1. 陈兵 Vida

2. 秋水共长天一色
落霞与孤鹜齐飞

3. Poems

4. Cinquain Part 1 Review and Show Cinquain 五行诗 Reading Nursery Rhymes 童谣
List Poem 清单诗
Cinquain
Cinquain 五行诗
Haiku 俳句
Tang Poetry 唐诗

5. Learning, complaining, progressing Passion and creation too
Students
Energetic, lovely
Learning, complaining, progressing
Passion and creation too
Vida’s

6. A Red, Red Rose Part 2 Appreciate and Imitate By Robert Burns

7. Robert Burns 25 January 1759 – 21 July 1796 Scottish poet
National poet of Scotland
----When Scotland forgets Burns, then history will forget Scotland

8. A Red, Red Rose O my luve's like a red, red rose,
That‘s newly sprung in June.
O, my luve's like the melodie,
That‘s sweetly play’d in tune!
As fair art thou, my bonnie lass,
So deep in luve am I;
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
Till a’ the seas gang dry
Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi’ the sun;
I will luve thee still, my dear,
While the sands o’ life shall run.
And fare thee weel, my only luve
And fare thee weel a while!
And I will come again, my luve,
Tho’ it were ten thousand mile.

9. Appreciation 2. Image（意象） 3. Rhetoric（修辞） hyperbole（夸张） rhyme （押韵）
1. Theme
2. Image（意象）
3. Rhetoric（修辞）
simile（明喻）
hyperbole（夸张）
rhyme （押韵）
落霞与孤鹜齐飞
秋水共长天一色

10. Theme O my luve's like a red, red rose That‘s newly sprung in June:
O, my luve's like the melodie.
That‘s sweetly play’d in tune!
As fair art thou, my bonnie lass,
So deep in luve am I;
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
Till a’ the seas gang dry
Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi’ the sun;
I will luve thee still, my dear,
While the sands o’ life shall run.
And fare thee weel, my only luve
And fare thee weel a while!
And I will come again, my luve,
Tho’ it were ten thousand mile.

11. What images are used in the poem? rose melody rock sands seas
eternal
passionate
firm
deep
pleasant
love

12. Rhetoric O my luve's like a red, red rose
Simile (明喻)
O my luve's like a red, red rose
appearance
O, my luve's like the melodie
inner beauty
Why did the poet compare
his sweetheart to a red rose?

13. Simile/metaphor（暗喻） Her tears fell like rain.
Cars on the road far away look like ants hurrying home.
His words became a compass for his life.
Life is a ship on the ocean meeting both sunny and stormy days.

14. Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun;
Hyperbole(夸张)
Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi’ the sun;
I will luve thee still, my dear,
While the sands o’ life shall run.
山无棱，江水为竭，冬雷震震，夏雨雪，天地合，乃敢与君绝。
——《先秦汉魏晋南北朝诗·汉鼓吹曲辞·上邪》

15. Rhyme（押韵） O my luve's like a red, red rose Alliteration（头韵）
That‘s newly sprung in June:
O, my luve's like the melodie.
That‘s sweetly play’d in tune
Alliteration（头韵）
As fair art thou, my bonnie lass,
So deep in luve am I;
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
Till a’ the seas gang dry
End rhyme(尾韵)
Assonance (腹韵)
While the sands o’ life shall run.

16. A Red, Red Rose O my luve's like a red, red rose,
That‘s newly sprung in June.
O, my luve's like the melodie,
That‘s sweetly play’d in tune!
As fair art thou, my bonnie lass,
So deep in luve am I;
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
Till a’ the seas gang dry
Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi’ the sun;
I will luve thee still, my dear,
While the sands o’ life shall run.
And fare thee weel, my only luve
And fare thee weel a while!
And I will come again, my luve,
Tho’ it were ten thousand mile.

17. Time to be a poet
Choose your topic and imitate the poem A RED, RED ROSE to write your own poem and share it with your partners.

18. O, my ______ is like_____________; _____________________________.
______________________________________.

19. Show Time O, my ______ is like_____________;
_____________________________.
O, my ______ is like _________________;
______________________________________.
Show Time

20. Assignment
Think about: As a product of western culture, a rose can be worldwide recognized as a symbol of love. How can we circulate our own Chinese culture worldwide?

