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3 Steps of writing a good article Read the instructions carefully and decide the style. Follow typical patterns List the key points. Put the key points into sentences. ( ) Develop the sentences into passage. Check your work.

4 Li Yue Zhang Hua Sunshine Nursing Home) 100~ Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly By Chen Jie, School Newspaper

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6 Style: News report( Theme: Student volunteers work for Sunshine Nursing Home. Event: when Where Who what The outline of the passage On May Day Sunshine Nursing Home Li Yue and Zhang Hua They did some voluntary work The reaction of the elderly Comment on the event.

7 Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. What Li Yue and Zhang Hua did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives. In addition, it is we youngsters duty to care for the elderly, who have devoted a lot to our society.

8 Skills of writing a good article Transition Words Varied sentence patterns A good passage Advanced vocabularies

9 They gave the elderly flowers and fruits. They presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. What Li Yue and Zhang Hua did has made others happy and is also good for their own lives. What Li Yue and Zhang Hua did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives. Advanced vocabularies

10 1.That is a difficult job. 2.We all think he is a great man. 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. I. We all think highly of him. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me. That is a challenging job.

11 4. He is good at English. 5.There is an increase in the number of womens jobs. 6.Some students who live in remote areas cant have listening material easily. There is an increase in the number of jobs available for women. He has a good command /knowledge of English. available access Some students who live in remote areas have no easy access to listening material.

12 Varied sentence structures Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, Respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. They started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. It was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. What Li Yue and Zhang Hua did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives. It is we youngsters duty to care for the elderly, who have devoted a lot to our society. /

13 To his surprise, the little girl can speak English fluently. What surprises him is that the little girl can speak English fluently. Practice The Little girl can speak English fluently, which surprises him. He is surprised to find that the little girl can speak English fluently. The fact that the little can speak English fluently surprises him He is surprised for the little can speak English fluently. The little girl can speak English so fluently that he is surprised.

14 Transition words Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. In addition, it is we youngsters duty to care for the elderly, who have devoted a lot to our society.

15 however on the contrary on the other hand for example for instance such as; namely above all in fact in particular all in all finally in brief; on the whole firstly; first of all; above all to begin/start with first and foremost; finally; in the end; eventually; last but not least furthermore in addition moreover what is more

16 . Online Shopping As a new way of shopping, online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life. Online shopping has many advantages. Online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things. Instead of searching a crowded store, we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like. It is much faster for us to do shopping. We dont have to spend a lot of time going to shops. We can see a great deal of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time. Online shopping is not so perfect. The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are. We can be cheated easily. We can not see the things in detail. It is an advanced way to do shopping. So we should develop and make good use of it.

17 As a new way of shopping online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life. Online shopping has many advantages. Firstly, online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things. Instead of searching a crowded store, we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like. Secondly, it is much faster for us to do shopping. We dont have to spend a lot of time going to shops. In addition, we can see a great deal of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time. However, online shopping is not so perfect. The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are. As a result, we can be cheated easily. Whats worse, we can not see the things in detail. In my opinion, it is an advanced way to do shopping. So we should develop and make good use of it.

18 Andrew Andrew 1 2 ( ) 1 ( ) Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship. _________________________________________________ _________________________ _________________________________________________ ______________________________

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20 Para.1Phenomena Para.2 the relationship lose their temper quarrel with others turn a deaf ear to suggestions improve the situation. respect communication relaxation … The outline of the passage

21 Recently,…has become the focus of the society/our school. Nowadays, there is a growing concern for… There exists some problems in… Nowadays it is common to hear/see… Nowadays,…has become a problem we have to face. My own experience tells me that…. In my opinion, we should attach more importance to… As far as I am concerned, I plan to… Personally, I tend to…

22 Finish the composition and hand it in tomorrow.

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24 Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship. Generally speaking, the relationship between us students and our family members and classmates as well as teachers is fairly good. However. there exist some problems. Some students in our grade easily lose their temper because of anxiety and study burden. Whats worse, they sometimes quarrel with others, and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers, which is very disappointing. In my opinion, we middle school students should make effort to improve the situation. Firstly, we should respect our parents and teachers as well as our classmates. Secondly, when we are not feeling good or happy, we can chat with our friends or teachers or even parents. It is likely that they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice. Finally, after a days hard work. we can relax by exercising, such as playing basketball table tennis and so on.


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