1. Student 6 Elena Post- Feedback Tasks: 30 mins
Richard Galletly, Aston University

2. Student needs Logical division of ideas Referencing in text
Referencing at end of text
The need for referencing
Essay structure
Writing conclusions
Some minor grammar mistakes

3. Logical Division Exercises - Oshima,2006 p65-
Exercises – Fitzpatrick, 2011 p49-

4. In text referencing Exercises: Tissington, 2009 p71-
Exercises: Bailey, 2011 p58-

5. Essay Structure Guide and exercises - Gillett, 2009 p8
Guide and exercises – Oshima, 2006 p56-

6. Introduction/ conclusion
Guide: Gillett, 2009 p221-
Exercises & explanation: Oshima, 2006 p72
Paragraph transitions: Oshima, 2006 p69-

7. References I
Bailey, S. (2011). Academic Writing for International Students of Business. Oxon: Routledge.
Bowell, T. & Kemp, G. (2010). Critical Thinking: a Concise Guide. Oxon: Routledge.
Burke, D. & Pieterick, J. (2010). Giving Students Effective Written Feedback. Maidenhead: McGraw-Hill Education.
Cottrell, S. (2005). Critical Thinking Skills. Basingstoke: Palgrave Macmillan.
Fitzpatrick, M. (2011). Engaging Writing 2: Essential Skills for Academic Writing. NY: Pearson Education.
Gillett, A., Hammond, A. & Martala, M. (2009). Successful Academic Writing. Harlow: Pearson Education Ltd.

8. References II
Hewings, M. (2005). Advanced Grammar in Use. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press.
McMillan, K. & Weyers, J. (2010). How to write essays and assignments. Harlow: Pearson Education Ltd.
Murphy, R. (2004). English Grammar in Use. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press.
Oshima, A. & Hogue, A. (2006). Writing Academic English: level 4. NY: Pearson Education.
Reinders, H., Moore, N. & Lewis, M. (2008). The International Student Handbook. London: Palgrave Macmillan.
Swales, J.M. & Feak, C.B. (2007). Academic Writing for Graduate Students. Michigan: The University of Michigan Press.

9. References III
Swan, M. (2005). Practical English Usage. Oxford: Oxford University Press.
Tissington, P., Hasel, M. & Matthiesen, J. (2009). How to Write Successful Business and Management Essays. London: Sage Publications Ltd.
UCAS (2011). UCAS Personal Statement Worksheet. [online]. Available at: [downloaded ]
UCAS (2011). UCAS Personal Statement Mindmap. [online]. Available at: [downloaded ]