1. By Zhoushan Greentown Yuhua (International) School
Writing:
A Special Day
By Zhoushan Greentown Yuhua (International) School
Tina Qi

3. A special day What happened to Millie and Amy?
They met a ghost in the park.
a ghost

4. they weren’t afraid any more.
Skimming
Read and try to finish the table.
When
Where
Who
What
How
(feeling)
One Saturday morning
In Sunshine Park
Millie ,Amy and Andy
They heard a “ghost” in the park.
At first,
they felt afraid.
When
they found it was a cat,
they weren’t afraid any more.

5. 4 1 3 5 7 2 6 Practice Number the following sentences
________they met Andy.
________Millie and Amy went to Sunshine Park.
________they heard a noise from the bushes.
________Milly told Andy everything.
_________they took the little cat to the animal centre.
________they sat under the big tree.
________Andy heard the noise and found a little cat. 1 3 5 7 2 6

6. 4 1 3 5 7 2 6 Practice Fill in the blanks with link words(连接词).
On their way home
____________they met Andy.
____________Millie and Amy went to Sunshine Park.
____________they heard a noise from the bushes.
____________Milly told Andy everything.
____________they took the little cat to the animal centre.
____________they sat under the big tree.
____________Andy heard the noise and found a little cat. 1
One Sunday morning 3
Suddenly 5
Then 7
Then 2
As usual 6
Later that day

7. When When _____ it miaowed, it sounded like a noise.
Task 1
Fill in the blanks with after and when.
When
_____ it miaowed, it sounded like a noise.
_____Andy heard the noise, he searched the bushes.
_____ Ben lay（躺） on the ground, a woman help send him to the hospital.
_____a young man hit me,he ran away quickly.
After
When
After

8. Miilie and Amy went to Sunshine Park.
Task 2
Rewrite some sentences.
Miilie and Amy went to Sunshine Park.
They love to chat there.
Miilie and Amy went to Sunshine
Park________they love to chat there.
because

9. so that so that Miilie and Amy were scared.
They left the park quickly. so
that
Miilie and Amy were _____scared_____they left the park quickly.
They took it to the animal centre.
The cat was ______ weak ______they took it to the animal centre.
The cat was weak. so
that

10. What a special day!
Ben

11. When Who Where What How Last Friday morning Ben, the young man, a lady
上周五的早晨，大雨倾盆，行人都小心翼翼地走着。在上学的路上，一个年轻人突然把Ben撞倒了。随后这个男人逃跑了。当Ben躺在地上时，一位女士帮助把他送到医院。为此，他感到很高兴，对他来说这是糟糕的一天也是特别一天。
When
Who
Where
What
How
Last Friday morning
Ben, the young man, a lady
on his way to school
rain heavily，walk carefully
hit ，run away
lie(lay) on the ground，help... send...
happy，
a bad day，
a special day

12. A good article When Who Where What How Summary Clear structure 清楚的结构
Link words
连接词
Rich content
丰富的内容
Correct grammar
准确的语法
A Special Day I Remember（60-80词）
and, but, however,
also, What’s more.
suddenly...
because...
so...that...
when...
after...
When
Who
Where
What
How
Para1
was/were/played/went...
Para2

13. Let's share
* Exchange your composition with your partner （交换分享）
* If you can, help your partner correct the composition.（互相批改）

14. Show Time

15. Yesterday is history,
Tomorrow is mystery,
Today is a gift.
Every day can be a special day!

16. Homework 1.Revise your writing to make it better.
2.Writing: A ______ day

17. Thank You!

18. 1 Practice Number the following sentences ________they met Andy.
________Millie and Amy went to Sunshine Park.
________they heard a noise from the bushes.
________Milly told Andy everything.
_________they took the little cat to the animal centre.
________they sat under the big tree.
________Andy heard the noise and found a little cat. 1

19. 在一个周五的早晨，大雨倾盆，行人都小心翼翼地走着。Ben在上学的路上，突然一个年轻人撞倒了他。随后这个男人逃跑了。当Ben躺在地上时，一位女士帮助把他送到医院。为此，他感到很高兴，对他来说这是糟糕的一天也是特别一天。
When
Who
Where
What
How

20. _____ it miaowed, it sounded like a noise.
Task 1
Fill in the blanks with after and when.
_____ it miaowed, it sounded like a noise.
_____Andy heard the noise, he searched the bushes.
_____ Ben lay（躺） on the ground, a woman
help send him to the hospital.
_____a young man hit me,he ran away quickly.

21. Miilie and Amy went to Sunshine Park.
Task 2
Rewrite some sentences.
Miilie and Amy went to Sunshine Park.
They love to chat there.
Miilie and Amy went to Sunshine
Park________they love to chat there.

22. Miilie and Amy were scared.
They left the park quickly.
Miilie and Amy were _____scared_____they left the park quickly.
They took it to the animal centre.
The cat was weak.
The cat was ______ weak ______they took it to the animal centre.

23. A good article Summary Clear structure 清楚的结构 Link words 连接词
Rich content
丰富的内容
Correct grammar
准确的语法
A Special Day I Remember（60-80词）
and, but, however,
also, What’s more.
suddenly...
because...
so...that...
when...
after...

24. Summary
How to write
where
who
what
when
writing
how
why