1. Hour 1 What have you learned about philosophy and rhetoric?

3. I thought this was meant to show you can do anything you set your mind to. This was meant to show that one can do anything they set their mind to.

4. Comma Splice! I love eating cake, she loves cookies. I love eating cake; she loves cookies. I love cake: it is totally delicious. I love eating cake, but she loves cookies. She and I love ice cream. I really liked this book because.... This is an important piece of literature because.... "He was on fire" (Hall 234). Michael Hall's essay "Running for his Life"

5. Their There are many problems in that part of the world. There They're going together to the play. They're Their dog barfed in the yard. There is a place. Their is possessive: Their belongs to them. (heirs get money--it's theirs) They're is a contraction: They are totally using two words in one!

6. Apostrophes PossessionContractions Eric's gross toupee Haley's big hat Chris' water The Chris's project The Schwens' project. The toupee Eric found. they've we're Plural She likes to drink Pepsi's Pepsis He likes to watch DVD's DVDs Pineapple's for sale. Pronoun Possession Its motor fell out. Their monkey ran away. His dog puked in the yard. The fault was theirs.

7. I me you us I think this was a very sad story. This was a very sad story. This story made me feel sad for Gilbert. This story is meant to make the reader feel sorry for Gilbert. The essay shows us that we can always turn our lives around. The essay shows that people can always turn their lives around. The essay shows that one can always change his or her life. It shows that you can always change your life. This shows that when you don't try hard, you will fail. It shows that one can always change his or her life. This shows that not trying will lead to failure.

8. Ha s this ever happened to you? You work very horde on a paper for English clash And then get a very glow raid (like a D or even a D=) and all because you are the word¹s liverwurst spoiler. Proofreading your peppers is a matter of the the utmost impotence. This is a problem that affects manly, manly students. I myself was such a bed spiller once upon a term that my English teacher in my sophomoric year, Mrs. Myth, said I would never get into a good colleague. And that¹s all I wanted, just to get into a good colleague. Not just anal community colleague, because I wouldn¹t be happy at anal community colleague. I needed a place that would offer me intellectual simulation, I really need to be challenged, challenged dentally. I know this makes me sound like a stereo, but I really wanted to go to an ivory legal collegue. So I needed to improvement or gone would be my dream of going to Harvard, Jail, or Prison (in Prison, New Jersey). The Impotence of Proofreading Taylor Mali

9. Today’s Question What have you learned about philosophy and rhetoric?

10. Wednesday’s Menu Discuss “What is Rhetoric?” Great Speech Assignment –Select your speech tonight (off limit list) –Outlining info tomorrow (due Tuesday) –Start next Friday Audience “Are Women Persons?” Developmental Assets "I Have a Dream“, August 28, 1963"I Have a Dream“, –Compare to “Letter…Birmingham Jail” –Imagery, Anaphora, Allusion, Word Choice, Figurative Language –Annotation “We Shall Overcome” –complete reading as homework

11. Not available Susan B Anthony, “On Women’s Right to Vote” MLK, “I Have a Dream” LBJ, “We Shall Overcome” Barbara Jordan, “Statement on the Articles of Impeachment” Reagan, “Challenger Tragedy” Nixon, “Checkers”