Persuasive Writing Mentor Papers For Analysis

2126 Penfield Road Penfield, NY14450 October 16, 20__ Dear Mrs. Pruszynski, You should have a pizza party. Most kids have had good behavior so for and haven't been punished. The party will act as an encouragement to have good behavior. The party will also create good teacher-kid relations (the kids will think you are nice). As you can see, a pizza party has many good things about it. Pizza is a very good food for parties. Pizza is very popular among kids, so basically anyone will eat it. Pizza is one of the only things people will deliver, so you won't have to pick it up. Pizza always gives you servings from the grain, fruit, and dairy groups, and sometimes gives you servings from others too. You can probably tell that pizza is a very good food for parties. You might think a pizza party will take away from academic time, but it wouldn't. You could do the pizza party at flextime, when you wouldn't be teaching anyway. Another time that you could do it is lunchtime. You could even do it on the weekend if you would like! As you can see, a pizza party would not take away from academic time. You might think that in a pizza party we would be loud and we would disturb other classes, but we wouldn't. We could go in another enclosed room so if we were loud we wouldn't disturb anybody. We could go outside where nobody else would be and we wouldn't disturb anybody. If we were too loud, you could stop the party. You can probably tell that we wouldn't disturb any other classes. As you can probably see, a pizza party is a good thing. The class has had mostly good behavior and the party will work as an encourogement. Pizza is one of the best foods for parties and is easy to get. A pizza party will not toke away from academic time and will not disrupt any other classes. I hope you will see a pizza party is not a bad thing and will consider having one. Sincerely,

Dear Mom and Dad, I think I should be allowed to sleep over my friend's house. I know I'm grounded by missing curfew by an hour, but if I sleepover I will be in a better mood. I will be doing chores over at her house. I know you think I should not go because I'm grounded. You also might think it will spoil me, but after you read this letter I think you will have changed your mind. The first reason I think you should let me sleep over my friend's house is because I would have better mood and attitude. If I get a good night sleep and have fun with my friend I will be ready to start my chores. If I see my friends at the sleepover I won't be as anxious to see them because I will have had my time and fun with them. When I'm with my friends I'm always happy, have a good mood, sprit and attitude. So if you let me go I'll come back with a good attitude. You may think I will be spoiled and lazy when I get home, but wait till you here this. I won't end up sitting around like you think because her mom makes us help with everything. If I start my choirs at somebody else's house I will be ready to start the chores at our house when I get home. Since she has no siblings I will have quiet time to think about what I did and how not to do it again. So if you let me go I will come home with a good attitude and will be ready to start my chores. I know you had a few reasons on why I couldn't go but I've found a solution for all of those. The first reason you said is because it would make spoiled and I would always find ways to get out of a grounding. Well I'm still getting grounded and plus your getting the better end of the deal. Your other reason was that I was supposed to bay-sit. Well there is still time to get a baby-sitter. Plus if you get and older one then you wont have to send the two older kids to neighbors houses. It will also be cheaper because you will only have to pay person instead of 3. Mom and Dad, I love you and hope you will consider my opion. Although if you say "NO" I will not beg because I know that is your final decision. I know though that what ever choice you chose it will be the best for me. Thank You for reading my letter and please think about it. Love you oldest daughter,

Dear Mrs, pruzsynski We should have a pizza. party I feel we shouId have the pizza party if we do things to earn it if we are very good and pizza is healthy We could earn it if we did something special if we get our work done and if we do extra work We could be good if we don't interrupt the teachers we hand our work in on time and if we did all our work - Pizza is healthy because the cheese is dairy the crust is grain the tomato sauce is vegetable These are the reasons we should have a pizza party we can earn it we can be very good and pizza is healthy that's why we should have a pizza party Sincerly

Dear Mrs. Pruszinski, 2126 Penfield Rd. Penfield, N. Y /22/__ Our class should have a Pizza party because we work hard. We help each other with our work, An example of when we are helping each other happened When we were looking at Boys Life magazine to find a thesis statement. I read the thesis statement to my partner while he/she writes it down. We worked together, We usually help each other with our science experiments. That is how we help each other, We worked hard on our R. A.M. test. Her is an example, We didn't look at each other's papers. We studied for it. 1bat's how we worked hard on our R.A.M, test. We're doing our work when we are supposed to. For example if a stranger walked in the room everyone will be working on the same thing at the same time. Also during the R.A. M. Test we worked hard and looked at our own papers. That is how we do what we are supposed to work on what we are supposed to when we are supposed to. We could put money toward it and have it at lunch so we don't disturb a class, Sincerely,

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