Writing Chai Bensheng Shanghai WenLai Middle School

Peter’s trouble ---- Write at least 60 words about “ _______brings me happiness” Suggested questions : 1. What brings you happiness? 2. Why do you think it brings you happiness? (give at least two reasons) How to write the passage?

_____ brings me happiness?

Peter’s passage: I like reading. Reading brings me happiness. I can learn from reading. Reading is fun. I am happy. Reading is interesting. I enjoy it very much. Reading brings me happiness

Let’s learn to write a beautiful passage! “Reading brings me happiness”

Steps for Writing --- Understand the topic Write the frameWrite the frame Write beautiful sentences Three steps

Reading brings me happiness Key words  The first step--- Catch the key words makes me happy I like reading

beginning body ending A passage usually has three parts what reason 1 reason 2 reason 3… Conclusion ( 总结） The second step--- the frame of a passage

Secrets for Writing Use beautiful expressionsUse beautiful expressions use different sentence patterns Use proper transitional words The third step--- Write beautiful sentences

I have many hobbies, such as reading, swimming, and painting. But among them, I like reading best. I like reading. It brings me happiness. I can learn a lot of knowledge from reading. Reading is fun. I am happy. Reading is interesting. I enjoy it very much. beginningDesign the

I have many hobbies, such as reading, swimming, and painting. But among them, I like reading best. It brings me happiness. I can learn a lot of knowledge from reading. Reading is fun. I am happy. Reading is interesting. I enjoy it very much. bodyWrite a beautiful

body: I can learn a lot of knowledge from reading. Reading is fun. I am happy. Use beautiful expressions Reading can enrich my knowledge and broaden my mind. can bring me lots of fun. I feel relaxed.

Reading can enrich my knowledge and broaden my mind. Reading can bring me lots of fun. I feel relaxed. I can learn a lot from reading. Reading is interesting. I am happy.

When…; if…; because…; so…that…; How…! What…! It is + adj.+ to do sth. Use different sentence patterns

Use different sentences patterns Reading can enrich my knowledge and broaden my mind from reading. Reading can bring me lots of fun. I feel relaxed. Reading can enrich my knowledge and broaden my mind. Reading can bring me lots of fun. When I am reading, I feel relaxed. body:

Reading is interesting. I enjoy it very much. Use different sentences patterns Reading is so interesting that I enjoy it very much. ending:

I have many hobbies, such as reading, swimming, and painting. Among them, I like reading best. It brings me happiness. Reading can enrich my knowledge and broaden my mind. Reading can bring me lots of fun. When I am reading, I feel relaxed. Reading is so interesting that I enjoy it very much.

1) Better biginning ： As we all know, As you can see, I think, In my opinion/ view Use transitional words but, however I have many hobbies, such as reading, swimming, and painting. Among them, I like reading best. It brings me happiness. But I have many hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, and painting. But among them, I like reading best. It brings me happiness.

First(ly),… second(ly),…, Besides, What’s more, In addition, On the other hand, not only…but also… Use transitional words 2) Better body ： 3) Better ending ： In a word, In short, In brief

Reading is interesting and important. reading is interesting and important. As we all know,

Reading can enrich my knowledge and broaden my mind. Reading can bring me lots of fun. When I am reading, I feel relaxed. First, First, reading can not only enrich my knowledge and broaden my mind, but also bring me lots of fun. What’s more, when I am reading, I feel relaxed.

Reading is so interesting that I enjoy it very much. In a word, reading is so interesting that I enjoy it very much.

Reading gives me happiness I have many hobbies, such as reading, swimming, and painting. But among them, I like reading best. It brings me happiness. First, reading can not only enrich my knowledge and broaden my mind, but also bring me lots of fun. What's more, when I am reading, I feel relaxed. In a word, reading is so interesting that I enjoy it very much.

A. _____ brings me happiness *** I have many hobbies, such as ______________. But among them I like _______ best. It bring me a lot of happiness. First ， ____________________. What’s more, _____________________________. In a word, ______ is so interesting that I enjoy it very much.

B. _____ brings me happiness ***** ____________________________________________________________

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