1. MOVIE REVIEW THE NOTEBOOK

2. Mistakes  Grammatical mistakes  Not easily understandable content  Punctuation mark mistakes.

3. IMPROVEMENTS  Corrected grammatical errors.  Removed not easily understandable content.  Added storyline.  Added Star-cast at the bottom.

4. Version 1 This movie directed by Nick Cassavetes was taken from the novel "The Notebook". This is a romantic drama film. Ryan Gosling was, as always, authentic in his portrayal of Noah, a poor working class guy who falls in love with Allie, a beautiful rich girl who is staying in town with her family on their summer's vacation. The relationship is not well received by Allie's parents which leads Noah to make a decision that he feels is in both of their best interests. The result of a hastily made decision leads our main character down a road that first shuts out true passion as he tries to forget his past hurt. But, a stint in the military, where he experiences loss as well as his loss at home following his service in the military, leads him right back to his heart.Seven years later, the couple was reunited. The story is deep and bittersweet, but ultimately rewarding. The screenplay and lines are wonderful and the director Nick Cassavetes succeeds in making a movie that makes you feel different emotions, from heartwarming to heartbreaking feelings.

5. Genre: Drama, Romance Directed By: Nick Cassavetes Written By: Jeremy Leven, Jan Sardi, Nick Cassavet.

6. Version 2 This movie directed by Nick Cassavetes was taken from the novel "The Notebook" written by Nicolas spark. This is a romantic drama film. Ryan Gosling was, as always, authentic in his portrayal of Noah, a poor working class guy who falls in love with Allie, a beautiful rich girl who is staying in town with her family on their summer's vacation. The relationship is not well received by Allie's parents which leads to separation of couple forcibly. Noah worked for military during world war. He lost his friend in war. Noah wrote one letter a day for one year to Allie war which were not dispatched to Allie by her mother. He rebuilt the old house to fulfill the desire of Allie. Both of these instances shows how much he loved the Allie. Aliie got engaged with someone.When she watched Noah's photo in newspaper she felt divided between Lon and Noah. She couldn't resist her love to Noah. Atlast, couple was reunited. The story is deep and bittersweet, but ultimately rewarding. The screenplay and lines are wonderful and the director Nick Cassavetes succeeds in making a movie that makes you feel different emotions, from heartwarming to heartbreaking feelings. star cast: Ryan Gosling, Rachel McAdams, James Garner Gena,Rowlands Joan, Allen James Marsden

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