1. Writing a Thesis Statement: Tips For All Essays
Dr. Afxendiou
AP World History and Geography
Sachem North High School

2. Develop Thesis and Introduction Paragraph
Thesis must respond to the question directly by telling the reader why/how you will complete the task by using the terms of the question
Can be one or more sentences
Make sure to address ALL parts of the questions

3. Elements of a Comparative Thesis
All Thesis Statements must include:
Time Period
Region(s)
Categories of Analysis/Topics
Explanation of a similarity or a difference for EACH of the categories of analysis using specific details

4. Sample Thesis Outline for Comparative Essay
When analyzing (thematic category), (thematic category) and (thematic category) in (item compared) and (item compared) during/between (time period/where), there are many similarities and differences. With regards to (thematic category #1), a (S/D) is (identify S/D), due to (brief explanation). Regarding (thematic category #2), a (S/D) is (identify S/D), due to (brief explanation). Finally, when examining (thematic category #3), a (identify S/D) is because (brief explanation).

5. I am comparing…

6. My essay prompt
Analyze similarities and differences in the texture, taste, and purpose of apple pie and chocolate chip cookies during your adolescent years in your mom’s kitchen.
Thematic category #1: texture
Thematic category #2: taste
Thematic category #3: purpose

7. Filling in the information
When analyzing (thematic category-texture), (thematic category-taste) and (thematic category- purpose) of (item compared-apple pie) and (region-chocolate chip cookies) during/between (time period/where-my adolescent years in my mom’s kitchen), there are many similarities and differences. With regards to (thematic category #1-texture), a (S/D-difference) is (identify S/D- that while the apple pie is soft the cookies are crunchy), due to (brief explanation-the size of the two treats). Regarding (thematic category #2-taste), a (S/D-similarity) is (identify S/D- that they are both sweet), due to (brief explanation-the fact that they both have sugar as a major ingredient). Finally, when examining (thematic category #3-purpose), a (S/D-difference) is (identify S/D-is that apple pie is a dessert while cookies are a snack) because (brief explanation- the apple pie requires a plate and a fork while the cookies can be eaten on the run).

8. Now, your turn…
Read your introduction to your comparative essay. On a clean piece of paper with your name on it, re-write the introduction using the formula provided. You have until November 23rd to re-write your essay as many times as you wish.