1. Critical Essay Masterclass
Ms Nitsche

2. Success Criteria What makes a good essay?
Good analysis – detail, relevant to question
Good evidence – description of scene/shot/technique, relevant to question, able to analyse in depth.
Topic sentences
Technical accuracy – punctuation, spelling, paragraphs, phrasing, capitals.
Flows well – connectives/linking language, order of techniques/scenes.
Wide vocabulary
REFER TO QUESTION!

3. How to Make Sure You Answer the Question
First of all, read the question carefully TWICE.
Sounds simple, but you wouldn’t believe how many people misread the question and answer based on what they THINK it asks them rather than what it actually does.
Secondly, pick out KEY WORDS from the question – note these down and try to think of alternative language/synonyms for them.
By having this language in your topic sentence and evaluation, you ensure you refer to the question.
By thinking of synonyms for the key words, you ensure your language and vocabulary is varied (nothing worse than a boring, repetitive essay)

4. Sample Essay Questions
Choose a novel or a short story or a work of non-fiction which explores an important theme.
By referring to appropriate techniques, show how the author has explored this theme.
Choose a novel or a short story in which the author creates a fascinating character.
By referring to appropriate techniques, show how the author has created this character and why you found him/her so fascinating.
PICK OUT THE KEY WORDS FROM THESE QUESTIONS

5. Now, write your own introduction.
Start with TART
(Title, Author, Refer to Task)
You should also give a BRIEF outline of the story.
Now, write your own introduction.
YOU HAVE TEN MINUTES

6. Example
‘To Kill a Mockingbird’ by Harper Lee explores the prejudice surrounding a small Southern community in the 1930s. Lee’s use of imagery, juxtaposition and exploration of morality highlights the racial tensions present in the USA at this time, and emphasises the part prejudice plays in everyday human nature.

7. Point
The Point is simply what each paragraph is about- you make a main point in every paragraph you write. This is usually the TOPIC SENTENCE you use.
Do not signpost your paragraph e.g. do not say “I am going to talk about”

8. What is a TOPIC SENTENCE?
This is basically a sentence that introduces
what the paragraph is going to be about.
You should mention WHAT you are going to discuss in the paragraph, and refer back to the question.
REMEMBER YOUR KEY WORDS AND ALTERNATIVE LANGUAGE!

9. Topic Sentences
All TOPIC SENTENCES should make some reference to the essay question.
A good way to do this is through the KEY WORDS we extract from the essay question.

10. Example Topic Sentences
In ‘To Kill a Mockingbird’ Lee emphasises the social prejudices of Maycomb through Scout’s own experiences of different classes in the playground.
Lee goes on to explore the racial tensions in the town, highlighting the inferiority of status the black community has.
Through Scout and Jem’s games and stories of Boo Radley’s true nature, we see how even those who do not engage with society are judged in such a small community.

11. Referencing the question
A reader should be able to guess what the essay question is simply by looking at your essay.
It is VITAL that you ensure you refer to the question throughout – this is the only way you will be sure that you have actually answered the question!

12. Task
In your groups, write THREE topic sentences for the following essay question:
Choose a novel or a short story in which the author creates a fascinating character.
By referring to appropriate techniques, show how the author has created this character and why you found him/her so fascinating.
Be prepared to share with the class!

13. Evidence
The evidence is the quotation or description of the scene, shot or technique you are using to back up your point.
It is important that you pick evidence that you can explain and evaluate FULLY.
Finding quotations isn’t always easy, but it’s much easier when you know the book well – NEVER
Never just drop evidence in – always introduce them within the CONTEXT of the story, i.e. what is happening at this point in the story or film, what characters are involved and who they are, etc.

14. EXAMPLE
TOPIC SENTENCE: Lee goes on to explore the racial tensions in the town, highlighting the inferiority of status the black community has.
EVIDENCE: At Tom’s trial, he makes the mistake of admitting feeling empathy for Mayella Ewell.
“ ‘You felt sorry for her, you felt sorry for her?’

15. Evaluation (Analysis)
This is the chance for you to explain how the quotation backs up the point you are making
You need to make sure that you fully explain the quotation or shot/scene/technique.
You then need to evaluate it - give your opinion on how successful it is.
Your opinion should be implicit - do not write “I think”.

16. 3 Steps for Analysing Quotations
1. Break the sentence down – look at the meaning and connotations of individual words, techniques and phrases, as well as the whole sentence
e.g. “ ‘You felt sorry for her, you felt sorry for her?’
The repetition of ‘sorry’, as well as the tone of incredulity in Mr Gilmer’s voice through the emphasis on ‘you’, emphasises his disbelief that someone of Tom’s race could possibly be superior enough to have pity for a white woman like Mayella.

