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1 Text Study Notes to the Text Words and Expressions Idea Sharing
1 1 Text Study Notes to the Text Words and Expressions Idea Sharing Writing

2 Understanding Structure Analysis Summary Reproduction

3 I. Understanding 1. Match the Numbers (Paras.1-2) a. 185,000
Text Study—Understanding I. Understanding 1. Match the Numbers (Paras.1-2) a. 185,000 b. nearly 500,000 c. one million d. 102,000 e. 204,000 __ killed since 1970s __ killed in the past few years __ expected to die __ infected with HIV virus __ black & Latinos diagnosed with HIV e d a c b

4 2. Tick the Right (Paras.3-6)
Text Study—Understanding 2. Tick the Right (Paras.3-6) What are correct about the South Carolina AIDS Education Network ? a. It is a government organization. b. It combats the spread of AIDS. c. It gets a lot of money. d. It operates programs out of a beauty shop. e. It uses videos and publications. f. Hairdressers’ are not in the network.

5 3. Explain the Methods (Paras.7-13)
Text Study—Understanding 3. Explain the Methods (Paras.7-13) Work in pairs and explain methods 1-3 with the help of the key words in the following charts: Method 1 speak to your community Problem a low literacy rate Solution draw pictures, familiar faces and language Evaluation more effect

6 simple, better, adult, help Method 3 redefine
Text Study—Understanding Method 2 train teenagers Problem spread fastest Solution establish, program Evaluation simple, better, adult, help Method 3 redefine Problem misinformation Solution emphasize, regardless

7 Problem + Solution + Evaluation + Summary
Text Study—Structure Analysis II. Structure Analysis A. The Writing Model of the Passage: Problem + Solution + Evaluation + Summary The basic structure of this pattern is problem-solution-evaluation. There are some possible differences in the pattern but the basic parts are problems and solutions. Can you list some typical expressions for this pattern?

8 The typical expressions for this pattern: expressions function
Text Study—Structure Analysis The typical expressions for this pattern: expressions function the problem, the question introduce a problem to solve …, the solution introduce the solution the result, as a result introduce result, effect or evaluation Now, find the problem, solution and evaluation of this passage. Tips

9 Text Study—Structure Analysis
The Problem: 1. AIDS has killed many Americans, and still many with the HIV virus are expected to die. (Para. 1) 2. Women and youth in some communities are making up the fastest segment of people with AIDS. (Para. 2) 3. American governments have been slow in stopping the spread of the disease. (Para. 3)

10 The Solution: A number of local organizations have emerged.
Text Study—Structure Analysis The Solution: A number of local organizations have emerged. The South Carolina AIDS Education Network is one of them. (Paras.3-4) 1.The organization operates its educational programs out of a beauty shop. (Paras.4-5) 2. The network began helping the hair stylists set up similar programs in their shops. (Para.6)

11 Speak to your community in a way they can hear. (Paras.8-9)
Text Study—Structure Analysis 3. It has developed several techniques useful to other groups doing similar work. (Para.7) Speak to your community in a way they can hear. (Paras.8-9) Train teenagers to educate their peers. (Para.10) Redefine “at risk” to include women from different backgrounds and marriage status. (Paras.11-12)

12 The Evaluation : The Summary :
Text Study—Structure Analysis The Evaluation : These programs are not the only solutions to the crisis but, until there is a cure for AIDS, they are only safe measures against the virus. (Para.13) The Summary : We must not let cultural, racial, or social barriers distract us from the job that must be done. Nor can we let political inefficiency stop us from our task. Everyone must become an educator and learn to live. (Para.14)

13 Problem-solution-evaluation
Text Study—Structure Analysis B. The way to develop paragraphs: A General Statement + Problem-solution-evaluation The writer lists some ways of winning the war against AIDS. Each method is presented in a general statement. He tries to argue for the idea in a problem-solution-evaluation way.

14 Method 2 : Train teenagers to educate their peers. The problem
Text Study—Structure Analysis Method 2 : Train teenagers to educate their peers. The problem The solution The evaluation

15 The problem The solution
Text Study—Structure Analysis The problem AIDS is spreading fastest among teenagers in the rural South. The solution Establish an “AIDS Busters” program. The program trains youth (from 8 to 26) to go into the community and teach AIDS lessons to their peers.

16 Young people make the lessons simple.
Text Study—Structure Analysis The evaluation Young people make the lessons simple. They explain the risk of catching AIDS to their friends much better than an adult can. They help parents understand the peer pressure their children experience. Method 1 & 3 are developed in the same way. Work with your partner and find the details.

