentence
Day 2
Franklin Delano Roosevelt won a landslide victory over Herbert Hoover in the 1932 Presidential election.
But all them elected to office faced a hard battle to rescue the economy.
Elimination of but at the beginning of a sentence
Elimination of unnecessary capitalization
Correct pronoun

4. Day 2
Franklin Delano Roosevelt won a landslide victory over Herbert Hoover in the 1932 presidential election.
Elimination of unnecessary capitalization
All those elected to office faced a hard battle to rescue the economy.
Elimination of but at the beginning of a sentence
Correct pronoun

5. Day 3
It don’t seem so bad to us now, it was devastating to people back then since more than 12 million people were out of work in the United States by 1932.
Roosevelt’s plan to rescue the economy was radical; that caused its success.
Use of coordinating conjunction to correct run-on sentence
Correction of unclear pronoun reference
Subject and verb agreement

6. Subject and verb agreement
Day 3
It doesn’t seem so bad to us now, but it was devastating to people back then since more than 12 million people were out of work in the United States by 1932.
Subject and verb agreement
Use of coordinating conjunction to correct run-on sentence
Roosevelt’s plan to rescue the economy was radical; the plan’s originality caused its success.
Correction of unclear pronoun reference

7. Capitalization of geographic area Verb tense compatibility
Day 4
Many families migrated from the midwest to California before the
Depression ended in 1933.
Some people did not welcome these newcomers, but others applauded they’re efforts to survive.
Capitalization of geographic area
Verb tense compatibility
Correction of commonly confused words

8. Day 4
Many families had migrated from the Midwest to California before the
Depression ended in 1933.
Capitalization of geographic area
Verb tense compatibility
Some people did not welcome these newcomers, but others applauded
their efforts to survive.
Correction of commonly confused words

9. Day 5
Life was brutal on the Great Plains. Neither the farmers or animals could find enough water or food to survive.
There was ravaged farms as far as the eye could see.
Subject and verb agreement
Correct use of correlative conjunction
Use of colon to introduce a clarifying idea

10. Day 5
Life was brutal on the Great Plains: Neither the farmers nor animals could find enough water or food to survive.
Use of colon to introduce a clarifying idea
Correct use of correlative conjunction
There were ravaged farms as far as the eye could see.
Subject and verb agreement