1. Using Dialogue in Narrative Notes
We need to follow certain formatting rules when using dialogue so that the reader doesn’t get confused:
Use quotation marks (“...”) around the dialogue
Start a new line each time a different character begins speaking
Introduce or follow dialogue with a tag (e.g. said, replied, commented, remarked, added, agreed, declared, muttered, explained, shouted) along with the speaker’s name
Include details that further explain why characters are saying what they say

2. Using Dialogue in Narrative Notes Cont.
Punctuating Dialogue Examples:
If a tag follows the dialogue, include a comma before your closing quotation mark:
“Hey, give me that,” demanded Tom.
If the tag is before the dialogue, put a comma before the opening quotation mark as a way to introduce the quote and then place a period inside the closing quotation mark if this is the end of the sentence:
Tom demanded, “Hey, give me that.”

3. If the dialogue has a question or exclamation mark and there isn’t a tag at the end, put the question or exclamation mark inside the closing quotation mark:
Tom asked, “Hey, would you give me that?” OR Tom shouted, “Hey, give me that!”
If the dialogue interrupts the sentence, use commas to offset the quotation marks:
Tom said, “Hey, give me that,” even though Mary didn’t have anything to give him.
If the dialogue interrupts the sentence but includes a question, use a question mark and continue the sentence without capitalizing anything:
Tom asked, “Hey, would you give me that?” even though Mary didn’t have anything to give him.

4. Dialogue Punctuation Practice
Directions: Type the following conversation and all the necessary punctuation marks and indentations:
Lisa and Karen decided to go to the store to buy food for the cookout. As they entered the store, Lisa asked What do you think we should buy? I don’t know said Karen in a puzzled voice. Well, what about a healthy dessert? replied Lisa, as she held up a bag of cherries. Gee, I don’t know if they will go with all the other food people are bringing. Well, they are in season Karen remarked. Okay. Let’s get them replied Lisa. The two girls went to the checkout line.

5. Dialogue Punctuation Practice
Lisa and Karen decided to go to the store to buy food for the cookout. As they entered the store, Lisa asked, “What do you think we should buy?”
“I don’t know,” said Karen in a puzzled voice.
“Well, what about a healthy dessert?” replied Lisa, as she held up a bag of cherries.
“Gee, I don’t know if they will go with all the other food people are bringing. Well, they are in season,” Karen remarked.
“Okay. Let’s get them,” replied Lisa. The two girls went to the checkout line.