17 Text Study—Summary III. Summary Since it was ________ in 1970s, AIDS has killed _________ of Americans. Women and youth in rural Southern communities are most ______ to be ________ with AIDS. In _____ of the spread of AIDS and lack of government activity to stop it, some local organizations ________. The South Carolina AIDS Education Network formed to help _______ the number of AIDS _____. In some communities, handing ____ AIDS literature and ________ people to read it is not very _______ diagnosed thousands likely infected place emerged reduce cases out expecting effective

18 Text Study—Summary because many people cannot read. Besides, AIDS is ________ fastest among teenagers in the _____ South. So these groups have _________ some ____ methods of ________ the spread of AIDS, ______ include: speak to your community in a way they can hear; train teenagers to educate their _____; and ______ “at risk” to include women from different backgrounds and marriage ______. In other _____, everyone should ________ the war ______ AIDS. spreading rural developed best combating which peers redefine status words sign up for against

19 IV. Reproduction Group work. Suppose you are committee
Text Study—Reproduction IV. Reproduction Group work. Suppose you are committee members of the South Carolina AIDS Education Network. Now a meeting is being held to find solutions to the spread of AIDS. After the meeting, send your representative to report your solutions, which are expected to be reasonable, convincing and effective. Make good use of the information in Section A. A sample beginning

20 A sample beginning After discussion, we’ve worked out some
Text Study—Reproduction A sample beginning After discussion, we’ve worked out some solutions to the problems we are faced with. To begin with, immediate actions should be taken to collect money to keep our organization going…

21 Active Expressions Focus Study

22 Notes to the Text—Active Expressions
I. Active Expressions In English, you may find some expressions formed by very common words, but they are active and powerful. e.g. What’s on at the cinema tonight? 今晚电影院上演什么? What’s he up to? 他忙什么呢?

23 Find the active expressions:
Notes to the Text—Active Expressions Find the active expressions: 1. Another 185,000 … with the HIV virus are expected to die within the next year. 2. …and state governments have been slow in implementing programs… 3. To reach more people in the community, … programs operate out of a beauty shop. 4. The owner hands out AIDS information to all her clients … 5. … the AIDS epidemic threatens to wipe out an entire generation and …

24 think that sth. will happen
Notes to the Text—Active Expressions expect sb to do think that sth. will happen be slow in hesitate to act; not quick to learn hand out v. Handout n. distribute sth.; a piece of paper with information distribute by a teacher reach communicate with; speak to wipe out destroy, remove, or get rid of sth completely Practice

25 Translation 今天是星期天,我没有想到这么多人来听讲座。 据报道,这个城市在交通管理方面非常滞后。
Notes to the Text—Active Expressions Translation 今天是星期天,我没有想到这么多人来听讲座。 据报道,这个城市在交通管理方面非常滞后。 救济人员在向生还者分发紧急配给品。 这是我的电话,以防你要联系我。 由于操作不当,所有储存于电脑的信息消失殆尽。 keys

26 Relief workers were handing out emergency rations to the survivors.
Notes to the Text—Active Expressions Today is Sunday. I didn’t expect so many people to attend this lecture. It has been reported that this city is very slow in traffic management. Relief workers were handing out emergency rations to the survivors. Here’s my telephone number, in case you need to reach me. Due to his improper operation, all the information stored has been wiped out. More Practice

27 More Practice 下周二你们要做一个有关爱滋病主题的课堂发言。 他数学学得很好,但学语言却很迟钝。
Notes to the Text—Active Expressions More Practice 下周二你们要做一个有关爱滋病主题的课堂发言。 他数学学得很好,但学语言却很迟钝。 你可以在讲义的最后一页看到完整参考书目。 经过两年的谈判,双方终于达成了协议。 据说这个村有一半人口患艾滋病死了。 Keys

28 1. Next Tuesday, you are expected to give a presentation on AIDS.
Notes to the Text—Active Expressions 1. Next Tuesday, you are expected to give a presentation on AIDS. 2. He is smart at mathematics, but very slow in learning languages. 3. I am so tired today that I don’t feel like going to work. 4. After two years of negotiation, the two parties have finally reached a settlement. 5. It is said the half the population in this village was wiped out by AIDS.

