1. Writing About Personal Traits
Unit 6 I’m more outgoing than my sister.
Writing About Personal Traits
Luo Tingting
from Wenzhou No.23 Middle School

2. My Friend
Paopao Soldier

3. Paopao Soldier is outgoing.
enjoy parties
make new friends
Paopao Soldier is outgoing.
Paopao Soldier is outgoing. He enjoys all kinds
of parties and often plays the guitar happily there.
He likes to make new friends in school.

4. Paopao Soldier is outgoing
topic sentence
主题句
Paopao Soldier is outgoing. He enjoys all kinds
of parties and often plays the guitar happily there.
He likes to make new friends in school..
All sentences in this paragraph(段落) tell us
_____________________.
Paopao Soldier is outgoing

5. Paopao Soldier is funny.
He has big bright eyes.
He never gets out of bed before lunch.
He is good at telling jokes.
He often makes us laugh when he dances.
He swims 1000 meters every morning.
Paopao Soldier is funny. He is good at telling
jokes. He often makes us laugh when he dances.

6. + Paopao Soldier is outgoing and funny. outgoing funny
Paopao Soldier is outgoing and funny. He enjoys
all kinds of parties and often plays the guitar happily
there. He likes to make new friends. Also, he is
good at telling jokes. He often makes us laugh when
he dances.
Paopao Soldier is outgoing. He enjoys all kinds
of parties and often plays the guitar happily there.
He likes to make new friends in school.
All sentences in this paragraph(段落) tell us
__________________________________.
Paopao Soldier is outgoing and funny
Paopao Soldier is funny. He is good at telling
jokes. He often makes us laugh when he dances.
topic sentence
主题句

7. Paopao Soldier is kind and popular.
He gets to school early every morning
and read English books for 30 minutes.
Also, he is good with his friends and
tells a lot of jokes. His friends like him.
All sentences in the paragraph(段落) tell us
__________________________________ B
Paopao Soldier is kind and popular.
He is friendly to other students and often
helps them to study English. Also, he has
a lot of good friends and they really like
him very much.

8. My Friend
Wang Yiming
(Xiaobao)

9. Xiaobao is smart and hard-working.
have new ideas
for dancing
get good grades
in …
do lots of homework
spend much time
reading books

10. My Friend
Kung Fu Panda

11. Kung Fu Panda is athletic but a little lazy.
fast
best
stronger
Kung Fu
lazy
never stop eating
sleep a lot

12. Task: To write a paragraph about personal traits.
Competition Time
Boys VS Girls
Task: To write a paragraph about personal traits.
(段落) (个人特征)
All sentences in your paragraph tell the topic
sentence.
2) There are some good sentences.

13. Topic Sentence:
My friend Tina is beautiful but a little quiet.
bright eyes
listen…alone
love reading…
doesn’t like parties

14. It is not enough to succeed. Failure is the mother of success.
Be stronger!
Failure is the mother of success.
Try another!

15. Homework
Level A: Write a paragraph with the topic sentence “John is athletic and popular”. You can use phrases like “be good at”, “run fast”, “make new friends” and “a friendly guy”.
Level B: Write a paragrapy with the topic sentence “Mary is clever but a little wild”.