1. Updates made to latest draft since Herndon Sony Corporation Toshiaki Kojima

2. Proposal of Template for Type Description Separate Normative Requirements from Description. Add Service Description Field (as in some case, Service Description is required for Type rather than parameter). Remove factoring diagrams.

3. Proposal of Class Diagram Main class diagram only. No sub-type class diagram. Show reference to the sub-type in the parameter description table.

4. Proposal of Template for Parameter Description Separate Normative Requirements from Description. Add reference of Type. Add Inclusion and Default fields Add Service Description field

5. Sony General Comment NoDescriptionNoDescription G1 ✓ Update the diagram. G14 ✓ G2 PENDING(IBM). G15 ✓ Same as G2 G3 ✓ [S2] Change “terminate” to ”stop”. [S3] Delete “CaptureStop” request and ack. G16 NO CHANGE G4 ✓ G17 PENDING(class diagram). G5 NO CHANGE G18 PENDING (BaseProfile) G6 ✓ Already done at the document separation. G19 ✓ G7 ✓ Already done at the document separation. G20 PENDING (RTP Capture) G8 ✓ [S6] Remove ”anonymous” from SFTP. [S7] PENDING G21 NO CHANGE G9 ✓ Already done at the document separation. G22 ✓ Change “Informative:” to “Note:”. G10 ✓ Already done at the document separation. G23 PENDING (extension) G11 ✓ Already done at the document separation. G24 PENDING (class diagram). G12 ✓ A service shall support either Notification or Polling. G25 ✓ Remove all complex types. G13 ✓ G26 ✓ G25

6. Sony General Comment NoDescriptionNoDescription G27 ✓ G40 ✓ G36. G28 ✓ Remove “value” type. G41 ✓ G29 ✓ [S20] Remove the sentence on URI. [S21] NO CHANGE G42 ✓ G30 NO CHANGE G43 ✓ G31 ✓ G44 PENDING (Error Code) G32 PENDING (Class diagram) G45 ✓ [E21] PENDING (Example of regular expression) [E22] Updated [E23] PENDING (Metadata) G33 NO CHANGE G46 PENDING (Metadata) G34 PENDING (Error Code) G47 ✓ Remove “sourceID”. G35 PENDING (Class diagram) G48 ✓ G36 ✓ Merge “extendedJobInfo” and “compactJobInfo”. Change “jobInfoSelection” to “includdeJobInfo”. G49 ✓ Remove “This parameter…”. G37 PENDING (Class diagram) G50 ✓ G38 PENDING (Extension) G51 PENDING (Service Consumer Interface) G39 ✓

7. Sony Comments on Service Description ParameterDescription extension IBM to propose jobInfo Agreed on integrating ExtendedJobInfo and CompactJobInfo into JobInfo Profile IBM to propose (BaseProfile) priority Agreed on not mandatory notifyAt Agreed on mandatory either Notification or polling finishBefore Agreed on leaving as it is wrapperMetadata IBM (and metadata sub-group) to propose modifyJobProfileType Agreed on removing serviceProvideJobID Agreed on leaving as it is queueCommand Agreed that all commands are optional maxNumberResults Agreed on leaving as it is outputFileNamePattern IBM to propose examples. Agreed on moving into profile StartProcessByTimeMarkType Agreed on leaving as it is TimeType Agreed on leaving as it is sourceID, sourceTyp Agreed that minOccure = 1 profileID Agreed on deleting description Agreed that the Service Description is not needed fault Agreed that minOccure = 1

8. Sony Comments on Service Description NoDescriptionNoDescription P1 ✓ Change the minOccurs of “priority” to 0. P18 NOT CHANGE P2 ✓ G12 P19 ✓ Format combination is described in Service Description. P3 NO CHANGE P20 ✓ Remove “profileID”. P4 ✓ Only “ByNoWaitType” is mandatory. P21 NO CHANGE P5 NO CHANGE P22 NO CHANGE P6 PENDING (Extension) P23 ✓ P7 ✓ All commands are optional. P24 ✓ P8 ✓ Change “modifyJob” to “modifyPriority”. P25 ✓ Remove “profileID”. P9 NO CHANGE P26 ✓ P10 ✓ All commands are optional. P27 ✓ P11 ✓ G36 P28 NO COMMENT P12 ✓ Both “ByIDType” and “ByFilterType” are optional. P29 ✓ P13 ✓ P30 ✓ P14 ✓ Add “outputFileName” to Service Description. P31 NO CHANGE P15 NO CHANGE P32 PENDING (Error Code, Feature Not Supported) P16 ✓ Only “ByServiceDefinedType” is mandatory. P33 ✓ Change minOccurs of “fault“ to 1. P17 ✓ P34 ✓ G47

9. Other Comments NoDescription IBM 1. Not yet 2. PENDNG (IBM) 3. NO CHANGE 4. Not yet EBU 1. PENDING (Guideline) 2. PENDING (Metadata) Cube-TecPENDING (Metadata) HR(1), (2) Chapter 5.5.3: NO CHANGE Chapter 8.1.1.2: NO CHANGE Chapter 9: PENDING (Guideline) Chapter 9.3.1: NO CHANGE HR(3) 1. What means… : Updated 2. How can… : PENDING 3. Sometimes, … : NO CHANGE 4. How can… : NO CHANGE 5. Should the… : Done already HR (4)PENDING (Refactoring and Guideline) HR (5)NO CHANGE