21. Thank you for joining us!

22. Show time Content Standard Evaluation Theme
Dose your poem have a clear theme?
Rhyme
Have you used some rhyming words?
Image
Dose your poem include some clear images?
Rhetoric
Have you used simile?
Have you used hyperbole?

23. Taste the poem! Feel the love! Purify your heart!

24. O,my Luve's like a red,red rose,      That's newly sprung in June.
     O,my Luve's like the melodie,      That's sweetly play'd in tune.
     As fair art thou, my bonie lass,      So deep in Luve am I,
     And I will Luve thee still, my dear,      Till a'the seas gang dry.
     Till a'the seas gang dry, my dear,
     And the rocks melt wi'the sun,      O,I will Luve thee still,my dear,      While the sands o'life shall run.
     And fare thee weel,my only Luve,      And fare thee weel a while
     And I will come again, my Luve,      Tho'it were ten thousand mile!
a red red rose

25. melodie
Seas gang dry and rocks melt wi’ the sun

26. 一朵红红的玫瑰 王守仁译 啊，我的爱人像一朵红红的玫瑰 在六月里含苞绽开； 啊，我的爱人像一支乐曲 演奏得甜美而合拍！
你是那么美丽，我的好姑娘，
我爱你那么深切：
我会永远爱你，亲爱的，
直到四海枯竭：
直到四海枯竭，亲爱的， 岩石被太阳熔解； 亲爱的，我会永远爱你， 只要生命永不停歇。 再见吧，我惟一的爱人， 我和你暂时别离！ 我会回来的，我的爱人， 即使相隔万里。

27. A Red, Red Rose O my Luve's like a red, red rose
That‘s newly sprung in June:
O, my Luve's like the melodie.
That‘s sweetly play’d in tune!
As fair art thou, my bonnie lass,
So deep in luve am I;
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
Till a’ the seas gang dry
Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi’ the sun;
I will luve thee still, my dear,
While the sands o’ life shall run.
And fare thee weel, my only luve
And fare thee weel a while!
And I will come again, my luve,
Tho’ it were ten thousand mile.

28. eternal love

29. Symbol Rose a. eternal love Rock b. deep love
Sands c. staunch（坚定的） love
Seas d. passionate(热情的) love

30. Find All the Old English
Stanza 1
O my luve's like a red, red rose
That’s newly sprung in June:
O, my luve's like the melodie.
That‘s sweetly play’d in tune!

31. As fair art thou, my bonnie lass, So deep in luve am I;
Stanza 2
As fair art thou, my bonnie lass,
So deep in luve am I;
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
Till a’ the seas gang dry.

32. Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun;
Stanza 3
Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi’ the sun;
I will luve thee still, my dear,
While the sands o’ life shall run.
A’: all, wi’: with, o’: of

33. And fare thee weel, my only luve And fare thee weel a while!
Stanza 4
And fare thee weel, my only luve
And fare thee weel a while!
And I will come again, my luve,
Tho’ it were ten thousand mile.
Weel: well, Tho: though

34. A Red, Red Rose O my luve's like a red, red rose
That‘s newly sprung in June:
O, my luve's like the melodie.
That‘s sweetly play’d in tune!
As fair art thou, my bonnie lass,
So deep in luve am I;
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
Till a’ the seas gang dry
Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi’ the sun;
I will luve thee still, my dear,
While the sands o’ life shall run.
And fare thee weel, my only luve
And fare thee weel a while!
And I will come again, my luve,
Tho’ it were ten thousand mile.

35. Detailed Understanding
Climax
Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi’ the sun;
I will luve thee still, my dear,
While the sands o’ life shall run.
山无棱，江水为竭，冬雷震震，夏雨雪，天地合，乃敢与君绝。
——《先秦汉魏晋南北朝诗·汉鼓吹曲辞·上邪》

36. Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun;
Hyperbole(夸张)
Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi’ the sun;
faithfulness

37. Gaining, shopping, disappearing
Money
Important, attractive
Gaining, shopping, disappearing
Easy come, easy go
Wealth

38. charming
fragrant
beautiful
elegant
red-hot

39. Knowledgeable, unselfish, Understanding, caring, guiding
Teachers
Knowledgeable, unselfish,
Understanding, caring, guiding
The one we respect
Forever

40. 秋水共长天一色
落霞与孤鹜齐飞