17. 3 Steps for Analysing Quotations
2. Think about what the whole sentence suggests
e.g. “ ‘You felt sorry for her, you felt sorry for her?’
This quote highlights the belief that - despite Mayella’s horrific home life – a “nigger” has no place feeling empathy for someone of a higher social standing, i.e. someone white.

18. 3 Steps for Analysing Quotations
3. Comment on the context of the quotation
e.g. “ ‘You felt sorry for her, you felt sorry for her?’
Here, Lee successfully implies that Tom has in a sense signed his own death warrant; by engaging with Mayella, and feeling “sorry” for her, he has inadvertently placed himself above her in terms of social status, and will now be seen as arrogant and not knowing of his ‘true place’ in Maycomb’s society.

19. EXAMPLE
TOPIC SENTENCE: Lee goes on to explore the racial tensions in the town, highlighting the inferiority of status the black community has.
EVIDENCE: At Tom’s trial, he makes the mistake of admitting feeling empathy for Mayella Ewell.
“ ‘You felt sorry for her, you felt sorry for her?’
EVALUATION: The repetition of sorry, as well as the tone of incredulity in Mr Gilmer’s voice, emphasises the belief that -despite Mayella’s horrific home life – a “nigger” has no place feeling empathy for someone of a higher social standing, i.e. someone white. Here, Lee successfully implies that Tom has in a sense signed his own death warrant; by engaging with Mayella, and feeling “sorry” for her, he has inadvertently placed himself above her in terms of social status, and will now be seen as arrogant and not knowing of his ‘true place’ in Maycomb’s society.

20. And that’s ONE paragraph.
Putting P E E Together
Point/ Topic Sentence.
Evidence – description of scene and technique.
Evaluation/Analysis.
And that’s ONE paragraph.

21. Which should look like this…
Lee goes on to explore the racial tensions in the town, highlighting the inferiority of status the black community has. At Tom’s trial, he makes the mistake of admitting feeling empathy for Mayella Ewell.
“ ‘You felt sorry for her, you felt sorry for her?’
The repetition of ‘sorry’, as well as the tone of incredulity in Mr Gilmer’s voice through the emphasis on ‘you’ highlights the belief that - despite Mayella’s horrific home life – a “nigger” has no place feeling empathy for someone of a higher social standing, i.e. someone white. Here, Lee successfully implies that Tom has in a sense signed his own death warrant; by engaging with Mayella, and feeling “sorry” for her, he has inadvertently placed himself above her in terms of social status, and will now be seen as arrogant and not knowing of his ‘true place’ in Maycomb’s society.

22. TASK In groups, write a paragraph based on this quotation:
“You never really understand a person until you consider things from his point of view... Until you climb inside of his skin and walk around in it.”
Be prepared to share your paragraph with the class!

23. How do we write a conclusion?
An effective conclusion should:
Refer back to the questions.
Summarise your main points.
Comment on how effective the writer/director has been in their use of techniques.

24. Example
Harper Lee’s ‘To Kill a Mockingbird’ is a compelling novel, which explores in depth the complex nature of prejudice in a small town. Through Scout’s narrative we become aware of the judgments even children pronounce on each other, as she defines peers such as Walter by their family’s reputation. That discrimination is reflected in the adult population of Maycomb, whose aggression towards Atticus during Tom Robinson’s court case is poisonous – here Lee effectively emphasises how quickly the small town can turn on their own, and the innocence of Scout’s narrative voice highlights further the far more dangerous racial tensions in the town. The novel’s climax, and Tom’s symbolic fate, are all the more tragic for their seeming inevitability. Only Boo Radley escapes the shadow of prejudice, saving the Finch children. Lee successfully shows how through engaging with the society that has judged him, he is able to reconstruct his image in their eyes, allowing Scout and Jem to see beyond their own child-like prejudices.

25. Task In groups, write a conclusion based on the following question:
Discuss how prejudice is explored in ‘To Kill a Mockingbird’.
You should make reference to techniques and quotations throughout.

26. Task
Create detailed plans for each of the essay questions on the previous slide.
Your plan should be for each paragraph and follow the PEE structure, as well as the 3 steps for analysis.
P – Point, topic sentence, what your paragraph will discuss, such as characterisation, theme, technique, etc.
E – Evidence, your quotation.
E – Evaluation, 3 steps of analysis, comment on how effective or successful the writer’s use of technique has been.
3 steps of analysis
1. Break the sentence down – look at the meaning and connotations of individual words, techniques and phrases, as well as the whole sentence.
2. Think about what the whole sentence suggests.
3. Comment on the context of the quotation, how it relates to themes, characters, symbols, etc.