1. Checklist for writing letters of advice.

2. Tell them how you know about the problem. I got your message telling me about your problems with… Your cousin, Ahmed, phoned me last night and asked me if I could give you some advice about the problems you are having with... Your sister, Fatima, sent me a message saying you are having problems with… and asking if I can help you.

3. Tell them why your advice is good. (if you have time) I went through the same sort of problems when I was….. I have had a similar experience to you when I… A few years ago, I was at… and I had some of the same problems.

4. Dealing with each problem Give each problem a line or a paragraph (better) for itself. Use sequencing words: firstly, secondly, in addition, also Give concrete examples of how they should follow your advice. Make clear connections between what you advise them to do and why they should do it.

5. For example: You should lose weight. X You should eat less fast food, as this kind of food is very high in calories. √ You should work harder. X You should ask your friends to explain the difficult parts to you so that you understand better. √

6. Think about your grammar. Try to use ‘if’ sentences and past forms to improve the mix of grammar forms. If you follow my suggestions, I’m sure you will see positive results. I had the same problems, so I followed advice that I got from friends.