2. Linda Ruby Olivia A Ra Jody Abo

7. Detail information Beginning Conclusion

9. Vera A Ra May Nicky Ivy Huang No Name

10. Clear comment!

11. Sympathy feeling provided. And the comment is encouraging.

12. Practical and useful suggestion provided. Good.

13. Asking some questions to the writer means that you have a critical thinking. It’s good.

14. Unit 3 ppt

15. Prewriting: Step 1: Choose a topic Step 2: Gather ideas Step 3: Decide which ideas you want to use and where to use them

16. Drafting: Step 4: Write your paragraph or essay

17. Reviewing and revising: Step 5: Check what you have written Rewriting: Step 6: May need to explain something more clearly Add more details Change your organization Step 5 and 6 may be repeated many times.

18. Brainstorming is a way of gathering ideas about a topic.

19. Making a list:

20. Freewriting:

22. Try to draw a mapping with your group members. Don’t be a loafer. Everyone needs to contribute!

25. Well- organized.

28. The ideas are creative.

31. A paragraph is a group of sentences about a single topic. The sentences explain the writers’ main idea about the topic. A paragraph is often between 5 and 10 sentences long. The first sentence of a paragraph is usually indented a few spaces.

32. just topic main idea help explain main idea

33. Check your answers with your classmates. Any questions?

34. MetroCard Metro=Metropolitan Railway (Frence)

38. nyc subway etiquette

39. Preview unit 5 Hand in your revised “My Best Friend”