Identifying and Correcting Common Mistakes

1. Comma Splice: This error occurs when you use a comma to separate two independent clauses (you technically have what can be two sentences on each side of the comma). You INCORRECTLY use a comma. Example: The prom is next week, I haven’t bought a dress yet. 2. Run-on Sentences: Two or more independent clauses (those which can stand alone as sentences) that are joined together without any punctuation. Example: Sarah is graduating in two months she still doesn’t know which college she is going to. How can comma splices and run-ons be fixed????

3. Sentence Fragments: PIECES OR PARTS OF a sentence but NOT a complete sentence. Sentences require a subject AND a verb; if either is missing, it’s NOT a sentence (therefore, it’s a fragment). Example: In the cafeteria at school. 4. Comma with introductory element: Introductory elements are normally DEPENDENT clauses (can’t stand alone) and help to set up the independent clause (can stand alone). A separation (a pause) is needed between that introduction and the independent. The first word of the sentence often hints that an introductory element is being used. Example: After I was done with the SAT, I let out a huge sigh of relief. Where does the comma go????

I have seen this error ALL year in nearly ALL of your papers, so it’s time we talk about it, because this error slows your readers down. Pronouns are words like she, he, it, itself, they, their, themselves, etc. Pronouns are meant to replace a word that came before it in the sentence, the antecedent. The antecedent DETERMINES what pronoun is used. If the antecedent is singular, the pronoun must be. If the antecedent is masculine, the pronoun must be. That is why we call it an agreement between the two. Example: John slowed down on the highway when he saw the state trooper in his mirror. What is the pronoun? What is the antecedent?

Are these correct or incorrect? 1. A student should always keep up with their grades. 2. I can’t believe that someone left their dog in the car when it was so hot outside. Fill in the blank with the correct pronoun you should use: 1. No one is allowed to carry _______ phone during graduation, but no one follows that rule. 2. Teachers should not allow ________ students to turn in work late.

Identify the error in each and how they can be fixed.  I enjoy teaching the College Readiness class, I also like teaching Journalism and Literature as well.  Jason’s parents watch several TV shows every week. Such as Criminal Minds, Chicago PD, and Grey’s Anatomy.  I wanted to go to the movies my father said I had to do chores first.  Everybody should have their notebooks in class next week.  During the home football games students often shot up the “U” to show their school spirit.