Pop Culture and Identity Finding and Evaluating Sources “Identity Beyond Stereotypes” and “I Am Not a Mascot”

Quickwrite #3 Pick a quotation from one of the essays that we read for today that you marked as important or worthy of response. Using one of the templates from They Say, I Say, write at least a paragraph where you respond to the idea you marked, using the template as a springboard for your own ideas. Please make a note in the margin of which TSIS template you used (telling me the page number is fine). Be sure to put quote marks at the beginning and end of any direct quotations from the essays and give credit to the author.

“Identity Beyond Stereotypes” by Kiflin Turner p. 139 Considering Identities: How We Construct Our Identity and What Influences That Construction Read 2 nd paragraph on page 111 (and remember discussion of subcultures on p. 6). Questions from the Reading What problematic stereotypes does Turner discuss in his essay? How are these stereotypes perpetuated? In other words, how are these stereotyped learned and shared? Have you or those you know about have been stereotyped by others based upon: your race/ethnicity, religion, age, economic class, subculture, or another other identity category? Can you make any connections between those experiences and those of the individuals in Turner’s essay?

“I Am Not a Mascot” by Philip J. Deloria p. 299 This essay discusses the problematic appropriation of stereotyped Native American images as team mascots. Why, according to Deloria, is this use of Native American images problematic? Can you think of any other examples from American popular culture where cultural stereotypes or images/traditions stolen from other cultures are used outside of their original cultural context? How is this appropriation viewed by the mainstream culture? How is this appropriation viewed by the community from which the image/tradition originates?

Which cultures or subcultures do you belong to? The first step in writing essay one is identifying a culture/subculture you belong to that has had a profound effect on you. Cultures/subcultures to consider might be based on: Race, ethnicity, or nationality Political affiliation Religion Sexual orientation Music (subcultures grow up around different styles) Hobbies around which distinct subcultures form

How has belonging to the groups from the previous slide affected you? Can you think of any aspect of culture or pop culture (remember this has a very broad definition) that has had an influence on you, or an impact or your identity? how you think about yourself, how you think about the world around you? how you express yourself, and interact with people? Tell me about it. It can be anything, I don’t judge!

Further Branstorming Look at the various groups you brainstormed. Which ones have been the most important to how you see yourself? Have you embraced the values/traditions of the culture, or have you rejected them? What were the consequences of that acceptance or rejection for you and how you see yourself? Do you find yourself moving back and forth between two cultures?

Review of They Say, I Say Ch. 2 1.What is the purpose of summarizing others’ material in your own writing? – Fairly represent what an author says. – Prepare for your own response (focus on points that will be important for you). 2.How can you avoid a “list” summary? (And why do you need to do this?) 1.Summarize with regard to your own interests. 2.Avoid “says” or “discusses” to describe your sources points, using more interesting and accurate words instead.

Summarizing In Essay #1 In your first essay, you may find yourself summarizing an entire essay we read in class or a whole source you found yourself in a few lines. Make sure that after you summarize, you give credit. Example: The article “Identity Beyond Stereotypes” by Kiflin Turner calls attention to ways in which African American students struggle with racial profiling at the University of Notre Dame. One problem is that African American students are often assumed to be athletes who are less academically capable than the rest of the student body. Another problem occurs when the only African American student in a classroom setting is assumed to be speaking as the voice of his or her entire group. These problems may be the reason that African American students leave the university at a higher rate than white students. Turner closes the article by reporting that the university is working with student leaders to increase awareness of the issues that African Americans and other minority students face on campus.

Practice Summary: Following the guidelines in Chapter 2 of They Say, I Say, write a summary of “I Am Not a Mascot” on p Remember, your purpose here is to summarize, not to offer your own opinion. (Offering your own response comes later. This week, we’re focusing on the skill of summarizing.)

Preparing for College Level Research Tell me about a time when you had to do research. This might be research you did for school, research into a product you were thinking of buying, research into how to apply for student aid, etc. What did you need to find out? Where did you go for information? How did you know which sources of information to trust?

There are Three Steps to Using Sources: Find sources and choose the best ones for your purpose. Read the sources carefully, keeping track of your own reactions to the author’s ideas and using your sources as a springboard for your own contribution to the discussion. Use the sources in your essay, giving proper credit in the body of the essay and at the end, using MLA format.

Finding/Choosing Sources Why do you need to include sources in your essays? To show your audience that you are aware of the conversation that is already going on. To give your audience context for an argument you will make. To support a point you are making. To provide an example of an opposing point of view that you will then counter.

Where Can I Find Sources? College Databases (digital copies of sources) College Library (physical copies of sources) Public Library The Internet

Library Resources Library Databases can be accessed through the College Library website. Databases are collections of articles that have appeared, either in print or online, in various publications. Potentially useful databases: EBSCO (Academic Search Premiere) Proquest Research Library Ethnic News Watch

Some Tips on Using the Databases If you don’t get many results at first, try changing your search terms. Pay attention to the suggestions the databases make about related subjects. Pay attention to the key words your sources use, and do searches with those phrases. Make sure to check the “full text” search option so that you will be able to access any results you want. or save any results that interest you to read later. You may also print out articles here if you have a print card. Make sure that you keep a record of any sources you use from the databases.

Evaluating Online Sources Any sources you find through the databases are likely to be “reputable” sources, but what about typing your search terms into google or another search engine? This can be an excellent way to find resources that are very new and haven’t been included in the databases yet, BUT there’s a lot of junk out there. SO, how can you tell the junk from the good stuff?

Evaluating Online Sources Who takes responsibility for the piece of writing? Is it a publication with an online presence? Is it an organization with a good reputation? In what ways does the author establish credibility? Is the piece of writing presented well? (Are the points well argued/explained? Does the author display an awareness of the ongoing conversation? Does the piece of writing use clear grammar, spelling, and punctuation?)

Step 2: Read the Sources You Chose Read them all the way through. Unless you decide after the first paragraph that the source is not useful to you, how can you possibly respond to a source you’ve only skimmed? Identify the author’s big claims. Do you agree with them? If so, do you have anything to add to the author’s support? If not, how would you counter the author’s argument? Keep notes on your sources. Highlight. Write questions in the margins. Make connections between what one source says and another source says.

Step 2: Read the Sources You Chose A couple more things about sources… Just because you find a source and read it doesn’t mean you have to use it. If you read a source and don’t like it, keep looking. Keep researching throughout the writing process. If you find a wonderful source with all kinds of good ideas you want to respond to after you wrote a draft, that’s fine. Include that source and your response when you revise. Keep track of every source you use ideas or quotes from in your paper. You will need to be able to find the source again when you give it credit.

What does this mean for OUR Essay #1 specifically? Right now you need to be reading everything you can find about your specific topic the culture/subculture you chose and identity. The most useful sources are probably going to be written by members of the culture/subculture. Look for essays and articles where people who share a culture with you are reflecting on their identities as members of that group. Do you relate to their experience? Do you agree with their ideas about what it means to be a member of that culture? Read general articles about your culture or subculture to start out if you would like, but you need to be reading articles that address your narrowed topic of culture and identity as well.

Step 3: Using Sources and Giving Credit You’ve found your sources, read them, annotated them, and you’re ready to use your sources in your essay. So… which quotes should you use? Quotes that contain ideas you want to respond to. Quotes where the original source’s wording is especially good or important to your response. Quotes where the original source explains a complex idea clearly and succinctly. Quotes that contain ideas that would make most people want proof. Any quote you use should have an explanation/response that is TWICE AS LONG as the original quote. If a quote takes up two full lines of your paper, the explanation/response to that quote should take up FOUR.