Newswriting Style Chapter 3 HOMEWORK FOR FRIDAY: 1. Read Chapter 3, Newswriting Style 2. Do Pages 83-86, Exercise 4, Sections II- VII (only do 1-3 for each section). Retype each sentence. Do not copy edit. Double space (not single spaced) the rewrites.

“Just the facts, mam.” --Joe Friday, “Dragnet” One of the basic principles of journalism is the separation of fact and opinion. Reporters and editors strive to keep (their) opinions out of news stories. Beginners may find the newswriting style awkward at first; however, once it is mastered, students will find it can help them be more clear and concise in all writing. One of the basic principles of journalism is the separation of fact and opinion. Reporters and editors strive to keep (their) opinions out of news stories. Beginners may find the newswriting style awkward at first; however, once it is mastered, students will find it can help them be more clear and concise in all writing.

Planning and Prep The first step to a well-written story is planning and preparation The first step to a well-written story is planning and preparation Identify the story’s central point—do this by writing a one-or-two-sentence summary of what the story is about and why it is newsworthy. By including the central point, writers clearly tell readers (and listeners/viewers) what they will learn by reading the entire story. Identify the story’s central point—do this by writing a one-or-two-sentence summary of what the story is about and why it is newsworthy. By including the central point, writers clearly tell readers (and listeners/viewers) what they will learn by reading the entire story.

Planning and Prep (p.2) Story outlines—Reporters review their notes and other materials they have gathered before they start writing. This helps identify the central point and the information needed to develop it. It also helps them decide what the major sections of their stories will be. The central point and a brief outline of the major sections form the skeleton of the story. The reporter needs only to develop each section. Failure to identify the central point or lose sight of that central point risk writing stories that are incoherent and incomplete. Story outlines—Reporters review their notes and other materials they have gathered before they start writing. This helps identify the central point and the information needed to develop it. It also helps them decide what the major sections of their stories will be. The central point and a brief outline of the major sections form the skeleton of the story. The reporter needs only to develop each section. Failure to identify the central point or lose sight of that central point risk writing stories that are incoherent and incomplete.

“KISS”--Keep it Simple, Stupid! Simplify Words, Sentences and Paragraphs Simplify Words, Sentences and Paragraphs To simplify stories, avoid long, unfamiliar words To simplify stories, avoid long, unfamiliar words Also use short sentences and short paragraphs— research has consistently found a strong correlation between readability and sentence length: The longer a sentence is, the more difficulty it is to understand. One survey found that 75 percent of readers were able to understand sentences containing an average of 20 words, but understanding dropped rapidly as the sentences became longer (see page 30 graph) Also use short sentences and short paragraphs— research has consistently found a strong correlation between readability and sentence length: The longer a sentence is, the more difficulty it is to understand. One survey found that 75 percent of readers were able to understand sentences containing an average of 20 words, but understanding dropped rapidly as the sentences became longer (see page 30 graph)

More “KISS”ing… But this doesn’t mean all sentences should be short. This would make the writing seem choppy. Have a mix of shorter and longer sentences But this doesn’t mean all sentences should be short. This would make the writing seem choppy. Have a mix of shorter and longer sentences Newswriters should write for the ear, listening to the natural rhythm, or flow, of the words and sentences the put on paper. Test your stories by reading them aloud to yourself or to a friend, or in a tape recorder then play it back. Newswriters should write for the ear, listening to the natural rhythm, or flow, of the words and sentences the put on paper. Test your stories by reading them aloud to yourself or to a friend, or in a tape recorder then play it back. Paragraphs should demonstrate relationships between ideas. It is a means of making complicated material clear. Like the words that form sentences, the sentences that form paragraphs should flow together, logically combining similar thoughts or ideas. Paragraphs should demonstrate relationships between ideas. It is a means of making complicated material clear. Like the words that form sentences, the sentences that form paragraphs should flow together, logically combining similar thoughts or ideas.

Eliminate Unnecessary Words Newswriters must learn to eliminate unnecessary words yet retain enough detail to make their stories informative. (see word elimination exercise on page 67) Newswriters must learn to eliminate unnecessary words yet retain enough detail to make their stories informative. (see word elimination exercise on page 67) Brevity makes it easier for readers to grasp the main idea of each story. Brevity makes it easier for readers to grasp the main idea of each story.

