1. Goals 1. Period 2 and 4 – Practice AP Multiple Choice Questions 2. Period 4 – Process Analysis Essay and Presentation 3. Exemplification Writing

2. FFW – Period 2 & 4  Read AP Sample Passage  Answer questions 1-6 Discuss/Go over

3. Process Analysis  Continue Process Analysis presentations (per. 4 only)  Process Analysis Rubrics and scores (per. 4 only) Discussion Questions/Answers

4. Writing TO ILLUSTRATE

5.  An exemplification essay uses one or more particular cases or EXAMPLES to illustrate or explain a point, an assertion or an abstract concept. What is an exemplification essay?

6.  Have you ever watched a talk show?  Which are the most interesting and animated guests? Those who support the points they are trying to make with EXAMPLES. Sweeping generalizations and vague statements ARE NOT as effective as specific observations, anecdotes, details and opinions. EXEMPLIFICATION ESSAYS

7.  Therefore, EXEMPLIFICATION is used in EVERY rhetorical mode in order to explain and clarify, to add interest and to persuade. EXEMPLIFICATION ESSAYS

8.  When you want to understand a general concept or an abstract idea, you probably ask for an example. And when you want to explain an idea, you probably provide examples as a strategy to make your thinking clear.  ILLULSTRATION, or EXEMPLIFICATION, is simply a way that writers and speakers use to explain things so that readers and listeners can better understand the topic being discussed.  Exemplification, like the other rhetorical strategies we’ve studied IS AN AIDE TO CLEARER WRITING, THINKING and UNDERSTANDING. EXEMPLIFICATION ESSAYS

9. You want to impress your date with a “good meal.” How do you know what a “good meal is?” An example might be a three-course meal of lobster bisque soup, roasted salmon with garlic mashed potatoes and a dessert of chocolate mousse and a cappucino. FOR EXAMPLE:

10.  When you say “for example,” or “for instance,” you are providing examples to help listeners or readers understand what you mean. EXEMPLIFICATION ESSAYS

11.  The word EXAMPLE comes from the LATIN word “exemplum” which refers to one thing from among many, or something that illustrates a more general category.  The word ILLUSTRATE comes from the Latin word “lux” which means light or illumination, or to brighten, or cast light upon something to make it clearer or more visible.  When you write exemplification, or illustration essays, you are choosing SPECIFIC things to illustrate a general statement. You are making it CLEARER or more understandable, or more VISIBLE. EXEMPLIFICATION ESSAYS

12.  Exemplification (illustration) works through a process of moving back and forth between general ideas and specific examples.  Specific examples share the general characteristics of the idea, concept or principle a writer is explaining, by making use of them.  Examples enable readers to see how the idea exists in the real world.  From those examples, readers can “get” or “grasp” the idea you are trying to explain. EXEMPLIFICATION ESSAYS

13.  All GOOD writing uses SPECIFIC examples: Facts Statistics Instances People, places, events Anecdotes Stories History EXEMPLIFICATION ESSAYS

14.  Remember to use examples that do each of the following: 1. ADD INTEREST In the example provided, readers are not just going to be interested in statistics or facts about FCAT scores, AP scores, etc. They are going to want some “human interest” or something to keep them reading. EXEMPLIFICATION ESSAYS

15.  2. USE EXAMPLES THAT EXPLAIN AND CLARIFY Make sure you use SPECIFIC EXAMPLES that prove or support your point. EXEMPLIFICATION ESSAYS

16.  3. USE EXAMPLES THAT WILL BE PERSUASIVE, and which will get your readers to believe that what you are saying is reasonable and worth considering. EXEMPLIFICATION ESSAYS

17.  Make sure you use ENOUGH examples. Unfortunately, no general rule exists to tell you how many examples you need to support your thesis. We are going to be reading several essays that use as few as two, and as many as more than half a dozen examples that “drive home” the point the writer is trying to make. Selecting a RANGE of examples is just as important as choosing an appropriate number. If you wanted to persuade your readers into believing that MHS students outperform FPC students, you would need to provide a WIDE RANGE of examples, from: music awards, performance on standardized tests, scholarship offers awarded, National Merit Scholars, AP test results, graduation rates and much more… EXEMPLIFICATION ESSAYS

18.  Make sure you use REPRESENTATIVE examples.  One person’s experience is NOT enough to support a conclusion. You need to gather examples of the experiences of MANY people to decide if your theory is valid. EXEMPLIFICATION ESSAYS

19.  Writing an exemplification essay is really no different than writing any other type of essay we’ve written in the various rhetorical modes this year: Begin with an effective INTRODUCTION, typically an ANECDOTE, which is typically an example itself. End the introduction with a statement, or thesis, that states the point you are going to illustrate. Each body paragraph should develop a separate example, or presents the point as illustrated by several brief examples, or explores an extended example which continues throughout the essay. Beginning your paper with a striking example might stimulate your reader’s interest and curiosity; ending which one as well (or coming back to the original one!) might vividly reinforce your thesis as well. How do you structure the exemplification essay?

20.  Use examples that are RELEVANT: An example HAS FAILED if it does not help your reader see the truth of what you are saying. An example HAS FAILED if it is too trivial! TIPS FOR WRITING A SUCCESSFUL EXEMPLIFCATION ESSAY:

21.  Use examples that are VIVID. Many examples FAIL because they are too VAGUE or non-specific or just plain BORING! TIPS FOR WRITING A SUCCESSFUL EXEMPLIFCATION ESSAY:

22.  When necessary, ESTABLISH a CLEAR CONNECTION between your example and the point you are making. You do this with “connecting comments” using transitions.  Some connective expressions include, “for example,” “for instance,” “to illustrate” “a case in point” TIPS FOR WRITING A SUCCESSFUL EXEMPLIFCATION ESSAY:

23.  Does your essay have a clear THESIS STATEMENT in the introduction that states or asserts the concept that you will illustrate?  Do your examples explain and clarify your thesis statement?  Have you provided enough examples?  Have you chosen CLEAR and REPRESENTATIVE examples?  Are your examples PERSUASIVE?  Do your examples ADD INTEREST?  Are you examples VIVID?  Have you used transitional words and phrases that reinforce the connection between your examples and your thesis statement?  Have you had a PEER read and OFFER SUGGESTIONS for improving your essay? CHECKLIST for writing and REVISING your EXEMPLIFICATION ESSAY

24. Homework 1. Make “F-L” Flashcards; Quiz Friday 2. Read “Letter From Birmingham Jail” by MLK – annotate qualities of exemplification writing