1. PAPER 1 Milstead Feedback

2. Students are required to analyze, compare and comment on the texts in the light of their understanding of audience and purpose. In order to achieve this, students need to analyze structure, language and style in addition to aspects such as text type, context, bias and/or ideological position. WRITING PROMPT

3. Audience & Purpose Structure Language & Style Text Type Context Bias Ideological Position WRITING PROMPT BROKEN DOWN

4. Needs to reflect audience and purpose— Writing Prompt CLAIM

5. Need to reflect audience and purpose! TOPIC SENTENCES

6. Don’t need these for the Text 1 options (Palermo & Wickersham) For Owen, cite as… (2-4). IN-TEXT CITATIONS

7. Need to work on use of vocabulary, tone, sentence structure and terminology. REGISTER

8. Text 1 = “What is Mustard Gas” & “An Address to the Soldiers of the National Army - Camp Dix” Text 2 = Owen’s poems TEXT 1 VS. TEXT 2

9. Order of argument points in the claim needs to be in the same order in the topic sentences. ORGANIZATION OF CLAIM

10. I need them at the end of your essay in the bottom left-hand corner.—Please. WORD COUNTS

11. When talking about sounds, needs to look like this: /p/ or /b/ SOUNDS

12. Contains a subject and arguable opinion. Example: “civilization vs. savagery” is not a theme, but it is a worthy subject for a theme. Example: “civilization and savagery play major roles in the novel” is not a theme because it is an easily observable fact about the subject, not an arguable opinion. Example: “An innate sense of savagery undermines the facade of civilization and morality" is a workable theme because there is an opinion that can/must be proved. THEME

13. When blending a quote, please follow the steps below: #1 Transitional phrases #2 Blending of CD (do you know who is speaking and/or what is going on?) #3 Use correct in-text citation #4 Use correct punctuation. BLEND QUOTES!!!!

14. You may revise your paper for 100% if it was turned in on time. Due: Thursday, April 24 th In order to earn credit, students must: 1)Submit revision to turnitin.com 2)Highlight changes made on hard copy and write notes in the margins explaining those changes 3)Attached revised draft to the top of the original packet. REVISIONS