Objectivity—a Cornerstone of Journalism Remain Objective— Remain Objective— Journalists must strive to be as impartial or “objective” as possible. Journalists must strive to be as impartial or “objective” as possible. Reporters are neutral observers, not advocates or participants Reporters are neutral observers, not advocates or participants They provide the facts and details of the stories they report, not their own interpretations or opinions of the facts and events. They provide the facts and details of the stories they report, not their own interpretations or opinions of the facts and events. Journalists express their opinions only in editorials and commentaries (and TV/cable “talking head” shows) Journalists express their opinions only in editorials and commentaries (and TV/cable “talking head” shows) When reporters inject their own opinions into a story, they risk offending readers and viewers who may not want reporters telling them how to think When reporters inject their own opinions into a story, they risk offending readers and viewers who may not want reporters telling them how to think

Objectivity—a core value/ideal Newswriters can report the opinions expressed by other people—the sources for their stories—but must clearly attribute those opinions to the source. If reporters fail to provide the proper attribution, readers may think the reporters are expressing their own opinions or agreeing with the source. Newswriters can report the opinions expressed by other people—the sources for their stories—but must clearly attribute those opinions to the source. If reporters fail to provide the proper attribution, readers may think the reporters are expressing their own opinions or agreeing with the source. A single word expressing an opinion can infuriate readers (see example on page 67) A single word expressing an opinion can infuriate readers (see example on page 67)

Avoid Stereotypical “Ism”—Racism, Sexism, Agism Reporters mention a person’s race, religion or ethnic background only when the fact is clearly relevant to the story. Reporters mention a person’s race, religion or ethnic background only when the fact is clearly relevant to the story. Be sensitive to sexist stereotypes—in the past, news stories mentioning women often emphasized their roles as wives, mothers, cooks, housekeepers and sex objects. Times have changed. Be sensitive to sexist stereotypes—in the past, news stories mentioning women often emphasized their roles as wives, mothers, cooks, housekeepers and sex objects. Times have changed. Never assume everyone involved in story is male (firemen, mailmen, etc) or that all people holding prestigious jobs are male or that most women are full-time homemakers. Never assume everyone involved in story is male (firemen, mailmen, etc) or that all people holding prestigious jobs are male or that most women are full-time homemakers.

Avoid “isms” and gender references Avoid stereotypes that suggest older Americans are all lonely, inactive, unproductive, poor, passive, weak and sick. Avoid stereotypes that suggest older Americans are all lonely, inactive, unproductive, poor, passive, weak and sick. Avoid the cumbersome and repetitive “he/she” references by working/writing around them. Example: “A postal carrier has his regular mail route.” Better: “A postal carrier has a regular mail route.” Or make plural: “Postal carriers have regular mail routes.” Avoid the cumbersome and repetitive “he/she” references by working/writing around them. Example: “A postal carrier has his regular mail route.” Better: “A postal carrier has a regular mail route.” Or make plural: “Postal carriers have regular mail routes.”

Be careful to avoid other stereotypes: Be careful to avoid other stereotypes: Individuals with physical and mental disabilities as helpless, deficient or unable to contribute to society Individuals with physical and mental disabilities as helpless, deficient or unable to contribute to society Some Vietnam War veterans feel they’ve been stereotyped by the media as violent and unstable Some Vietnam War veterans feel they’ve been stereotyped by the media as violent and unstable Religious groups- Muslims, for example, as terrorists or inherently violent, or some Christian denominations as strange, different or extremist in their beliefs. Religious groups- Muslims, for example, as terrorists or inherently violent, or some Christian denominations as strange, different or extremist in their beliefs. Reporters must be careful when covering members or different faiths. Be careful that you do not stereotype all members of a particular faith because of the actions of a branch of that faith—Islam, for example. Reporters must be careful when covering members or different faiths. Be careful that you do not stereotype all members of a particular faith because of the actions of a branch of that faith—Islam, for example.###