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1 Debbie Showers and Kate Story NMR Literacy Coaches
Persuasive Writing Debbie Showers and Kate Story NMR Literacy Coaches

2 Outline of Day Defining persuasive text – in the context and NAPLAN and beyond Prompts Using the marking guide Success criteria Teaching persuasive text – mini lessons Writing persuasive text – what writers do Resources Assessment Ultranet space

3 What is persuasive writing?
Persuasive writing is where the writer attempts to persuade the reader to her or his point of view. Writer presents their opinion and the offers reasons for this view. Persuasive text covers arguments, letters, debates, advertisements, posters, poems, songs BUT that is not what NAPLAN requires.

4 What NAPLAN wants MUST convince reader of their opinions
Text MUST include an introduction, body and conclusion May be presented as an essay, letter to the editor of a local paper or as text of a speech It can be one sided (agree or disagree) or it can be a discussion Easier to write for or against, not both Presentation source – What is expected in the NAPLAN 2011 writing test? FAQ

5 What NAPLAN wants cont’d.
Must address 10 criteria (audience, text structure, ideas, persuasive devices, vocabulary, cohesion, paragraphing, sentence structure, punctuation, spelling) Selection, organisation and relevance of ideas key Persuasive devices a must Writing stamina – you may build up

6 The marking guide Criteria Skills Focus Audience
Writer’s capacity to orient, engage and persuade reader Text structure Organisation of the structural components of a persuasive text (intro, body & conclusion) into appropriate & effective text structure Ideas Selection, relevance & elaboration of ideas for persuasive argument Persuasive devices Use and range of persuasive devices to enhance the writer’s position and persuade the reader Vocabulary Range & precision of contextually appropriate language choices Cohesion Control of multiple threads and relationships across the text, achieved through the use of referring words, ellipsis, text connectives, substitutions and word associations Paragraphing Segmenting of text into paragraphs that assists reader to follow line of argument Sentence structure Production of grammatically correct, structurally sound and meaningful sentences Punctuation Use of correct and appropriate punctuation to aid reading of text Spelling Accuracy of spelling and the difficulty of words used

7 The language of persuasive texts
Emotive words and phrases Present tense Specialised vocabulary Use of conjunctions First person Action verbs Facts and opinions Persuasive devices Vocab – have chn read and write on range of topics. Good general knowledge helps

8 Persuasive devices Repetition of words or phrases
Exaggeration or hyperbole Questions that appeal to reader Stereotypes Quotes from authorities A call for action Posing of problem and suggestion of solution An appeal to the reader Rhetorical questions It’s a known fact… Groups of three

9 Non fiction texts – print and multi media
NAPLAN asks for specialised vocabulary which requires research which you can’t do in timed test, so… Read alouds Shared reading Non fiction texts – print and multi media Encourage discussion and accountable talk Don’t accept yes/no responses – children should justify their responses

10 Teaching strategies Modelled writing Shared writing Guided writing
Interactive writing Independent writing Shared reading and discussion of a variety of texts – use exemplars and other texts Explicitly teach planning

11 Teaching Persuasive Texts: Mini lessons
Choose your entry point following baseline assessment Reading and language conventions mini lessons summary – over 10 session 2010 Marking guide – spelling list p NarrativeMarkingGuide_web.pdf Writing mini lessons – 5 ½ weeks of sessions 2011\NAPLAN writing mini lessons.docx

12 Factors for writing a timed text
Writing stamina Writing process is compacted, but still need to work through cycle No time for research

13 Assessing Use the marking guide to assess writing
Modified marking guide rubric developed by Penny Krilis NMR Literacy Coach and Jan Smith from Glenroy College 2011\Marking Guide in Table.doc VELS and NAPLAN 2011\Writing_Conversion2.xls 2011\Years3-9VELSMappingFinal.doc Remember to photocopy writing task before you send it off

14 Use a variety of resources
Go for something that polarises opinions Newspaper articles News clips Picture books Big books Video clips – You Tube, Fuse Persuasive Texts DVD

15 Teacher resources VCAA website – units of work for grades 3, 5, 7, 9 Teachit.co.uk website

16 Literature and digital texts
My Brother Dan’s Delicious The True Story of the Three Little Pigs Should There Be Zoos? Charlotte’s Web Miniscules animated series Earrings Romeo and Juliet Holes

17 Baseline assessment Give students a topic to write on
Time limit as per NAPLAN Encourage them to plan, write, proofread, revise and edit Assess against criteria Make teaching decisions for whole group mini lessons and small group guided writing

18 Writing a persuasive text
Do teachers deserve a 50% pay increase? You have 15 minutes to persuade your reader to your point of view. Assess with partner against criteria. What do you need to work on…


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