1. © 2006 www.teachit.co.uk14948 Literacy Progress Units: Sentences

2. © 2006 www.teachit.co.uk24948 Literacy Progress Unit Aiming for Level 4 Sentences

3. © 2006 www.teachit.co.uk34948 Teacher Notes The PP is adapted from the DfES publication under their Core Licensing Agreement. To read the notes that have been added, print out the slides as ‘notes pages’. Teachers may find it useful to order the original DfES Publication and a link is given in the final slide.

4. © 2006 www.teachit.co.uk44948 Objective: To learn that clauses can be moved within sentences for effect, and to increase fluency and reader interest. Session 16 Varying sentence structure

5. © 2006 www.teachit.co.uk54948 When it is raining football practice is cancelled. Football practice is cancelled when it is raining. If we do our Geography homework on time the teacher praises us. The teacher praises us if we do our Geography homework on time. Varying the order

6. © 2006 www.teachit.co.uk64948 The teacher praises us if we do our Geography homework on time. If we do our Geography homework on time, the teacher praises us. When it is raining, football practice is cancelled. Varying the order Football practice is cancelled when it is raining.

7. © 2006 www.teachit.co.uk74948 I do my homework when I get in from school so that I can watch television without worrying about it When I get in from school I do my homework so that I can watch television without worrying about it So that I can watch television without worrying about it I do my homework when I get in from school Varying the order

8. © 2006 www.teachit.co.uk84948 So that I can watch television without worrying about it, I do my homework when I get in from school. When I get in from school, I do my homework so that I can watch television without worrying about it. I do my homework when I get in from school so that I can watch television without worrying about it Varying the order

9. © 2006 www.teachit.co.uk94948 When the moon went down, the garage door creaked open. When I listened carefully, something rustled in the darkness. When I stared, I could see nothing beyond the vague shapes of old boxes and cartons piled high. Although it was warm in the doorway, there was a musty smell. When I felt brave enough, I struggled into the garage and wedged the door open with a piece of old box. When I did this, light poured into the darkness. When a cobweb brushed my face, I felt the sudden tickle of a spider crawl across my cheek. When I made my way forward, it grew colder and darker. When the moon went down, the garage door creaked open. When I listened carefully, something rustled in the darkness. When I stared, I could see nothing beyond the vague shapes of old boxes and cartons piled high. Although it was warm in the doorway, there was a musty smell. The horror story

10. © 2006 www.teachit.co.uk104948 When the moon went down, the garage door creaked open. When I listened carefully, something rustled in the darkness. When I stared, I could see nothing beyond the vague shapes of old boxes and cartons piled high. Although it was warm in the doorway, there was a musty smell. When the moon went down, the garage door creaked open. I stood still, listening carefully. Something rustled in the darkness. When I stared, I could see nothing beyond the vague shapes of old boxes and cartons piled high. Although it was warm in the doorway, there was a musty smell. When the moon went down, the garage door creaked open. When I listened carefully, something rustled in the darkness. When I stared, I could see nothing beyond the vague shapes of old boxes and cartons piled high. Although it was warm in the doorway, there was a musty smell. When the moon went down, the garage door creaked open. I stood still, listening carefully. Something rustled in the darkness. As I stared, I could see nothing beyond the vague shapes of old boxes and cartons piled high. Although it was warm in the doorway, there was a musty smell. When the moon went down, the garage door creaked open. When I listened carefully, something rustled in the darkness. When I stared, I could see nothing beyond the vague shapes of old boxes and cartons piled high. Although it was warm in the doorway, there was a musty smell. When the moon went down, the garage door creaked open. I stood still, listening carefully. Something rustled in the darkness. As I stared, I could see nothing beyond the vague shapes of old boxes and cartons piled high. Although it was warm in the doorway, there was a musty smell. Changing the order

11. © 2006 www.teachit.co.uk114948 When I felt brave enough, I struggled into the garage and wedged the door open with a piece of old box. When I did this, light poured into the darkness. Together

12. © 2006 www.teachit.co.uk124948 When a cobweb brushed my face, I felt the sudden tickle of a spider crawl across my cheek. When I made my way forward, it grew colder and darker. In pairs

13. © 2006 www.teachit.co.uk134948 Try to write varied sentences in other subjects and bring an example with you to the next session. For the next session

14. © 2006 www.teachit.co.uk144948 Crown Copyright material is reproduced with the permission of the Controller of HMSO and the Queen's Printer for Scotland. This PowerPoint should be used in conjunction with the National Strategy Document issued by the DfES. Ref: 0066-2003 The document, ‘Literacy Progress Unit: Sentences’ can be ordered or downloaded in pdf format free of charge from the website below: http://publications.teachernet.gov.uk/