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What did you do during “Stella” the half day?
Academic and non-academic responses.

2. Mr. Short English 12: College Now 8 March 2018
Responding & Revising
Mr. Short
English 12: College Now
8 March 2018

3. Today’s Agenda: Reflection on Winter Storms Cool Research Schedule
Paper Submission Info
Responding
Time to Work

4. Happy International Women’s Day

8. Extenuating Circumstances:
This was literally the largest storm to hit our area in recorded history, surpassing:
The Storm of 1966,
“The Big Dump”1993, &
The St. Valentine’s Day Storm 2007.
If you completed your research paper, congratulations.
If you did not complete your paper, you need to change your approach to school work before college.

9. Transition Slide: Last year (2017) was wild. This year (2018) was not.
What did you do with the ½ day off?
Let’s look at what research can lead to with the videos on the next slides…

10. https://youtu.be/zpkUjrC3-Ds

11. https://youtu.be/xtmwI5K2i3E

12. Calendar: RJ2’s paper due Monday 12 March 2018.
Use this time wisely. Follow the schedule. 26 27 28 1 2
Outlines & paper intro
Final tips
RJ2 DUE
Presentations
(Speaking wedding)
Plagiarism videos
Snow Day 5 6 7 8 9
-In-Text citation
HW: Revise outline
-Pre-Writing
(Carlsen) & Drafting
HW: In-Text worksheet 1-8
-Paper documentation (Trimmer)
HW: Type rough draft
-Responding & Revising
HW: Finish peer comments.
-Peer revision
-Common writing errors
“That”
HW: Finish paper 12 13 14 15 16
RJ2 Paper DUE
-RJ3 intro
-Research
& Topic Check
-Improving the process
-Scholarship information

13. Schedule: Prewriting: The past few weeks Drafting: This week
Think / Research
Drafting: This week
Finish your rough draft.
Responding: Today
Find a friend
Revising: Tonight’s HW
Make it better
Proofreading: Friday & Weekend
Make it correct
Writing Checklist (handout)
Publishing: Monday
Share the finished product
Due on Google Docs and as the bell ringer

14. Paper Submission Monday:
Your essay should be 4-5 pieces of paper.
4 pieces of paper is 3 full pages and any amount on page 4.
You can write any amount on page 5.
Do not use page 6 for your essay.
Your Works Cited should be page 5 or 6.
This separate sheet is after your essay.
Be sure it has your name and page number (5 or 6) in the top right corner.

15. Paper Submission: Your papers are due Monday before class starts.
Submit via Google Classroom.
Due before 10:18 A.M. or 2:05 P.M.
Make the title your document RJ2 Paper.
Submit a physical copy in class.
Due as bell ringer.

16. A Former Student’s Message:
Why do you need to know how to research and write papers?
The following is a conversation between Mr. Short and his former student who graduated from Whitesboro High School in 2012.

19. The purpose of research journals, papers & presentations is to prepare you for college.

20. Quoted In: Articles contain quotes.
When quoting a quote from an article, use the format shown below:
Give credit to author with a lead in.
Quote the selection.
Cite the article.
According to Steve Rogers “the Hydra organization is dangerous” (quoted in Schmidt 2).

21. Drafting Tips: Use quotations as proof and support of YOUR words.
About 80% to 85% of your paper should be YOUR words.
You should have about two quotes per page (6-10 total) depending on your paper length.
You should use about five sources for this paper.
Focus on what YOU are saying and use quotes to offer solid informational support from your articles.
Always end with your words, not a quotation.

22. Responding: When responding, look for: Solid proof of thesis.
Citation issues.
Organization.
Areas or confusion.
Errors.
Anything.
Make positive remarks too.
Tell your partner when/what they did well.

23. Time to Work: Share with a partner.
Identify your partner BEFORE you begin working.
You must share with someone.
Do what you need to for your paper to be in its “final form.”
Good luck!

24. Use the time given to you.
Homework:
Finish commenting on your partner’s paper.
Get these done for tomorrow’s editing and the weekend’s finalizing.
Use the time given to you.