29 Notes to the Text—Focus Study
II. Focus Study 1. To solve this problem, ask people in the community who can draw well to create low literacy AIDS education publications. sb./sth. + attributive clause e.g. I don’t like the way he talks to others. More Practice

30 Complete the following
Notes to the Text—Focus Study Complete the following I’ll never forget the city ___________________ ____________ (我和玛丽在那里度过童年时光). He won a gold medal, ____________________ ____________________ (全家人认为这是个了 不起的荣誉). where I spent my child- hood with Mary which the whole family considered a great honor

31 Contextual clues can help one better understand sentences.
Notes to the Text—Focus Study 2. They also show people who look like those we need to educate, since … Contextual clues can help one better understand sentences. What do “they” and “people” refer to? They = These books, people = the pictures 这些书籍也展示一些看上去和那些需要接受教育的人很相似的图片,……

32 Despite..., … 尽管······,还是······
Notes to the Text—Focus Study 3. Despite such alarming numbers, the federal and state governments have always been slow in implementing programs to stop the spread of AIDS. Despite..., … 尽管······,还是······ Practice

33 Translation 尽管有许多困难,他还是设法在三周内完成了工作。 他第三次考试未通过,尽管他一直都很努力。
Notes to the Text—Focus Study Translation 尽管有许多困难,他还是设法在三周内完成了工作。 他第三次考试未通过,尽管他一直都很努力。 Despite a lot of difficulties, he managed to finish the work within three weeks. He failed in the exam a third time despite his continuous hard working.

34 Notes to the Text—Focus Study
4. Like no other plague before, the AIDS epidemic threatens to wipe out an entire generation and leave another without parents. leave sth./sb 让某人/物处于某状态······ e.g. The trial left a lot of questions unanswered. Practice

35 Translation 别让她在外边雨中等着。 外面那么冷,我希望你不要再让门开着。
Notes to the Text—Focus Study Translation 别让她在外边雨中等着。 外面那么冷,我希望你不要再让门开着。 Don’t leave her waiting outside in the rain. I wish you’d stop leaving the door open. It’s cold outside.

36 5. This is an undeclared war that everyone
Notes to the Text—Focus Study 5. This is an undeclared war that everyone must sign up for in order for us to win. Sth./Sb. is …, ······是 ······, Practice

37 Translation 电脑是一种电子装置,这种装置能够储存信息并能根据一套被称为程序的指令做事情。
Notes to the Text—Focus Study Translation 电脑是一种电子装置,这种装置能够储存信息并能根据一套被称为程序的指令做事情。 好老师是那些能够引起学习者学习兴趣的老师。 A computer is an electric machine that can store information and do things with it according to a set of instructions called a program. The greatest teachers are the ones who can arouse students’ interests to learn.

38 Old to New Chinese to English Word Using

39 I. Old to New form, make up carry out fear, worry group instead of
Words and Expressions—Old to New I. Old to New form, make up carry out fear, worry group instead of fight, battle constitute implement alarm organization in place of combat

40 I. Old to New client customer teach educate teacher educator tell
Words and Expressions—Old to New I. Old to New client educate educator relate risk customer teach teacher tell danger

41 II. Chinese to English 20世纪70年代末期 in the late 1970s 20世纪70年代初期
Words and Expressions—C to E II. Chinese to English 20世纪70年代末期 20世纪70年代初期 20世纪70年代中期 资源 出版物 文学 受教育比例低 in the late 1970s in the early 1970s in the middle 1970s resources publication literature a low literacy rate

42 高死亡率 婚姻状况 经济状况 就业情况 法律地位 效率 效率低下 a high death rate marriage status
Words and Expressions—C to E 高死亡率 婚姻状况 经济状况 就业情况 法律地位 效率 效率低下 a high death rate marriage status economic status job status legal status efficiency inefficiency

43 III. Word Using 1. acquire vt.
Words and Expressions—Word Using III. Word Using 1. acquire vt. to get by skill or ability, by one’s own efforts or behavior (由技术、能力、努力或行为而)获得;学到 e.g. acquire a good knowledge of English 熟谙英文 acquire a reputation for dishonesty 蒙上不诚实恶名 acquire a taste for brandy 养成喝白兰地的嗜好

44 to get by skill or ability, by one’s own efforts or behavior
Words and Expressions—Word Using 1. acquire vt. to get by skill or ability, by one’s own efforts or behavior (由技术、能力、努力或行为而)获得;学到 e.g. The company has recently acquired a new office building in central Shanghai. 这家公司最近在上海市中心买了一栋新的办公楼。

45 ② diagnose + illness/sb.’s condition as …
Words and Expressions—Word Using 2. diagnose vt.诊断 ① diagnose sb. with … ② diagnose + illness/sb.’s condition as … e.g. The woman is diagnosed with diabetes (糖尿病). The doctor diagnosed the illness as cancer.