10. Other Comments NoDescription IRT (1) [Page12 of 122] NO CHANGE [Page 26 of 122] PENDING (IBM) [Page 29 of 122] PENDING (IBM) [Page 120 of 122] Not yet IRT (2) [Page 18 of 122] PENDING [Page 26 of 122] NO CHANGE IBM/BloombergPENDING (Metadata) Quantel (1)PENDING (Refactoring) Quantel (2)PENDING (Refactoring) Quantel (3) - Why use xs:sequence… : NO CHANGE - Why use xsattribute:… : NO CHANGE - In fact, … : NO CHANGE - The time type… : PENDING - For true … : PENDING

11. Other Comments NoDescription BBC (1)PENDING (Refactoring) BBC (2) - Secton7… : PENDING - 7.2 Service… : PENDING - In 7.1.1, … : Updated - Althiugh it’s… : PENDING - Also in this… : Updated (Removed when document separation.) - BBC (3) - Section 8.1.9… : PENDING - Section 8.2.1… : PENDING - Section 8.2.2… : Updated (already done at the document separation.) - Section 9.3.1… : Updated - Section 9.3.2.6.1… : Updated - Appendix1 : Not yet

12. Proposal for Error Code numbering policy INF_Sxx_xxxxInfrastructure errors (system, storage, network, memory, processor) DAT_Sxx_xxxxData errors (validation, missing, duplication) OPN_Sxx_xxxxOperation errors (existence, support, lock, connection, failure) SEC_Sxx_xxxxSecurity errors (authentication, authorization) EXT0000Extended code. See extended error code for detail. SYSxxxxSystem level errors DATAxxxxData validation errors APPxxxxService level errors EXT0000Extended code. See extended error code for detail. XXX_S00_0001 -Common errors XXX_S01_0001 -Transfer Service errors XXX_S02_0001 -Transform Service errors XXX_S03_0001 -Capture Service errors

13. Proposal for Error Code numbering policy CategoryCurrentProposed CodeDescription Common SYS0100INF_S00_0001System Unavailable SYS0101INF_S00_0002System Timeout SYS0102INF_S00_0003System Internal Error SYS0103INF_S00_0004Unable to connect to the database SYS0104INF_S00_0005System out of memory SYS0105INF_S00_0006System out of disk space Common APP0100OPN_S00_0001Job Command is not currently supported by the service URI specified APP0101OPN_S00_0002Queue Command is not currently supported by the service or the device APP0102OPN_S00_0003 Operation requested is not currently supported by the service or the device APP0103OPN_S00_0004Service unable to find/lookup device endpoint APP0104OPN_S00_0005Job Command failed APP0105OPN_S00_0006Queue Command failed APP0106OPN_S00_0007Service unable to connect to device endpoint APP0107OPN_S00_0008Job Queue is full, locked or stopped. No new jobs being accepted APP0108OPN_S00_0009Job ended with a failure

14. Proposal for Error Code numbering policy CategoryCurrentProposed CodeDescription Common APP0200OPN_S00_0010Service received no response from device APP0201OPN_S00_0011 Service received an exception from device. See description or exception detail APP0202OPN_S00_0012 Service received an unknown or an internal error from device. See description for error detail APP0203OPN_S00_0013 Unable to connect to client's notification service endpoint (replyTo) to send the asynchronous result notification response. APP0204OPN_S00_0014 Unable to connect to client's service endpoint (faultTo) to send the asynchronous job fault response APP0205OPN_S00_0015Feature not supported APP0206OPN_S00_0016Deadline passed APP0207OPN_S00_0017Time constraints in request cannot be met APP0300OPN_S00_0018 Internal or Unknown error encountered. See description for error detail. EXT0000EXT_S00_0001Extended code. See extended error code for detail.

15. Proposal for Error Code numbering policy CategoryCurrentProposed CodeDescription Common DATA0100DAT_S00_0001Invalid Request XML Format DATA0102DAT_S00_0002Invalid Input Media Format DATA0103DAT_S00_0003Invalid jobID - the supplied jobID does not exists DATA0104DAT_S00_0004Missing required service metadata in request DATA0105DAT_S00_0005Duplicate jobGUID detected for new job DATA0106DAT_S00_0006Invalid Request Parameters DATA0107DAT_S00_0007Job Command not valid DATA0108DAT_S00_0008Queue Command not valid DATA0109DAT_S00_0009Invalid Priority DATA0110DAT_S00_0010Input Media not found. Invalid Resource URI specified Transfer DATA0220DAT_S01_0001Invalid URI protocol specified for Transport operations. DATA0221DAT_S01_0002Invalid OutpurDirectory or Target URI path DATA0222OPN_S01_0001Unsupported protocol DATA0223OPN_S01_0002Unsupported hash type DATA0224OPN_S01_0003Encryption not supported DATA0225OPN_S01_0004Authentication not supported

16. Proposal for Error Code numbering policy CategoryCurrentProposed CodeDescription Transfer DATA0226OPN_S01_0005Integrity check not supported DATA0227OPN_S01_0006File too large DATA0228OPN_S01_0007Times not possible DATA0229OPN_S01_0008Incorrect file size DATA0230OPN_S01_0009Rejected by operator DATA0231OPN_S01_0010Transfer process ended unexpectedly DATA0232OPN_S01_0011 Incorrect Hash. File received does not have same hash as specified in the file hash value property. DATA0233INF_S01_0001Network link with insufficient bandwidth DATA0234INF_S01_0002Link Timed Out Transform DATA0101OPN_S02_0001Invalid target media format Capture DATA0200OPN_S03_0001Invalid target media format DATA0201DAT_S03_0001Invalid source ID DATA0202OPN_S03_0002Inconsistent time constraints