1. MDA assorted comments-2
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2. Abstract MDA has still left a number of unresolved comments
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Abstract
MDA has still left a number of unresolved comments
Lots of them are “editorial”, and we consider some of these in this presentation
862, 560, 268, 3553, 1044, 1856, 3493
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3. 4/24/2019
ID 862
Is it MDAOP Set Teardown or MDAOP Teardown (as in table s48). Fix one way or the other throughout draft
MDAOP Set Teardown, p39 lines 13 and 17. bSee D1.05 Sec Page 35, lines 48 and 53.
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4. 4/24/2019
ID 530, 268, 3553
Ids ask for more elaborate request codes and a table. In fact, trimmed down in 1.03 as compared to 1.0
Make a table of more reply codes (Overlap, MAF limit, not supported)?
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5. ID 530, 268, 3553 Reply code Meaning accept 1
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ID 530, 268, 3553
Reply code
Meaning
accept 1
Reject: MDAOP Set Reservation Conflict 2
Reject: MAF limit exceeded
Other
Reserved
Add this table as Table s34xx Below Figure s34. Replace line 21 on p34 With The Reply codes are as defined in Figure s34xx.
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6. 4/24/2019
ID 1044
Clause is awkwardly worded. Clause defines TX-RX times as including any time an MP is either a transmitter and a receiver, and not just MDAOPs".
Counter: Text already changed in D1.05, see P82, line 30.
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7. MDAOP Advertisements Request element
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ID 1856
Defines an “empty” element
Octets: 1 1
Element ID
Length
MDAOP Advertisements Request element
Change Element to action frame format (locate in Resource Coordination)
Remove elt , and entry from table 7.26
Add The following frame format to Section with a new action value in Table s23
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8. MDA advertisement request frame format
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Clause Mesh Deterministic Access MDA Advertisement frame format
The MDAOP Advertisements frame is transmitted by an MDA-active MP to request MDA advertisements from neighbors. The frame body of a MDAOP Advertisements frame is shown in Table xx.
MDA advertisement request frame format
Order
Information 1
Category 2
Action Value
The Category field is set to the value in Table 7.24 for category Mesh Resource Coordination
The action field is set to the value in Table s23 for this action frame type.
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9. Should we do this for all MDA Ids?
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Should we do this for all MDA Ids?
Mesh Deterministic Access frame body
Order
Information
Category
Action Value
One or more MDA-related elements
Define an individual MDA action frame format, rather than one container frame format?
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10. 4/24/2019
ID 3493
Optional features of IEEE s should be reflected in the PICS
Change issue identifier from MAC MDA to General G07
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11. 4/24/2019
Suggested motion
Move to adopt the resolution suggested in this presentation 2005/r1.
There is a version of the comment resolution spreadsheet available as well.
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