46 Use It 3. constitute vt. form sth. from parts e.g.
Words and Expressions—Word Using 3. constitute vt. form sth. from parts e.g. Twelve months constitute a year. Use It How many students constitute your study group?

47 to cause sudden fear or worry;
Words and Expressions—Word Using 4. alarm vt. to cause sudden fear or worry; to give a warning or feeling of danger to 使恐慌,使担忧;警告 e.g. Everybody was alarmed at the news that war might break out. 人人听到战事可能爆发的消息都感到恐慌。

48 Translation Key 4. alarm vt. to cause sudden fear or worry;
Words and Expressions—Word Using 4. alarm vt. to cause sudden fear or worry; to give a warning or feeling of danger to 使恐慌,使担忧;警告 Translation 枪声惊动了千百只鸟。 Key The noise of the shot alarmed hundreds of birds.

49 ①[U] sudden fear and worry 恐慌,担忧;
Words and Expressions—Word Using 4. alarm n. ①[U] sudden fear and worry 恐慌,担忧; ②[C] a piece of equipment that warns people about danger, the time, etc. 报警器;闹钟 a fire alarm 火警 set the alarm(-clock) for 6 o’clock 把闹钟拨到6点 e.g. He jumped up in alarm. 他惊慌地跳了起来。 e.g.

50 What do these organizations mean?
Words and Expressions—Word Using 5. organization n. a group of people with a special purpose What do these organizations mean? WHO OPEC World Health Organization Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries NATO North Atlantic Treaty Organization More

51 Use It 6. emerge vi. ① to come to appear e.g.
Words and Expressions—Word Using 6. emerge vi. ① to come to appear e.g. The sun emerged from behind a cloud. Use It What does the photo show us? It shows a beautiful scene when the morning sun emerges from the sea surface.

52 Different ideas emerged in the heated discussion.
Words and Expressions—Word Using 6. emerge vi. ② to become known e.g. Different ideas emerged in the heated discussion. Later, it emerged that the judge had been employing an illegal immigrant.

53 to make clear by giving pictures or examples
Words and Expressions—Word Using 7. illustrate vt. to make clear by giving pictures or examples e.g. These graphs illustrate the results of the experiment.

54 Translation Key 7. illustrate vt.
Words and Expressions—Word Using 7. illustrate vt. to make clear by giving pictures or examples Translation 他用统计数据来说明观点。 Key He illustrated his point with statistics.

55 Translation Key 8. risk vt. ① to place in danger 士兵冒着生命危险去救落水的女孩。
Words and Expressions—Word Using 8. risk vt. ① to place in danger Translation 士兵冒着生命危险去救落水的女孩。 Key The soldier risked his life to save the drowning girl.

56 Translation Key 8. risk n. ② danger at risk: in danger 处境危险
Words and Expressions—Word Using 8. risk n. ② danger at risk: in danger 处境危险 Translation 疾病在蔓延,5岁以下的儿童都有被传染的危险。 Key The disease is spreading, and all children under 5 are at risk. More phrases

57 at the risk of (doing) sth. 冒着……的危险
Words and Expressions—Word Using at any risk at all risks 不管冒什么风险 at the risk of (doing) sth. 冒着……的危险 take/run the risk of (doing) sth. 冒着……的危险 take/run the risk to do sth. 冒险…… Practice

58 Which is right? 1. I am risking my job.
Words and Expressions—Word Using Which is right? 1. I am risking my job. 2. I am taking the risk of losing my job. 3. I am at the risk of losing my job.

59 = take sb.’s attention from sth. 使分心
Words and Expressions—Word Using 9. distract sb. from sth. = take sb.’s attention from sth. 使分心 e.g. Most Chinese parents think puppy love will distract their children from their school work. 多数中国父母认为早恋 会让孩子学习分心。

60 Translation Key 9. distract sb. from sth.
Words and Expressions—Word Using 9. distract sb. from sth. to take sb.’s attention from sth. 使分心 Translation 街上的嘈杂声使我不能专心读书。 Key The noise in the street distracted me from my reading.

61 Translation Key 10. sign up for
Words and Expressions—Word Using 10. sign up for to put one’s name on a list to take part in sth. 报名参加 Translation 上个学期她报名参加了青年志愿者组织。 Key She signed up for the Young Volunteer team last semester.

