Writing Dialogue Mini-Lesson

Dialogue Introduction Dialogue should be true to life. (Realistic conversation) The trick is to write dialogue that seems real, but that is easy for the reader to follow.

Repetition Helps the Flow One character picks up on a word that another character has just said: “You’re not open to any new ideas. You won’t even listen to a word about change!” “A word! I’ve listened to volumes!”

Interruptions will Work too One character breaks in on another, completing the first character’s line. “If only we could get enough—” “Sleep?”

Dialogue TAGS In writing dialogue for a story, you start a new paragraph each time the speaker changes. Using tags helps the reader to know who is speaking. The trouble started when I picked the movie from the Redbox. I knew he probably wouldn’t want to see Pitch Perfect 2. “I’d really like you to sit down,” I said. He whined, “I’m tired of watching this movie.” “What are you doing?” she asked. “It’s a stupid movie!” hissed Jay viciously.

Use Action instead of Tags Instead of getting in the TAG RUT, try incorporating some action: She pointed across the room. “Get over there!” She slammed her hands down on the table. “NO!”

More Tips Don’t create non-parts with your characters in dialogue. This is the agreeing, nodding, uh-huh-ing character. Work to reveal information from both sides of the conversation.

And watch that punctuation… In his usual rush, Orion tumbled through the door. “Mom, I’m home,” he shouted! “Take your shoes off,” she called. “Did you take your shoes off?” he sassed back.