1. Body Paragraph Development

2. SWBAT develop topic sentences
DO NOW: Make a list of all of the ideas that help you prove your thesis.

3. SHARE
What are some of your ideas?

4. Turning the idea into a statement

5. Body Paragraph Structure
Topic Sentence Hemingway’s difficult childhood led him to have complicated view on women and their role in society
Next Sentence: Share a specific biographical detail to support that sentence
Next Sentence: Insert a quote from your research to help support (CITATION)

6. Body Paragraph Structure
Next Sentence: Analyze how/what does that quote say about Hemingway’s relationship with women.
Next Sentence: Another detail from his life.
Next Sentence: A direct quote
Next Sentence: How does this help us to understand his issues with women?

7. QUOTES They belong in the middle of a paragraph. Not at the end.
Not as the first sentence.
You have to help it (the quote) make sense.

8. CITATION A lot of you have articles.
The MLA citation format for articles is
Author named in a signal phrase Ordinarily, introduce the material being cited with a signal phrase that includes the author’s name. In addition to preparing readers for the source, the signal phrase allows you to keep the parenthetical citation brief.
Frederick Lane reports that employers do not necessarily have to use software to monitor how their employees use the Web: employers can “use a hidden video camera pointed at an employee’s monitor” and even position a camera ”so that a number of monitors [can] be viewed at the same time” (147).
The signal phrase — Frederick Lane reports — names the author; the parenthetical citation gives the page number of the book in which the quoted words may be found.

9. MLA Citation Continued
Author named in parentheses If a signal phrase does not name the author, put the author’s last name in parentheses along with the page number. Use no punctuation between the name and the page number.
Companies can monitor employees’ every keystroke without legal penalty, but they may have to combat low morale as a result (Lane 129).

10. Your TASK
Start writing topic sentences.
Draft will be due on MOnday