1. Macbeth How does Shakespeare present Macbeth as a tragic hero?

2. Macbeth Coursework To redraft you need to: 1. Re-read your essay 2. Re-read your essay in the light of the markscheme, highlighting where you have covered the relevant areas; make notes on areas missed out 3. Re-read your essay in the light of the coursework feedback, highlighting material to edit out as unnecessary 4. Re-reread your essay adding in material 5. Return to your electronic version and amend your original 6. Re-read your amended version…

3. Macbeth Coursework C = Insight C = Insight B = Analysis B = Analysis A = Analysis and Interpretation A = Analysis and Interpretation A* = Originality of analysis and interpretation A* = Originality of analysis and interpretation Character and action Character and action Dramatic devices or structures Dramatic devices or structures Language, ideas, themes Language, ideas, themes Social, historical, cultural, literary context Social, historical, cultural, literary context http://store.aqa.org.uk/qual/pdf/AQA-3712-W-SP-10.PDF Need to bear in mind the Marking Criteria Read through your essay – highlight where you have commented on the aspects listed in the right-hand column.

4. Things to remember when redrafting It is a DRAMA – audience and play It is a DRAMA – audience and play Macbeth’s AMBITION is his tragic flaw Macbeth’s AMBITION is his tragic flaw No need to ‘signpost’ your essay No need to ‘signpost’ your essay Mention qualities that make audience sympathise/empathise with Macbeth Mention qualities that make audience sympathise/empathise with Macbeth Introduction can reveal elements of play Introduction can reveal elements of play See ‘Feedback on Macbeth Coursework’ document Click here Click here for link to document Click here