主要的缺点 1 时态：用一般现在时，不用一般过去时 2 文章结构错误，先写优点，再写缺点 3 句子结构，语法知识错误 the price of the food is expensive the price of the food is high The cook is delicious. The food is delicious. The man often smiling to me. The man often smile to me

Students which in our school said so. The students in our school say so. The canteen should developed something. The canteen need some improvement. clean/clear

种类偏少 等候时间较长 We have only a limited variety of dishes with little change. The kinds of the dishes are so limited. They don’t offer/serve different kinds of dishes. It takes us too much time to get the meal. We usually spend too much time waiting in line for the meal.

Dear Mr. Principal, I am a senior student of our school. I’d like to say something about the canteen service in our school. In general, the service is satisfactory. The hall is clean and tidy. The dishes look inviting and taste delicious as well. What’s more, the workers there treat us as their friends, which makes us feel very happy.

However, we feel the price of the meals is a little too high, besides, we can only have a limited variety of dishes with little change every week. In addition, we often have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal. You could understand how precious time is to us students. Therefore, may I suggest something be done to solve the problems so that we can all enjoy our meal at school? Thanks for your consideration. Sincerely Li Hua