1. October 22, 2015
Glue the pre-reading questions into your bell ringer section and ANSWER THEM!

2. Today’s Objectives
You will create a concluding paragraph the presents a concession and rebuttal as well as a call to action to provide a powerful ending to your essay
You will revise and edit your rough draft in order to portray a working plan to a successful score 3 or 4 essay
You will read and annotate for plot “The Tell-Tale Heart” in order to create a storyboard presentation in preparation for script writing another story

3. Conclusion Model
Copy and Watch as I write the conclusion for our shared topic using the t-chart from pre-writing
*remember ethos will be present in my grammar, spelling, organization & focus, as well as when I make my concession & rebuttal/counterargument*

4. Your turn!
With the same partner with whom you wrote your body paragraphs, you will write the conclusion of your essay
Remember to use your T-chart!
You have 10 minutes

5. Theme Hook The number one type of hook used in AP essays is the THEME
Create a theme for your essay based on what you have written
Remember a theme is
Universal
General
Represents what you want the reader to learn/agree with
You have 10 minutes to develop your hook

6. Revise & Edit Rough Draft
Next, I will show you how to revise & edit your rough draft in 10 minutes or less!
First off, check the spelling of any words of which you are unsure
Secondly, upgrade your vocabulary
You need at LEAST 3 higher level words from the back wall (writing vocabulary)
Thirdly, check your transitions
Do you have at least six?
Fourth
Fix your contractions: Academic essays do NOT contain contractions because they are considered slang

7. “The Tell-Tale Heart”
We will read the story in order to create a storyboard based on the plot
As we read, write down the corresponding plot element and draw a sketch of what is happening at that moment
IMAGERY!

8. Storyboard Rubric 16 points: All six elements contain pictures
16 points: All six elements include at least three sentences including one quote from the story
16 points: Storyboard is colorful and neat
16 points: All six elements are CORRECT
16 points: No grammar errors
16 points: No spelling errors
4 points: Names on storyboard

9. Write down things we need to change/improve
Video Rough Draft
Write down things we need to change/improve

10. Leadership HALL OF FAME
Write your name and what profession you wish to join when you reach adulthood –where you will be a LEADER!