62 Make a Comparison

63 Compare the Situation of AIDS in China with that in America.
Idea Sharing Compare the Situation of AIDS in China with that in America. Search for related information : 1. the first case; the infected population 2. high-infection areas 3. high-risk group 4. government work 5. unofficial program 6. education work 7. people’s attitude Tips

64 Idea Sharing Tips 1. The first case of AIDS was diagnosed/ reported ..., ... years later than ... ; by the year ..., there will be ... infected with HIV ... 2. The AIDS high-infection areas include ... constitute the fastest growing segment/group of people with AIDS ... 4. The governments have been slow/quick/ active/efficient in ...; political inefficiency

65 5. help ... through an organization; community; emerge; establish;
Idea Sharing 5. help ... through an organization; community; emerge; establish; hand out ...; 6. educate; operate educational program; ... attach importance to ...; lay stress on ...; videos; publications 7. get worried; don’t like talking about ...; be scared by ...;refuse to ...; concern about… Lead-in video clip

66 Idea Sharing AIDS Spread

67 The Problem-Solution- Evaluation Pattern
Practical Writing

68 I. The Problem-Solution- Evaluation Pattern
Writing—Structured Writing I. The Problem-Solution- Evaluation Pattern The basic structure of this pattern is problem-solution-evaluation. There are some possible differences in the pattern but the basic parts are problems and solutions. Development a general statement problem solution evaluation Sample

69 Sample a general statement problem
Writing—Structured Writing a general statement Parents should be the main solution to children’s lack of physical exercise. Clearly children are spending too many hours watching TV. Their lack of exercise could lead to health problems. If parents set a good example and take exercise with their children, it would seem a natural part of life. Parents can motivate their children to be active from an early age. problem Sample solution evaluation Useful Expressions

70 Useful Expressions for Problem-Solution- Evaluation Pattern
Writing—Structured Writing Useful Expressions for Problem-Solution- Evaluation Pattern A general statement: ... may help you ... A problem: ... is really a problem; one of the difficulties is ...; the question is … A solution: to solve ... /the solution to ... An evaluation: by doing ... you will ...; … play a vital role in ...; it is effective to ...; as a result

71 Writing—Structured Writing
Writing Task Write a paragraph, following the problem-solution-evaluation pattern. Topics: How to Keep Healthy Job Problems for Graduates For your reference

72 Job Problems for Graduates
Writing—Structured Writing (For reference) Job Problems for Graduates College graduates find it increasingly difficult to get a rewarding job. One reason perhaps is that many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy. Second, there is an oversupply of graduates in certain specialties. What should be done to solve this problem? To begin with, the colleges should get students out of the ivory tower and have their courses meet the needs of industry and business To be continued

73 Writing—Structured Writing
so as to suit the on-going development of the national economy. Second, the government should provide college graduates with more opportunities to develop new skills. The third solution, I think, is to adopt strong measures of birth control because the greater the population, the less the opportunity for every- one to get a job.

74 Writing—Practical Writing
II. Practical Writing Invitation

75 Writing—Practical Writing
较正式的宴会请柬多用于隆重的社交场合,因此行文中不使用第一人称 I 或 we,而使用第三人称,如 Mr.等。英文请柬常在最后加上 R.S.V.P. ,是法文repondez s’il vous plait 的缩写,意思是Please reply。 Sample 1

76 Writing—Practical Writing
Sample 1 Mr. Sun Zhiwei requests the pleasure of the company of Mr. and Mrs. Zhang Hua to dinner 7:00 p.m. on Friday, 18th January at Room 402, 102 Jianguo Road (W) R. S. V. P. 谨定于一月十八日星期五下午七时在建国路102号402室举行晚宴。 敬请张华先生和夫人光临。 孙志伟

77 Sample 2 Writing—Practical Writing 李翔先生:
兹定于二零零九年五月三日星期日上午十一点在和平饭店举行女儿孙佳与张汉先生的婚礼。 敬请光临 孙志军 敬约 赵 梅

78 Writing—Practical Writing
Sample 2 Mr. and Mrs. Li Xiang accept with pleasure Mr. and Mrs. Sun Zhijun’s kind invitation to the wedding ceremony of their daughter Sun Jia and Mr. Zhang Han on Sunday, the third of May at eleven o’clock at Peace Hotel. 以上是对结婚请柬的回复。此信也可简化如下: Mr. and Mrs. Li Xiang accept with pleasure Mr. and Mrs. Sun Zhijun’s kind invitation on Sunday, the third of May.

79 Writing—Practical Writing
Sample 2 Mr. and Mrs. Li Xiang regret that they will be unable to accept Mr. and Mrs. Sun Zhijun’s invitation to the wedding ceremony of their daughter Sun Jia and Mr. Zhang Han. 以上是对婚宴邀请的辞谢。作为被邀请的客人,如不能应邀出席,应尽快予以回复,可不写原因,但说明原因更有礼貌。

80 The End of Section A To Section B


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