1. TLQC and Embedded Assessment #2
February 13th
TLQC and Embedded Assessment #2

2. Read the following quotes. Do they effectively follow the TLQC model?
TLQC Reality Check
Read the following quotes.
Do they effectively follow the TLQC model?

3. 1. For example, sara Daniell remarks that, “texting and driving can be just as harmful as driving intoxicated”(Smith 105).
Does #1 work?

4. 1. For example, sara Daniell remarks that, “texting and driving can be just as harmful as driving intoxicated”(Smith 105).
Yes! This one has all the pieces

5. 2. In addition, “texting and driving is against the law”(105).
Does #2 work?

6. 2. In addition, “texting and driving is against the law”(105).
Nope! This one is missing lead-in and author’s name

7. 3. Additionally Smith reveals that teenagers need to keep in mind that, “driving while texting can harm the driver and their passengers in a split-second” (Smith 105).
Does #3 work?

8. 3. Additionally Smith reveals that teenagers need to keep in mind that, “driving while texting can harm the driver and their passengers in a split-second” (Smith 105).
Nope! This one is missing comma after transition-this can make all the difference

9. Research Topic choices
Texting keeps families more closely connected.
Cellphones are an essential part of a teen’s social life.
Teens shouldn’t have social media until they are 18 years old.
Video games are good for the brain.