1. Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 doodles brother loves him but hes way too hard on doodle Corrected Doodle’s brother loves him, but he’s way too hard on Doodle.

2. Proofreading Warm-up Item 2 Tanya and raymond was discussing the conflict in the short story the scarlet ibis. Corrected Tanya and Raymond were discussing the conflict in the short story “The Scarlet Ibis.”

3. Proofreading Warm-up Item 3 i think he was wrong to make doodle swim and row stated raymond. Corrected “I think he was wrong to make Doodle swim and row,” stated Raymond.

4. Proofreading Warm-up Item 4 I agree said Tanya but I beleive Doodle enjoied trips to the swamp Corrected “I agree,” said Tanya, “but I believe Doodle enjoyed trips to the swamp.”

5. Proofreading Warm-up Item 5 Jenna sayed that her had dreamed about Doodle’s brother. Corrected Jenna said that she had dreamed about Doodle’s brother.

6. Proofreading Warm-up Item 6 She was triing to warn him that Doodle would die, if he keeped pushing doodle so hard. Corrected She was trying to warn him that Doodle would die if he kept pushing Doodle so hard. (comma after deleted)

7. Proofreading Warm-up Item 7 In class i readed aloud from Gary Soto’s story “the grandfather. Corrected In class I read aloud from Gary Soto’s story “The Grandfather.”

8. Proofreading Warm-up Item 8 As you read that paragraph could you imply what the avocado tree might symbolize Corrected As you read that paragraph, could you infer what the avocado tree might symbolize?

9. Proofreading Warm-up Item 9 The boy’s Grandfather he has settled in Fresno California many years ago. Corrected The boy’s grandfather had settled in Fresno, California, many years ago. (he deleted)

10. Proofreading Warm-up Item 10 This story was published in the twentyeth century but it is set in anceint china Corrected This story was published in the twentieth century, but it is set in ancient China.

11. Proofreading Warm-up Item 11 How come the two citys had walls around them, anyways. Corrected Why did the two cities have walls around them, anyway?

12. Proofreading Warm-up Item 12 both of the leaders makes his citizens work hard to build the walls. Corrected Both of the leaders make their citizens work hard to build the walls.

13. Proofreading Warm-up Item 13 Some of the stonemasons looked like they was sick, and starving. Corrected Some of the stonemasons looked as if they were sick and starving. (comma after sick deleted)

14. Proofreading Warm-up Item 14 Although the worker’s moral was low they builded the wall just like the leader ordered. Corrected Although the workers’ morale was low, they built the wall just as the leader had ordered.